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The Mothafuckin Ghost vs. The Undestructible Emcee
no hate votez
crew votez DICK RYDIN VOTEZ just cause u know a nigga and he voted for u dont mean u go to hiz post and vote for him u fuckin internet warriorz linez i dont care 12-18 i guess |
ok checkity check check.....im here...lets get errr done
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My Verse
YoOo
ChEck iT GhOsT... HaHa... Look at the name of the thread, you can tell a newbie made it... Gets worse when ya read ya rhymes cause none ya shits legit... Running from me gets ya no where, like ya on a treadmill... Amountin to nothing, never gaining any piece of skill... Shit if you were a ghost, than id be feeling chills down my spine... But you dont inject fear in us emcees, thats why ur records on a decline... Look at mine, times yours by four and you wouldnt even top it!... Cant fuck wit my flow, how do you expect to stop it... Never heard of a texan rapper, come on cowboy leave rap alone... Thats why they made country, cowboys cant hold their own... Let rap be, it never was intended for the lone start state... I guess you get the drift now, jus had to be expressed by a heavy weight... :laugh: |
nice spit i just got back gimme 20 or so
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u aint no industructable emcee so shut up an be quite/
this ghostly flow leave yo win column on a diet/ come on nigga scareface from texas dont even try it/ here u get caught at the light an get a knife stuck in ya neck/ honestly yo rhymez should be on the soundtrack to shrek/ u getz no respect fuckin around wit a grown pirahna/ yo ass done fucked more male groupiez than madonna/ played wit more ballz then venus and serina/ aint even halloween dog why u dressed up like a ballarina?/ u must be the long lost member of world class wreckin crew/ man get a clue before yo dental be the only way to identify u/ and now that iz over u better pay me homige/ get all the winz u want on this site u still garbage/ |
Look at the name of the thread, you can tell a newbie made it...
Gets worse when ya read ya rhymes cause none ya shits legit... lol.... Nice opener... Running from me gets ya no where, like ya on a treadmill... Amountin to nothing, never gaining any piece of skill... Started out good but didn't hit by the end... Shit if you were a ghost, than id be feeling chills down my spine... But you dont inject fear in us emcees, thats why ur records on a decline... Nice, nice, nice.... Look at mine, times yours by four and you wouldnt even top it!... Cant fuck wit my flow, how do you expect to stop it... Not bad here either.... Never heard of a texan rapper, come on cowboy leave rap alone... Thats why they made country, cowboys cant hold their own... Another good personal... Let rap be, it never was intended for the lone start state... I guess you get the drift now, jus had to be expressed by a heavy weight... Ehh, coulda closed a bit better... u aint no industructable emcee so shut up an be quite/ this ghostly flow leave yo win column on a diet/ come on nigga scareface from texas dont even try it/ It's UNDESTRUCTABLE and QUIET.....lol... here u get caught at the light an get a knife stuck in ya neck/ honestly yo rhymez should be on the soundtrack to shrek/ Boooo..... u getz no respect fuckin around wit a grown pirahna/ yo ass done fucked more male groupiez than madonna/ Not really a good punch... played wit more ballz then venus and serina/ aint even halloween dog why u dressed up like a ballarina?/ I'm guessin you couldn't find a rhyme wit Serena? u must be the long lost member of world class wreckin crew/ man get a clue before yo dental be the only way to identify u/ Zzzzz.... and now that iz over u better pay me homige/ get all the winz u want on this site u still garbage/ You can't praise him in your closer.... Overall this battle was one sided. LI took this in every which way and form. He was hittin a personal in every line. That will almost always guarantee a victory. Ghost, you need to work on some personals, metas, wordplay, vocab, need I go on. I ain't tryin to be a dick but if no one is honest wit you, you'll never advance. Therefore, I gotta give this one to LI Vote:L.I. |
uppin for some damn votez expalin that shit 2 preciate ya
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uppin....drop a link n ill return the favor...........
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Alright Checckity Checck It lol
Check L.I. Lines: Look at the name of the thread, you can tell a newbie made it... Gets worse when ya read ya rhymes cause none ya shits legit... ^^Nice Opener, And Also Nice Punches' ...!! Shit if you were a ghost, than id be feeling chills down my spine... But you dont inject fear in us emcees, thats why ur records on a decline... ^^Once Yet Again Nice PunchLine Right There!! Your Heated!!' Let rap be, it never was intended for the lone start state... I guess you get the drift now, jus had to be expressed by a heavy weight... ^^But I Agree You Could Fixx Up On Your Closer And Come Better!! But Over All It Was A Tight Verse' .. And ALso Enjoyable!!! Ghost You Need To Evelate Kiid!!' ... But Propz On Both Be-Halvez' ... Vote: L.I. |
appreciate the feedback!!!!! uppin drop a link and ill give good feedback wit an honest vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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iight heres how it goes... L.I. was reppin me in my verse took his advice so this is how its goin to go.....
L.I. had a nice opener and some killer lines in the verse, Ghost had a nice opener and some killer lines too so this really came down to originallity. L.I. was actually punchin whereas Ghost was just throwin words together... but still i give props to both mc's vote: L.I. |
ok good lookin.......................................upppp ppppppp
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I think that L.I. 's verse was a little tough to follow
Ghost's to me had better punches, even though the rhymes were fairly simple Vote:Ghost Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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uppin......thats been reported vin-tage.... |
aight im a break it down like this...
Structure: Both were on the same structure just L.I. is more elevated than you Punches:L.I. Personals: L.I. Flow: L.I. Overall: L.I. Ghost- I juts got done a battle with you i know you can do better ... you were lackin wordplay and creativty and was too simple....Needed to be more elevated i seen better from you.... L.I. Nice verse all around was pretty nice...Keep doin ya thang playa... Vote = L.I. |
1 more vote.......................................
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yo, i think this thing was pretty tight, moreso than the other people make it out like. ghost, i thought that first punch you threw in the opener was really good... the venus/serena-ballerina was actually nice (and that shit does rhyme...) but the rest was not only kinda weak, but not creative, not real worldplay or metas or anything. if you ain't gonna punch hard at least bring something new.
li, yours had some good punches in the begining, flow was pretty ok though not spectacular, then you kinda fell off at the end with 3 bars all on the same diss, kinda stretched it too much with your last two bars and the closer was a bit weak. even with that, i give the vote to li by a bit for more creativity. hit up my battles.. |
aight.. for some reason i cant vote. kinda whack.. i think ghost blacklisted me, what a pussy bitch.
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ok thanks for the feedback.........shadows u forgot to poll ur vote...........
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see my explanation above ^^ it wont let me poll. i think ghost blacklisted me or something, he said he would on another battle.
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one more vote............holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was a close battle but I'm gonna give it to L.I. Ghost had some good punches but the wordplay was kinda newbieish. It made his shit sound weak, cause his lines were a little long. The punches would have been there but you gotta come correct if your gonna battle someone with 10 wins. Ghost may have won had he battled a newb.
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