Young Siz Vs DisasterPeice420
 

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Far From A Racist, Your Rhymes 'Outrageously-Tasteless',/
I Know The Truth Hurts, You Cant 'Efface-This',/
Man That Exposed Your Atrocious "Feeble-Lies",/
Acting All Hard Like You Got Some Real "Hood-Ties",/
With That Tom Green Disguise, I Can See It In Your Eyes,/
When You Try To Respond, You Make Your Own Demise,/
You Cramp Your Own Style, I Don't Need Credit For That?,/
Slash Actor Slash Rapper Who Desperately Lacks?,/
The Integrity And Originality, Copying Personalities,/
Talking Bogus Sories Not Ready For My Formailty,/
Of Tearing Down The Facade That You Hold So High,/
You Couldn't Fool The 'Village Idiot' So Why Bother To Even Try?,/
To Be Something Youre Not Fool You Already Got Fingered,/
A Pussy With A Nut That Barely Fucking Lingers,/
You're Ridiculous Dog Fucker, You Belong On 'Jerry-Springer',/
The Tragic Tales Of This Dunce Bat Is Making Me Laugh,/
Im Sorry I Had To Shame Ya, When You Crossed My Path,/
Don't Be Mad At Me I Ain't Saying Nothing New,/
You're A Loser Whishing Greatness, Deep Down You Know 'Your-Threw',/
I'm Sorry Once Again I'm Sorry I 'Out-Did-You',,/

yea ........

nigga ill put the fear in ya heart like grese hitting ya face when you cooking bacon//
i could come in second and still catch fame like clay aiken//
im givin out biblical dissimisons like you forsaken//
but when i fight i gave'em more bells then ya time in school//
killin niggaz gangsta like surounding you in cement and thowin you in pool//
i got ice on neck so when i get hot i can stay in cool//
i'll hit you with 4x4's like rock in the "run-down"//
when the shots go off its best you stay down//
cuase if they hit you in the face they give funny expresions as if you were a clown//
your ryhme style borin like watchin pbs on late nights//
ill treat like flight attendant and tell you to "have a great flight"//
thanks to me your text career can end right//
with a 5-0 k.o aight//

and thats olny 13 imagine if i went 20

yea ........

nigga ill put the fear in ya heart like grese hitting ya face when you cooking bacon//
i could come in second and still catch fame like clay aiken//
im givin out biblical dissimisons like you forsaken//
but when i fight i gave'em more bells then ya time in school//
im killin niggaz gangsta like surounding you in cement and thowin you in pool//
i got ice on neck so when i get hot i can stay in cool//
i'll hit you with 4x4's like rock in the "run-down"//
when the shots go off its best you stay down//
cuase if they hit you in the face they give u a funny expresion as if you were a clown//
your ryhme style borin like watchin pbs on late nights//
ill treat like flight attendant and tell you to "have a great flight"//
thanks to me your text career can end right//
with a 5-0 k.o aight//

and thats olny 13 imagine if i went 20

my bad out it being up there twice read the second one

good work young siz and disaster peice. you cats got down. i liked both of your spits, however my vote goes for disaster peice. my decision is based on the fact that disasters verse entertained me more. both of you guys keep up the good work. i'll make sure to peep your future battles. one love.

s.v. the tyrant

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Punches: mostly even, siz had some good ones ("forsaken") but DP had a better closer.. couple misses on both sides. siz, could have had this except for lines like "i got ice on neck so when i get hot i can stay in cool"... i mean wtf who cares? this a battle, not a new p. diddy track. nice close, but it's overused.

Flow: Def DP.. siz you had some real bad lines, like the one with the clown which are just too stretched out

lyrics: Def DP, more world play, multiple lines in a line, better voac.

vote: DP420.

siz, you gotta work mostly on your technique, more vocab, better flow, stuff like that.

return the favor, vote on my battles.

UMMMMMMMMM. KEEP UP THE WORK YOUNG ISZ... V-CITY FOR LYFE VC aka shakedowm in v-city and of course my boy young siz..yall know! i cant voted some im jsut puttin in my encouragement

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Wow, you guys love that "Uppin" stuff.....But here's my vote....


Vocab:DP420..her/his vocab was better in my opinion...Siz vocab was pretty basic

Flow:The flow was pretty much equal to me....Siz's was kinda choppy in some places..but overall equal

Punches: DP420, she/he had more punches...I really liked the "Clay Aiken" line though of Siz's

Vote goes to: DP420

Thanks For The Vote Highly Appriciate Still Upppin 4 Votes' ....

C'Mon Ya'll

DisasterPiece Takes This One.She Had Nice Punches & Disses But I Give Her More Credit For The Disses.She Showed An Extensive Vocab Also.Young Siz's Verse Was Ok.Mostly Disses But Nothing To Brag About.It Did Flow But No Strength Or Complexity.Siz Came A Little Too Basic To Be Going Up Against DisasterPiece.

Vote-DisasterPiece420

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Uppiinnnnnnnn 4 Votes

lmfao goold lawd disasta is sick....im feelin dis im bout to break this down

first disasterpeice:

your nices line was:
You're Ridiculous Dog Fucker, You Belong On 'Jerry-Springer',/

that shit had me crackin up for a while...

you have sick structure and everything seemed too flow im feelin dis right here...

had alot of intelligent lyrics...you can tell you smart..i could understand what you were saying but i wouldnt put any of that in my lyrics....your punches were sickness i was shocked..but hey

young siz:
nigga ill put the fear in ya heart like grese hitting ya face when you cooking bacon//

no offense dawg..but wat the hell is that.......lmfao it will all come in good tyme..it myte iof went nice if u worded it differently

i got ice on neck so when i get hot i can stay in cool//

can someone tell me WHAT THE FUCK HE JUS SED..cuz i dunno lmfao....


overall young siz no hate dawg u did ur best i give u props for that jus do u and keep practicin

and disasterpeice i think u goin for easy wins haahah lmfao but ya u took this

opener:disasterpeice
closer:disaster
punches:disaster
meta:disaster

overall:disaster

Lol' ... Going For Easy Wins.. He Called Me Out' So I Started Up A Thread' .. But Yeah Uppppppppppin This Shit!!!!!!!!!!

And Thanks For The Vote :)

Aight

Disaster-Great use of multies and punches, adding humor along with great skill.....dope verse overall, flowed well with excellent structure from the intro to the finish.

Siz-Mediocre battle verse, spotted some forced words in there I think, I'll look over it......yeah I did...and the punches were very basic.

Punches-Disaster took this with a great deal, adding humor, props to dis for that, Disaster takes this catergory.
Multies-I didn't really spot any multies in Siz's verse, if there were any, it must've been insubstantial, anways Disaster had some multies that really stood out, Disaster takes this catergory.
Metaphors-Disaster takes this catergory hands down, just read her verse and you'll know.
Vocabulary-Again, Disaster strikes.....she had a nice amount of mediocre vocabulary words, Disaster takes this.
Flow/Structure-Sorry Siz, but again Dis took this by a mile, her flow was on point and her structure was right there.
Humor-Disaster of course, some of her lines had me cracking up!!

Disaster blew Siz away with a knockout, I'd be surprised if I got disagreed with, but Disaster took this by a landslide, keep elevating though Siz.

Vote-Disaster for her humorous punches and nice use of vocabulary.