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Nope vs. Ghost354
Rules..
No min or max just spit...(Non Negotiable) timelimit : 20 to 30 mins after checkin in(Negotiable if more time needed) Votes : No hate or Dick riding votes crews aloud (unless you disaggree) First up to mic : You (non negotiable) |
aight pimpin im checkin in i expect you do the same holla
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dis the mothafuckin check in and now a blind spit u can do wha u do
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You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career.. when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead.. my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama... dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama... ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see... that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee... But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane... what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain.. You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory... |
listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/ rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/ u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/ 1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/ got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/ wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/ flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/ come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/ like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/ dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/ yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/ wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame |
aight uppin for votes
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nice battle this should take a year and ahlaf to close this thread
explain your votez or dont vote simple and plain leave linkz an ill vote on your shit so holla |
aight nice battle uppin for votes drop links and ill return da favor peaCe
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You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career.. both of these are way overused.. i hear that same personal against ghost each battle.. the second line is also too long i think when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead.. aight.. that's my kinda punch.. pretty original my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama... dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama... already did the career thing above, but your worldplay and rhyming are pretty nice, last line kinda overused to, but still nice ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see... that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee... .. could just done "crew, i gaurantee" and the flow would have been nicer. not a great punch either But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane... aight, pretty good what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain.. You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory... "more sloppier" ... kinda a weak closer over all listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/ nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/ rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/ the opener is in like half the battles i see... second line pretty nice, 3rd has a multi but i dont care much for the punch u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ that second line has pretty bad flow, the first line is ok but you dind't really go anyway with it so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/ 1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/ pretty ok punch got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/ wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/ weak.... flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/ come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/ like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/ weak... dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/ yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/ wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame that second line is pretty nice, the other two are just weak Overall vote: Nope ... both y'all need more original stuff n work on your flow. |
^^new blacklist voter u just aint gangsta to feal my flowz u geek but fuck it uppin
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wow slow down on votin on this shit somebody might win by next year
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screw you blacklist voter... i dont care how gangsta your ass is i don't vote for people who cant rap, so grow a pair (not to mention i voted for your ass on another battle)
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i agree with S.E. theres not much flow to either spit, and the punches could be way better..... i can't see a way to call it
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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor
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Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote!
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This was obviously another newb battle.........
Nope: You obviously came to battle wit punches in every line. They were just too basic. No real thought behind them. Anyone can just rhyme words, it's the meaning behind them that really counts. You need to work on sneakin a few personals in there so people know who you are battlin. Ghost: You seemed to beef yourself up more than put Nope down. That shit doesn't work in here. No one wants to hear how good you are, we wanna hear how bad your opponent is. You also need to work a few personals into your verse. Overall this was an evenly matched newb battle. Both need to gain experience and get some good advice on how to elevate. Best attempt at a punch was........ u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ ^Not really worded right, but still was the best in the battle.... Vote: Ghost...... For ^ that...... |
open: nope
close: nope personals: nope metas: nope punches: nope multis: nope win:nope this is really a 1 sided battle everyone can see that so theres no real reason for me to explain every lil detail is there nope wins this blah blah enjyo ya win playa |
aight good lookin on the votes keep em comin drop links ill return tha favor
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a newb battle LMAO i waznt even tryin to spit and killah bow need that shit canceled
UPPIN |
Come on votes need this closed i got all the battles im allowed to have opened and i need these closed to start a battle............ drop links ill return the favor!
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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor
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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor
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^^ how iz that last vote not cancelled already bullshit vote but fuck it uppin
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Come on votes need this closed i got all the battles im allowed to have opened and i need these closed to start a battle............ drop links ill return the favor!
Dawg stop bitchin at everyfuckin thing damn after this is closed we can go again if you wnt .. just to prove that im better than you nigga ..... your call tell me if you want it....... |
Results
Nice Battle>
Nope, you had lots of punches, but try to make them a little bit better if you have a wide selection of them. You had some personals but they were a little weak. I loiked your flow a lot better and creativity. Ghost, You started off weak and your aim seemed like that you were talking about yourself, not about Nope. You had a couple of good punches and your vocab. was equal. This was a tough descion, good battle. Nope has my vote because he came right at you and had a better flow. Both need to use more personals. Vote: Nope. Return The Favor: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118732 |
nigga il murda u nope i waznt even tryin to spit u bitch ass nigga battle still open cause u dont draw no attention cause u softer then a babiez ass nigga
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so you agree to to a rematch and you better come as hard as you can so you cant say man i wsnt even tryin ...... if your down im down to make it good we can play for sdignatures if you want nigga holla back man o yeah and uppin people vote ont his shit so this kid stop beina bitch
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sdignatures? fuck iz yo ass talkin bout rite chea an im not a kid ya lil ho ass nigga get ya mind rite bitch
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o yeah and uppin people vote ont his shit so this kid stop beina bitch...... tell me if your down or not want the rematch??????
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Come on votes need this closed ......... drop links ill return the favor!.....You styll wnat that rematch when this is closed?.. i understand if you dont kuz you dont want to hurt your record nemore but if you styll want it tell me.......Drop good honest votes so this kid can see im better than him ......Drop a Link or 2 Ill return tha Favor
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Come on votes need this closed ......... drop links ill return the favor!.....You styll wnat that rematch when this is closed?.. i understand if you dont kuz you dont want to hurt your record nemore but if you styll want it tell me.......Drop good honest votes so this kid can see im better than him ......Drop a Link or 2 Ill return tha Favor
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Come on votes need this closed ......... drop links ill return the favor!.....
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nigga u lame and cant rap quit beggin for votez u did that so much u should done be dq wack ass kid nigga dont make me get my belt
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man check the polls nigga you wack everyone knows it!!!!! haha you ready for that rematch so i can get up i that ass!!!!! pussy! uppin
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My Vote
OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN.....
You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear... i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career.. Played out punch on ghost...ok vocab... when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead.. my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama... career in trauma...u basically stated that in your opener...nice punch tho... dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama... nice multi's...ok punch ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see... that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee... no punch in here..ok multi's But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane... what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain.. stretched line...boring punch...blah blah... You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory... nice closer...sorta played tho listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/ nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/ rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/ gay punch...ok flow u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ nice set up line but ur punch was wack so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/ 1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/ sigh... got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/ wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/ fallin asleep now.... flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/ come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/ nice punch... like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/ dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/ blah didnt rhyme... yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/ wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame Zzzzz... Ok vote - Nope ghost fix ya structure...werk on everything cuz u verse is a chore to read....nope werk on usin better personals...ok im out |
Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aight yo this is getting fucking ridiculous...... can someone please hit this shit up with a vote drop a link or 2 ill return tha fuckin favor LOL i need to get this closed!!!!!!!!!
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aight yo this is getting fucking ridiculous...... can someone please hit this shit up with a vote drop a link or 2 ill return tha fuckin favor LOL i need to get this closed!!!!!!!!!
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Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote! comeon 1 more vote drop a link ill return the favor wit an honest explained vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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