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L.E 04-10-04 11:05 PM

Limited Edition Vs. KillakB
 
A'ight...
No D/R Hate Votez
5 Barz...
You spit firs'...lil' bitch...

Killakb 04-10-04 11:28 PM

yo you make me go first,u suck my dick till i nutt just to quinch ur thirst
dick so big when i fuck ur mom her stomach burst
u wanna battle,u say ur for real,raps soft like ally mcbeal
so hears the deal stop sayin that i'm bittin off someones linez
u just jealous cause ur flows not as tight as minez
ur a satanic rapper and if i eva saw ur mom i'd slap her
just for havin u bitch,ill kick u in tha face till u start 2 twicht
say my ryhmes are elemetry, u couldn't beat me if u had a century
to right down shit,every time u kiss ur girl ur suckin my dick
cause i probabaly just got done fuckin the bitch,
and say to use 5 bars but u don't tell me what to do
talkin all that shit thats why i wanna battle u,rip ur legs apart
fuck ur mom till her pussy farts,coming straight out of va showing u we don't play

Killakb 04-10-04 11:35 PM

yo hurry and copy ur freestyles that stole ,off the papper on the computer

Killakb 04-10-04 11:53 PM

were u at?i don't have all day for u,i saw u little fake cd u made on the paint program,thats pretty dumb,ur fake

Killakb 04-10-04 11:56 PM

were did u go,does it take u that long to write the corny lines,are u scared or somethin?

L.E 04-11-04 12:43 AM

Yo...check it...

Killa...you wouldn't have such a hard life, if you were the least bit serious
Your more fake than breast implants...wit a brain, shit...just as delerious

Never heard of the place you come from...aka Culpepper, VA
You couldn't be the least bit dope...if you won 18 awards at the VMA's

I don' need to say many cuss werds...to show you my dopest shit
"Killa?"...you ain' muderous...Killakb? The "kb" stands for "kracker bitch"

But you may turn around...say that I am a Eminem wannabe like others...
But even if you were as dope as me...ain' nobody would be your brothers

This battle is finished...with the first bar I have taken you out...
The number of your wins canbe like your occupation...

...None Right Now....

L.E 04-11-04 10:36 AM

Yo, this bein' slept on...this was a sad battle, but need votez...

Uppin' 1.

GKillaz05 04-11-04 10:42 AM

Limited shit was tighter I thought, killa I just wanted to stop readin your shit you had hardly any punches and no good personals. Limited took this easy, alright battle just work on some multi's and flow killa. Votee - Limited

can you plz hit up my battle.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148 I only need 2 more votes for the win. peace.

Killah Bwoy 04-11-04 10:43 AM

shit dawg this is a very close battle but i give this one to limited edition he had better structure and better word usage...killahkb u wuld of got this if u worded shit better


LE's best line:
The number of your wins canbe like your occupation...

...None Right Now....

Killahs best line:
to right down shit,every time u kiss ur girl ur suckin my dick
cause i probabaly just got done fuckin the bitch,


punches:killa
flow:limited
meta's:limited
opener:limited
closer:limited

overall:limited

can u return the favour and give an honest vote for my battle killah bwoy vs Triple_N

Shadows edge 04-11-04 01:28 PM

yo you make me go first,u suck my dick till i nutt just to quinch ur thirst
dick so big when i fuck ur mom her stomach burst
how original
u wanna battle,u say ur for real,raps soft like ally mcbeal
so hears the deal stop sayin that i'm bittin off someones linez
how original
u just jealous cause ur flows not as tight as minez
ur a satanic rapper and if i eva saw ur mom i'd slap her
that satanic rapper diss makes no sense..
just for havin u bitch,ill kick u in tha face till u start 2 twicht
say my ryhmes are elemetry, u couldn't beat me if u had a century
ok, halfway decent
to right down shit,every time u kiss ur girl ur suckin my dick
cause i probabaly just got done fuckin the bitch,
wow how original
and say to use 5 bars but u don't tell me what to do
talkin all that shit thats why i wanna battle u,rip ur legs apart
terrible flow.. and what the fuck is "u dont tell me what to do"?
fuck ur mom till her pussy farts,coming straight out of va showing u we don't play
does this rhyme with anything?

on top of your lack of creativity, your flow was off, no multis, simple rhyme scheme.. punches that are just tired... elevate my man.

"
This battle is finished...with the first bar I have taken you out...
The number of your wins canbe like your occupation...

...None Right Now...."

now *thats* a closer.

you LE hit up my battle vs. sten cell
:thumbup:

L.E 04-11-04 02:47 PM

A'ight... bein' slept on...drop a link and I will hit your's up...

Uppin' 2.

Killakb 04-11-04 02:58 PM

i knew that i wouldn't win because u had all ur friends vote for u,ur stuff diddn't have any kind of flow or good punches,but it's all good if u say i lost cause i am going to continue battlin,battlin against u is like being tried for somethin i diddn't do,being black,and havin an all white jury against me,I'm the tried and ur boys are the white jury of course thier gonna vote me out,maybe if people would tell the truth instead of just votin for ur boy it would be more fair,but i'm not sweatin it u kracker,how am i a kracker when i'm spanish?

Oc6 The Caustic 04-11-04 03:06 PM

my vote
 
KB- Your flow was too original, start your shit off with a hard personal or multi, not a basic rhyme. You had too many "fuck your mother" "Girlfriend sucking my dick" Those are not good personly's at all. You had some aight punches in there, but I didn't feel your verse.

LE- Good opener. Your structure was good and vocab was average. You had some punches in there, they weren't the best, but they were better then KB's. Your flow was better also, you had some ok personly's in there too. Overall, I think your flow went together nicely and your creativity was good also.

Vote: LE good battle.

Return Da Favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118732

Killakb 04-11-04 03:07 PM

U ain't eva gonna defeat me or take my throne
I'm gaurdin the crown like a pit bull and his bone
ur best bet is to leave the game alone
I'll slaughter u like trojans did the people of rome
rockin ur dome,u'll neva be rappin at the asterdome
u ain't the next Eminem cause u to damn feminem
can't cary a ryhme or rap usin a synomym
but how can u call me a kracker when i ain't even white
that racsist shit will surely start a fight

Killakb 04-11-04 03:11 PM

yo i don't even listen to others response cause I know that u scared to battle me,so u figure if u tear me down that ill qiut,won't happen

Killakb 04-11-04 03:35 PM

i hate canadians,thats probably why u ain't got any flow

SPuLâ„¢ 04-12-04 02:50 PM

This wasn't the best battle, but I think Limited Edition took it. Killa, some of your stuff didn't really rhmye and the flo was thrown off wit some of the stuff you had. Your punches weren't that hard, except for the girlfriend one, that was hot. LE, this was not ur best battle. I've seen some of your stuff and it is usually awesome stuff. Your punches and personals were ok, and your flo was a little off. It was tied down to your closer, which was hot. That is what won you the match.

VOTE=LE

L.E 04-14-04 04:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Killakb
i hate canadians,thats probably why u ain't got any flow


If I ain' got any flow, then how come I just merk'd your ass? Stupid fuck...

Don' hate Canada. We'll sick our beavers on you. :nono:

Uppin' 3.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 04:41 PM

Aye Yo Check This Shit!!!!

Check Limited Edition's Lines:

Killa...you wouldn't have such a hard life, if you were the least bit serious
Your more fake than breast implants...wit a brain, shit...just as delerious

^Nice Opener' ... And A Nice Punch That Got Connected!!' Could Have Improved It A Bit' With Some Multies In There' ...!! 9/10

But you may turn around...say that I am a Eminem wannabe like others...
But even if you were as dope as me...ain' nobody would be your brothers

^Alright BarLine' .. But Wheres The Punch?? 7/10

This battle is finished...with the first bar I have taken you out...
The number of your wins canbe like your occupation...

^Weak Closer' ...!! Don't Even Rhyme!!!! 5/10

You Had An "Alright Verse" ...

Peice Of Advice To You- Work On Your PunchLines, Verse, WordPlay, Vocab, & Creativity They All Could Use Some Work' .. But Good Enough To Cast You My Vote!!!!

Vote: Limited Edition!!!


Killakb My (Advice To You) ... - - - Work On Structure, Punches, Multies, Metas, WordPlay, VOcab, Verse, Flow, Creativity, & Evelate Kiid' ...!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 04:42 PM

Return The Favor And Drop An "Honest Vote" .. In My Battle

Enygma Vs. DisasterPeice420

franchiZe 04-14-04 04:55 PM

This battle to be truthful wasn't one of tha best but i'm gonna vote.

Killakb - i gotta say that ure performance was wank ass. Sorry killa but u had no flow to ure spit, there was no structure, it was like i was readin a piece of junior school writing. Ure punches had no power behind them and i have to say they missed tha target.

Limited Edition - like u said, not tha best battle but ure performance was by far superior to killakb. I could flow with ure spit and get into tha rhythm and u threw a couple of good punches to knock killa back to wherever the fuck he came from.

Ltd Edition wins.

Now could u vote on my battles so i can get out of them and start flowin wiv some fresh talent.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119318

PEACE!!

L.E 04-15-04 03:06 PM

A'ight...this bein' slept on, lets finish this...

Uppin' 4.

$$UPREME 04-17-04 08:19 PM

Killakb You Did Good.... Structure Was Bad.....but Your Ryhmes Scheme Was O.k Hard To Understand Though.....

Le...understood All Yo Bars...yo Bars Were Kinda Of Weak .....better Then Killakb....but I Think You Thought U Had The Battle Won.....

An O.k Battle....... Big Ups 2 Both......

Flow-le
Structure-le....killa ...u Need To Make Yo Structure Better..like Le...thats An Example Of Good Structure...
Vocab- Tie..... Vote Goes To Le.........both Need To Elevate.....


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