Sten. Cell Vs. Shadows edge
 

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Due By Tomorrow Midnight

yo in the meantime you wanna vote on some of my battles, i got waaay too many open.

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lol.. ok im here, shits due by tomorrow night though.. i don't wanna start this until i close some of my other stuff.. hopefully it'll be up by tonight.

uppin for sten cell, this shit still on right? just check in and ill spit mine sometime soon.

whatever, here's my drop:

sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred
even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two
you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering
while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting
bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines

uppin for sten cell ^^ does it actually take you 48 hours to write 5 bars?

This Is Why I Waited.I Didnt Forget.Im Eatin So Ill Post Up In A Few.I Might Be A Couple Minutes Late

lol with this amount of time you better slay me ;)

Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/
X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/
Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/
Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/
Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/

My Fault I Got Caught Up In A Movie.

Really nice drop man, got real nice multis but you gotta work on your punches a bit I think.. like I gotta work on my wordplay to get where you at :thumbup:

uppin for votes people ^

My Vote
 

sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred
Nice meta, multi's, and a decent punch...good opener 9/10
even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two
Another decent punch...no multis...no personals....6/10
you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering
while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting
Nice punch...good metaphor....10/10
bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
Nice multi's and a decent punch in there...8/10
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines
Coulda closed a little better....6/10

Verse Score
39/50

Okay your verse was an overall hot spit...liked your metaphors....work on using some personals cause that will bring up your punches....Work on multis...Your elevatin alot kid...Like readin ya shit... Keep up the elevation...

Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/
Nice multi's...nice lil metaphor in there...good opener....9/10
X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/
Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/
Hot multi's and a decent punch....7/10
Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/
Werd....HOT punch...nice multi's....10/10
Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Another good punch with nice multis and a metaphor...8/10
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/
Hot closer...with nice multi's...liked it...8/10

Verse Score
42/50

Okay your verse came harder than shadows....U need to work on using personals....Your def awesome at using multis....Work on hard hitting punches...u had a couple but still work on your punches....nice battle though...

BOTH HAD AWESOME SPITS
keep elevatin cuz yall will be fuckin hot

VOTE - STEN :thumbup:

aight thanks for the good feedback man.. yeah i gotta work on multis... uppin ^^

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Before I vote, is there any number of post requirements?

Its Set To Atleast 10 Posts
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ok

Shadow- You started out ok, then got stronger as you went on. You had some good punches too, try to make them a little bit harder though.
"even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two"
That line was ill, good hit. I think you could of ended off better though, but good flow.

Stan. Cell- I was really feelin your intro:
Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/
That is a great use of wordplay right there, it flowed together very good, way to go by setting it off. What I was really liking about your verse though was your Multi's, you had lots of them and they were looking good. You had good punches, I felt that they could of been better. I think you had some alright personaly's too. Here it is, because this was a good battle:


Flow - Stan. Cell
Punches - Shadow
Personals - Tie
Multies - Stan Cell
Vocab - Stan Cell
Originality - Shadow

So after my explanation:
Vote- Stan. Cell

GOOD BATTLE!

thanks man.. nice feedback... much respect, uppin ^^

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anyone wanna battle me? i/m me on aim sn on here is tha same as on there

shadow- ya verse was good, nice meti's, nice flow
easy reader, i dig the intro, everything flows

"sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred"

from here to the end a nice drop, the end slight weaker then the intro
but still nice6/10

Sten. good punches, and alot of meti's like it all, but i believe that good
meti's should not only be powerfull but easy to read, i didnt like the flow
too much stop and go's, didnt feel it, 5/10

nice funny!!!!!
"Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails"

weak line, Weak Intro
"Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow"
this killed ya whole thing for me!!!!!

Vote: Shadows Edge

whoa shit.. already this battle about to drop to second page. upping for votes before i hit the sack ^

Wow... sten cell knows how 2 recycle lol

a few really played punches... but was moe than enuf 2 win this E-Z

Recycle?

sorry..but shadow won this one..like he said..work on your punches...

really nice drop son... really nice.

Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/

displays true emceeing skills by sten cell he used complex wordplay agaisnt shadowsedge.

bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines

this was a hot drop by shadowedges...
nice nice.. but it woudlve been better as your intro instead of your outro u need to coem teh hardest at your outro depending on your style to keep the reader fresh with the lyrics style...okay???

two good posts but i gotta give it to sten cell..
is wordplay took the battle seriously!

yea someone hit up these battles and ill returnt he faovr of veiweing and voting correctly.

This Shouldnt Even Count Since It Was Barely Explained But Its Cool

no, it shouldn't have. if you wanna dq it just pm strobe or something.

yo shadows edge better add that 5-0 loos by me to your lsit of losses dog jsut beat you beat you 5-0!

hey...shadow won this one..well he had more punch..and he had mulit's alright...so this is ta shadow..hey..

vote on these plz...

will return favors


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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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whoa shit sten cell that was a sick verse ..shadows edge im feelin ur verse too dawg nice shit..

punches:sten cell:
metaLsten
opener:sten
closer:sten
flow:sten

overall:sten

shadows edge ur verse was sick too he jus came alot harder

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this was a good battle..shadow had a decent verse wit good punches, an good flow, but it could have been better, son.

Sten...nice multies man, you had ok punches an good flow, ok vocab, but your multies won this shit hands down son.
Punches: Shadow
Multies: Sten
Vocab: Sten
structure: Sten
Personals: Sten
Vote: Sten

whoa good drops y'all shadow you had some good punches I liked the dimes line, god shit, but you need more personals an multies son, but you flowed well an had good structure an vocab

Sten...good drop, I liked who you used your multies, an good closer, need more punches, decent personals, an wordplay, solid vocab, good drop
Vote: Sten