DisasterPeice420 Vs. mcnotorious
 

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You Drop First Playa!!!!!!!!!

WTF Playa' .. You In This Or Not

ya hold on i was postin somethin else

im in


ill spit

Alright Then Don't Take All Fucking Day lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

spitin
 

you better step down, when you done with this rap...
ur the gay R.Kelly who will rape, Bow Wow in the ass...
you cant get no sex, not even from your babysitter...
just a little girl, cant beat me, probably should reconsider...
im the one and only, beat decrayer...
your flow is so bad, it skips the CD player...
using phoenix, when ou spell it for shame...
callin yourself fabolous, when your dead, nobody spellin your name...
im freestylin, to a shitty beat...
but ill fill your mind, with thoughts like a kid and MTV...
so i operations, without a license...
took your brain out, now whos open minded...
your flows are grimy, thats why your name is DISASTERpiece...
if i jump off a bridge, your dumbass would be right behind me...
so what are you gunna do, turn around, start to run...
cuz your rhymes are so bad, NUCLEAR EXPLOSION...
you could have hit the twin towers, wouldn't have made PAGE 1



damn that was retarded :shoot:

there spit back

your gunna win

my verse sucked

some time today please

uppin

come on disaster spit hurry up

Checkkkkkkkkk Checccccccccck Please?? lol!! Checkin In!!

spit

Looks Like 10Guys Aimed For Your Face & None Of 'Them-Missed', Your Face Fucked Up, Beatin Up, Looks Like 'To-Be-Assist',/
Remember Go See The Doctor If Your A$$ Pain Still 'Persists',/
Lyrically Tear Your A$$ Up, Cause You Get Knuckled Up, Fucked Up Like A Slut,/
Remember What I Said U Dyke Hoe, There Slut, Strap On The Strap On, Target ur Butt,/
I Feel Sorry For You Dude, I'd Give You SOme Face,/
Any Face Just Its Your's That I Can 'Replace',/
My Finetic Flows Be Fine Like A 'Sharp Blade',/
Your Rough Ragged Rhymes, Obviously 'Home-Made',/
Why The Fuck You Even Tryin, You Aint Landing Any Blows,/
Take All Your Hoes, Release My Shot Gun To Your Nose,/

iight iight nice

now lets get some votes

My Structure Is Kind Of Fucked Up ' .. lol!!!!!!!!!!!!' But Thanks

Upppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!

lol no prob.................UPPIN FOR VOTES DAMN IT

DIME PIECE u waz right yo structure mo fucked up then ol dudez face but u still had punchz didnt seem like much of a battle verse from u had some good personals and some ite metaphorz o hyea an ill take some of that face na mean lol



notoriuos rip off u had some good punchz but damn make all yo barz rhyme an that shit will flow better that shti fell off bad threw there but u had some good personalz az well

vote/dime piece

no hate just honest vote
return the favor an il lgive u a life savor

ThanxXx For The Honest Vote!!! :) Appriciate It Still Uppppppin This Shit!!!

that is the shitiest vote ever you bitch

who u calli na bitch u ho ass nigga wha u wanna do u nerd kinda nigga live in brooklyn tryna rap on the computer A BITCH NIGGA

notorious man, you have to work on the punches. half of them weren't punches, or were just really weak.

"im freestylin, to a shitty beat...
but ill fill your mind, with thoughts like a kid and MTV..."

wtf??

Yeah, both of you had problems with flow and structure, but DP gets it for at least having somewhat consistent punches and worldplay.

Hit up my battles.

Yeah My Structure & Flow Was Off' .. lol..!!! Couldn't Help It Though!! But Good Lookin Out Upppppppppppin 4Votes On This Shit

ok...
breakdown...
opener - neither...mc's didnt rhyme n was a horrible punch and disasters was stretched wit no flow....
flow - DP...cept for her opener erything was perfectly flowin...mc werk on linin up ur lines....
structure - mc...easier to read...
punches - DP...her punches were direct while mc's where played...werk on this mc
closer - DP...had some nice multis in it...
vote - DP
well mc ive seen better from u....keep elevatin kid cuz u got potential...werk on landing direct punches...and use better personals....
DP..easy win...love readin ya shit....nice verse
ok return the favor in my topical please!!! i want it closed...honest votes only
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118924

quit fuckin takin sides damn it, my verse was deff better structured and it actually RHYMED

w/e uppin the votes

Thanks L.I. Appriciate The Honest Vote!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Still Upppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!

C'Mon People Don't Sleep On It!!

C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Damn Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votesssss

Appriciate - Honest Votes -

What Does It Take To Get A Couple Votes Around Here On Our Verses C'Mon Ya'll Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!! And Drop Some Honest Votes!!!' ..

today please

Structure: mc was better...easier to read. DP structure...no comment

Flow:DP had the better flow but it was choppy in some places. Mc flowed to but the few unrhymed words threw it off some..Example, the first line ended with 'rap' and the second line ended with 'ass'. Total threw me off balance

Vocab: Pretty much equal...Didnt need a dictionary to read it, but yet at the same time didnt have to think to much.

Punches: Both had punches, DP's came off harder though

Overall vote: DP

Thanks For The Honest Vote I Appriciate IT!!!!!!!!!!

Upppppppppppppppppppin 4 One More Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!


C'Mon Ya'll !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!! C'Mon

DAMN!!! Drop Some Votes' .. Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


--Highly Appriciate Honest Votes- If Your Going To Be A D/R .. Then Don't Bother!

It Would Be Nice If I Could Get This Thread Closed..!!

Votes People Please

Honest Ones!!

Still Upppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!

C'Mon People Don't Sleep On It!!

yall had somethin in common:fucked up structure

cleanest line:
Looks Like 10Guys Aimed For Your Face & None Of 'Them-Missed', Your Face Fucked Up, Beatin Up, Looks Like 'To-Be-Assist',/
Remember Go See The Doctor If Your A$$ Pain Still 'Persists',/

ol dude, mon. ya needa ELAVATE, fast
muh vote goes to D