Atticus VS $$UPREME
 

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mic check, im in and writin

ok 25 minute spit... i drop complete

nigga long time ago/
u should have mastered this as a child/
$$upreme may have/
money clips but I'm certified at 'Winsor psycho filed'/
my 'language-brang-guages'/
to the point where my words leave 'flame-inprints-in-pages'/
its 'time' to 'victomize'
that $ 'sign' he been 'runnin-wit-for-ages'/
I'mma 'change-chains' for multiple hits/
like perfect 'framed fate'/
leavin 'spit-stains' on his shirt from 'sustained-hit-rate'/
im top tier ridin fame to heavens gate/
no wonder why this nigga-wanna-hate'/
Will I try or will I die?/
$$upreme's question makes his 'mind fry'/
money or glory is it my time?/
watch me rise every rhyme/
hell nah not when big att in the 'lime-light'/

w/e

whenever u ready my nigga

oh hell nah ...when i said take your time i aint mean take a break nigga man Y u leave write ur verse i wanna get this ova wit nigga my battle threads gonna accumilate... shit...

$$upreme remember u challenged me....where u at? nigga Y u hidin?

check.... check...
I WAS GONE 4 A WHILE .....I'M BACK...

fuck you bitch... I wrote my verse on the 8th off rip and now u comin back on the 12th nigga? its been 5 days and u finnally sayin check. Don't even drop your shit cuz its pre-written 2 the fullest. Don't drop, im out, i still quit. and oh yea, why did you say in a PM in the exact words "YOU GOT ME FUCKED UP" and aint post shit? Don't drop if it aint off the wig

Next Time You Want 2 Battle Make Some Sense ........
Your Shit Was Horrible...........



No More Mr. Nice Guy Time To For Mass Destruction//
Atticus Is So Slow He Had To Ask Cprogress For Battle Instructions//

If You Had A Orgasm Before You Drop You Still Couldn't Cum Hard//
You Must Think Your In Jail They Way Your Surrounded By Big Bars//

This Aint 4th Of July But Your Bout To Witness Fireworks On Your Computer Screen//
You Better Get Some Shades I Bring More Heat Then Sun Beams//

At Least Pay-your-respects I Don't Freestyle For Free//
It's Like You Want To Give Oral Sex Cuz Your Always Bowing On Your Knees//

You Must Think I'm From St.louis, The Way I Go On Lyrical Ram-pages//
You Couldn't Step On $$upreme If You Had My Name Painted On Floors While Performin On Stages// .........
Uppin 4 Votes

The Kid Is Back

Quit Yo Crying......
Ask Anybody On This Bitch ....
I Havent Been On Since That Day........
And I Always Go On At Least Once A Day.........

w/e bitch it took u 5 days to write that shit from the 8th to the 12th, face it u might as well be disqualified.

Upin 4 Votes......................
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If you vote for my battles..then i'll return a favor

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

supreme had more punches then the other guy so i vote=supreme

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Uppin 4 Votes...
That R Well Explained,..........

holy shit whats up with these stupid votes learn to give some real feedback

the low down:

atticus: i didnt feel your verse at all it was an ok one but you jumped around way to much i didnt notice any real crazy personals or nothing so this wont get my vote. you broke your flow to many times it was wack. ive read some of your battles before and i know that u can flow a shit laod better than that

$$upreme: you spit a verse that was on fire u came at atticus hard and for that i give you my props good verse and keep the flow and structure tight

return the favor

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118868

Flow - $

Vocab- Atticus

Creativity- $

Punches- Even

Atticus, this is the best i seen you in a battle, you just got a lil' more work to do. You need to work on your flow still.

$- it was a decent battle, I think your punches could have been harder.

overall- $

this was a nice battle,both spittaz flow waz on point.yall structure was readable and overal im juzt feelin both yall shytz.this is how imma break it down.
Structure:Tie..both of yall came good wit it
Punches:$$umpreme...just by one punch that caught my eye
Multis:Att...u had some good wuns in here
Vocab:Att juzt had some ill words up in derr
Creativity:Att...not by much,but chea he got this
Opener:Att
Closer:$$upreme
Overall Vote: Like i said this was a good battle emcees...but my vote gotta go to Atticus..for da fact of his multis and his vocab.

Nice nice battle playas...i look ta see a collaboration of yall on da same shyt..kuz yall both got potensial and skills that i like ta see and i would like ta see an audio...utha then that....GOOD SHYT and BIG UPS to both emcees

PUNCHZ: $$upreme.. you had more punchz, not all of them was tite but it was still good enought.. Atticus did more boastin, an he lost me at times in his verse..

STRUCTURE: Both.. ya'll both had good structure.. it was readable

MULTIS: None.. I diden't really see any good multis from either of ya'll

PERSONALS: $$upreme.. you came harder more disses.. Atticus's verse sounded more like a open mic type of flow.. an you cant post a open mic flow on a battle..

CREATIVITY: Atticus..got this on lock.. his flow was more original, I already seen some of $$upremes bars used before..

so this was a close battle basicly.. as you can see ^^.. but i think $$upreme berly got it because he just came harder an more personal..

vote=$$

flow: ssupreme
styel: atticus
punches; supreme
best line:
At Least Pay-your-respects I Don't Freestyle For Free//
It's Like You Want To Give Oral Sex Cuz Your Always Bowing On Your Knees//
over all supreme gets my vote it was a good battle but i have yto say supreme