mcnotorious vs. Yaz
 

iight dropin 10 lines minimum

no hate votes
:shoot:
you spit first

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148 can you guys both vote here.. this thread should already be over.. cuz I have had more then 5 votes but they got DQ'd now I only need 2 more so if you both hit that up I will hit your battle up for sure.. thx

eh yo, ¢hek ya 5tyle B, ya fuken wit a vet
afta im done with thyz dawg, you'll be owen a debt
look... 5paz... theirz no way u kan beat yaz
keep frontin an ima flip ya to the arti5t formaly known az
ma rhymez b like ya blood flow, ru5hin through thyz mik
5oon az i 5top, ya body will drop, loken yo life
notoriou5 flow, like biggi an pak, il 5en ya runnin
im 5traight gunnin, a gho5t, kan't 5ee me, 5o dun be fronin
their be no need for pumpin 4-4'z or roken brip trikz
kuz ma rhymez are dope, an u juz got a natrual fix

iight :shoot: here we go



Yaz wanna battle notorious, well he about to get played...
im gunna leave you missin, like michael jordans fame...
you need to check your game, cuz your flow is breakin rythym...
ima leave you with blood clots, like you gotta gang of Jamacian women...
you try to come hard, when you really just a sap...
why the fuck is you here, you cant even rap...
i got you pissin your pants, when i draw from the holster...
if this was the NBA, you'd probably be a poster...
you gettin turned to ashes, handen your mom the dust...
your rap name, sound like you just jumped off the handi bus...
the only times you wear gloves, is in the winter, so i know you dont box...
im gunna have you losin control of your limbs, like Michael J. Fox...


there uppin this shit :shoot:

damnn a lopsided victory 4 notorious u did it up
a nice way 2 start off yo battle
yaz u need 2 work a lil bit and dont type like dat wit 5 as your S it fucks eirthing up

punches-notorious
structure-notorious,
flow-notorious,
vocab-notorious,
start-notorious,
ending-yaz
overall-notorious,
winner-notorious,
vote-notorious,

uppin the votes

uppin for votes

uppin lets get some votes and finish this

eh yo lez get 5ome votez up here in thyz motha fuka, an if ya be readin my ver5e, make 5ure u atlea5t get the wordplay in their

eh yo uppin thyz 5hyt up iight, HIT THYZ UP WIT AN HONE5T VOTE

eh yo lez get 5ome votez in thyz bit¢h.... memba ta hit thyz up fair an il do my bit wit ¢horz, iight

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eh yo, hit thyz up wit an hone5t vote an drop a link

eh yo, ¢hek ya style B, ya fuken wit a vet
afta im done with thyz dawg, you'll be owen a debt
look... spaz... theirz no way u kan beat yaz
keep frontin an ima flip ya to the artist formaly known az
ma rhymez b like ya blood flow, rushin through thyz mik
soon az i stop, ya body will drop, loken yo life
notoriou5 flow, like biggi an pak, il sen ya runnin
im straight gunnin, a ghost, kan't see me, so dun be fronin
their be no need for pumpin 4-4'z or roken brip trikz
kuz ma rhymez are dope, an u juz got a natrual fix

herez ma ver5e wit no 5'z

eh yo lez get some votes in thyz... an ta the people komplainin bout ma 5'z az s's, ya win kuz iz looken wak now

eh yo lez get 5ome votez up in thyz motha fuka iight?

Ayo once again Yaz has took another battle and I wont even explain much cause he just merked the hell out of this kat man, better punches, better floe, and easier to follow, lets go, take it home Yaz, and to both of yall return the favor.

mcnotrious edged this one out by a little bit, his was easier to read, had better flow, punches, and made more sense. yaz gotta quit writing like that, but yours was tight too. no hate, peace.

iight im uppin thyz motha fuka sence people are aktualy voten latly

notorius nice verse opener didnt really rhyme to me closer coulda been better but u had some good punchs threw the battle just need to work on starting and ending your battles better overall though pretty good verse

yaz decent opener not to bad coulda been better closer was pretty sick i liked that 1 punchs were consitent and it all flowed together an was pretty original overall good verse just stop the 5z lol these kidz dont know wha u doin

vote yaz

lol sall good B,they droped now, eh yo lez get some votez up here in thyz motha fuka, fo real

um.this was a very weak battle but mctorious wins i think.he had way better flow i could actually understand which parts of his freestyle were supposed to rhyme even if sometimes they didnt rhyme.but he just was superior in my mind.the other guy has hard work to do,but hell get there.

mcnotiours killed this nucca YAZ , he came with doper punches and he came hitting and i like the structure kid shits dope i`m keep my eyes on you see if you can elevate.... aight keep wot u doing but i`m saying mc notiorious because yaz came with wack lines that did not make sense owen debt the fuck is that?
peace

Not got it with Flow/Punches nice battle Yaz elevate and get some New rhymes.

Not=7/10
Yaz=3/10