Shadows edge vs Phat mic
 

10-20 lines
house rules
keep it legal
shadow spits first
and drop 20 min after check in

aight i'm checkin in, good luck phatty :) ... time to roll

yo shadow can u hit this battle up please.....
quickpunch vs marvolous i'll hit this up after uve both posted...thanks

yo if i see you wrighting shit like that in the wrong place, i'll make shure ur banded. ya dig?

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat
This win ain’t even gonna be impressive
Cuz I bet I could win 50 successive
One time for each point of your IQ
Bitch don’t cry to momma, even she don’t like you
Each verse stinging like killer b’s
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s
My lyrical alphabet bring ya to your knees
Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics
each verse brings closer the end of this disgrace
stop thinking you in interplanetary space
just cuz you run out of o2, trying to comprehend
what don’t you understand bitch, this is your end.

ok heres my verse

lyrical lick dez nuts faget ass shadow edge
the neerest u get to pussy is estreledge
i'll take the light and leave you in shadow
knowlade has left you, and std's were bestowed
i'll win 50 times but only once go toe-to-toe
homie im a GI Joe, a fighting man from head-to-toe
you say you fucked my mom that is cinda funny to me
but ain't you the one that said she had stds?
u got recycled lines that are repetative like a marquee
go on the internet and go on a rap shoping spree
but i can deal with ur bittin to a tolorable degree
no raps, just words rhyming in a matter of speach
just a 20 line sentence that yells "My shits oblique!"

ahaha.. good job feeding all your shit off my rhyme and still sucking ass. learn how to spell. yo everyone vote on this thing.

ok noo hatin so read carefully

shadow-better punches...flow was decent(work on it),multies and structure was very good and creative...

Phat mic-punches wasnt hott,flow was very good,structure was ight,multies u tried but sounded they same...

vote-shadow...

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thats total hate vote man, why have have to do that?

Good battle fellah's

Punchs - Shadow
Personals - Shadow
Flow/Structure - Mic
Creativity - Shadow (mic don't feed of verses not very creative at all)
Multi's - Mic (he did have the better multi's)
Metah's - I felt neither had good metah's

ok Shadow ur rhyme scheme didn't flow that creat in some parts ex.

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat

^^see how u fell of at the end there

Work on yah multi's and rhyme structure other then that u had a good battle verse. Altho some of ur punchs where played i.e.

Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics

^heard it before in many diff. ways

You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s

^I think we all have heard that 1

Mic man u can't play off ppl's verse's esp. on the net doing it face to face is fine, but on the net it's just wack. I liked tho how near the end u started getting creative, and jumped off his verse, and started actually writing something ur own. Punchs, and personals where all flipped, and not hard hitting

overall my vote goes to shadow

Plz vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118478

ok another battle i need 50 posts to vote on grrrr all that time wasted for nothing

Aight shadows edge u worthy come and get some of E.Miles. show me that every one on this site ain't as horrible as I think

Yo everyone vote on my other battles as well.. no whack 50 post min that I know of:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1224680

This was a tough battle shadow had better flow, but Phat had harder punches. I gotta give it to Phat for complexity, and Shadow had a better opener. HOld on I'm a re-read these.......ya,Phat kinda fell off in the middle, while Shadow was semi-solid the whole way through.

This line killed thought, u got recycled lines that are repetative like a marquee
go on the internet and go on a rap shoping spree
but i can deal with ur bittin to a tolorable degree
no raps, just words rhyming in a matter of speach
just a 20 line sentence that yells "My shits oblique!"

So all in all I'm a give this one to Phat, tought battle, both did a great job

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Not bad....
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
?????
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat
Ohh...... it's still weak
This win ain’t even gonna be impressive
Cuz I bet I could win 50 successive
I think you mean consecutive
One time for each point of your IQ
Bitch don’t cry to momma, even she don’t like you
*yawn*
Each verse stinging like killer b’s
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Ehh...
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s
My lyrical alphabet bring ya to your knees
When will it ever end?
Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics
Where's the punch......lol punch, gin and tonic......c'mon that's funny
each verse brings closer the end of this disgrace
stop thinking you in interplanetary space
What the fuck does that even mean?
just cuz you run out of o2, trying to comprehend
what don’t you understand bitch, this is your end.
Not a bad closer......probably your best line


lyrical lick dez nuts faget ass shadow edge
the neerest u get to pussy is estreledge
What the fuck is estreledge?
i'll take the light and leave you in shadow
knowlade has left you, and std's were bestowed
Do you know what you are saying?
i'll win 50 times but only once go toe-to-toe
homie im a GI Joe, a fighting man from head-to-toe
LMFAO.........newb
you say you fucked my mom that is cinda funny to me
but ain't you the one that said she had stds?
You just ripped yourself......twice!
u got recycled lines that are repetative like a marquee
go on the internet and go on a rap shoping spree
WTF are you talking about?
but i can deal with ur bittin to a tolorable degree
no raps, just words rhyming in a matter of speach
Are you talkin about him or you?.......lol
just a 20 line sentence that yells "My shits oblique!"
An oblique is a stomach muscle

Phat Mic: I couldn't really find anything worthy of a battle in here. I know you are a newb and all but you can do better than that.

Shadows Edge: You kinda sucked too but you atleast had two good punches. My fav was.......

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat

Vote: Shadows Edge

SHADOW - Started off alright and kept it goin threw the whole spit, with a couple good punches and an alright flow.

Best Line: just cuz you run out of o2, trying to comprehend
what don’t you understand bitch, this is your end. (alright finisher)

Worst Line: Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks (hmmm....)

PHAT - pretty weak battle, but ah well.. keep at it you had an alright flow and a little bit of good punches.

Best Line: NONE

Worst Line: lyrical lick dez nuts faget ass shadow edge
the neerest u get to pussy is estreledge (didnt make sence to me)

OVERALL - I say shadow took this, wasnt a hot battle but he just came out harder.. and was better all the way threw. Had alright flow and more punches. Phat.. step up man and spit your shit more clearly so we can understand it, alrigjht flow just work on punches.

Vote - Shadow

plz hit up my battle plz, I was up 2, 4 votes now down to one.. lol explain your vote plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148

Not Bad' ... But Im Going To Have To Go With Shadows Edge' Because He Merked Phat Mic @ The End' ... Very Very Nice Closer

Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics
each verse brings closer the end of this disgrace
stop thinking you in interplanetary space
just cuz you run out of o2, trying to comprehend
what don’t you understand bitch, this is your end.

^^^ Probably The Best Punch You Had Shadows Edge .. I Really Enjoyed The Closer lol Was Funny

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lol man successive means the same as consecutive. anyway, uppin for votes.. ^^

help me realize my dream of getting a win! :P .. come on vote^

Lmfao Your A DumbA$$' Uppppppppppppin This Shit For My Boi (Shadows edge)

C'Mon People Don't Sleep On This Shit' ....

Drop Sum Votessssssss

uppin this shit again... just 2 more votes to drop phat from the mic (sorry man.. no hate, really) ^

just 2 more votes.. make my dreams come true ladies ^

uppin for the last time tonight.. if this don't count it just aint right
sleep on this shit, i give you nightmares.. i post this shit but nobody cares

^^

Yo I Give Dis To Shadowz Nice Flowz And Punch Lines// Keep Battlin And Keep Reppin

yo wtf how come one of my votes got knocked off? i had 3 legit ones? dp ain't d/r, she votes against me half the time...

Flow- Shadow
Punches- Shadow
Multis- Phat
Personals- Shadow

Nigga pretty much just sonned ya. Just was hittin' madd on point and just had it basically. Phat, flow was kinda basic, didn't seem like you really tried. Think your punches coulda been a lot harder.

Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat

When you start it like that, there ain't no turnin' back.

Vote/ Shadow's Edge

uppin ^^ drop your votes and leave a reason.. i'll hit your battle up.

wtf man i had a vote disqualified and two cats gave opinion but no poll vote... finish this shit

uppin... come on people don't sleep on this shit ^^

yo for all the people out their estraleade is a woman hormone pill. i watch tv to know this. and im upin of some pritty lame feed back from DP and country jay

uppin for the last time tonight.. just 2 more votes n i stop uppin ^^

mothatfucking uppin ^^ drop honest votes.. and whoever didn't vote in the poll get your ass back in here!

yo y'all im not going to stop upping this shit until its over... ^^

The Results
 

Good Battle, Here is my honest results:

Shadow- Great opening, That casey at bat rhyme really set the tone off and made me want to read more, very hot. You had a solid structure and your creativity was also good. Nice choice of words.

"Each verse stinging like killer b’s
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s"

That was a very hard hit. I liked how you stuck with "Letters" for your rhymes, that made that part that much hotter.

Phat- You also had some good punches. You had some multi's, but they weren't as solid as Shadow's. Make sure to go over your spelling errors, I didn't mark this against you however. Good job on reversing some of his hard hits at you, you did a good job at that. Your flow was a little shaky but you got the point out there.

Very good battle. Both of your flows were good. But it came down to you had the better punches and multi's, Shadow also has my vote for his creativity.

Vote: Shadow

Nice battle.

and I did not know you had to have 50 posts to vote, shit.

hahah.. when you get those 50 hit it back up, aight?

ok...this battle was garbage...both emcees sucked on this one.No nice punches,nor did i see any good multi's.so imma vote like this.
Punches:Shadow
Flow:Shadow
Structure:Tie
Creativity:Shadow
Opener:Shadow
CLoser:None

Shadow:ur verse was whack yo,but some how u managed ta have a better one then Phat Mic.Ya needa up ya vocab,practice sum punches in the cypher area nah mean.

Phat Mic:Ur shyt juzt plain sucked ass playa.U need work on spelling,vocab,punches and how ta rhyme.Practice in the cypher area then hopefully u'll elevate.

Overall Vote:Shadows Edge

aight ill take the vote but thats some whack feedback... wasnt *that* bad but whatever... uppin ^

ok one more vote to take me out

wo i guese this battle is still open