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mcnotorious vs S-killz
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notorious we already got one rapper from booklyn named that but you're wack...... the only similarity you'll have is that yall both getting killed serious, im sick but not contagious..... to bad for you how the FUCK!, you claiming west, but say you from brooklyn.... bitch you aint skilled damn you're stupid.... cant even use the tools right ............. but he fools right, but when i kick his ass it feels right i use your blood as paint when i tag.... to warn of any fag you gag when you see my name..... you iant got the right to brag ill drag your corpse around "brooklyn" ...................... if thats really where you from and show off my win...... to show your city youur pitifulness, your existence is lame, you couldnt blow up in fame ..... well unless i threw you a hand grenade, dam you're a shame |
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i guess your talkin shit, damn yo breath is stinkin... ill leave you headless, middle of the street leakin... damn your verse, is sloppy and fake... your shit aint writin, its copy and paste... my verse is hot, 360 degrees... i am clever, nobody as clever as me... look at yo name, your mom shouldn't have named you... you couldnt be at my level, if we was in the same room... so when i win, ill be rubbin it in... the only thing you win, WACKEST MC OF THE YEAR... i write my rhymes with explination marks, now listen to what you hear... your just a wacky man, from pakistan... no way you could win this battle, maybe if your name was jakie chan... you are impossible, like fat kids and back flips... after all this, ILL BE BIGGER THAN JAY-Z's LIPS... your talkin to girls, in a gay affection... your so poor, can't afford to pay attention.... badda bing playa uppin the votes :shoot: |
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Mcnotoruius...First line played like whoa, alright struc and flow but to simplistic gotta come harder from now on personals kinda lackin and punches sucked..4/10 S-Killz, tight verse alright personals lines stretched so it was hard to flow but i do the same thing, some good wordplay dissen big and shit overall you came harder than mc notourious 7/10 Vote Skillz |
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yo s-killz that was tight you owned the whole way through dog...all i've got ta say to noto is get original...i've had enough with all i'm going to kill and all shit...come on people that's weak shit.
skillz dominated in every category, the only thing was it didn't flow with perfection...it was alright but not great in that category...ya dig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
thanks for the votes
accom. your battle is already fnished, lol but upping, more votes please |
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yo ima go with the notorious one
he didnt do it in a BIG way but to me it was efficient fav line: "look at yo name, your mom shouldn't have named you... you couldnt be at my level, if we was in the same room..." both had a koo flow althogh it was a lil simplistic skillz verse was structured better and rhymed smooth but lacked gud content needed more vocab, multies, imagery and harder punches i say skillz probley has the nicer flow, but skillz does't get my vote |
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bullshit vote but wateva upping more votes please |
ok breakdown
opener - skillz..even thos it didnt rhyme...it was a harder hgitting punch... flow - mc...felt ur flow more...skilz werk on ya flow and not stretchin ya lines.. punches - skillz...fasho his hit harder...mc u need to elevate in this category... personals - skillz...u used sum hot personals....mc this category will help your punches...elevate here too... wordplay - skillz...nice job in this category... closer - skillz cuz his ish wasnt played....he also had a nice multi in it... vote - skillz mc elevate dogg...dont stick wit the elementary lines....ull get betta...no hate jus a vote return the favor in my battle wit carson...HONEST VOTES ONLY.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160 |
im going for mc yep fuck the other foo. and mc was having a little flow anyways my vote is mc
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this is turnin into a real battle
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sup ya'll any of ya'll want to battle me
i'm ready whenever u are ight |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^^vote in mine's Okay,notorious,your shit was kinda played out.Esspeccially that shit bout Jay-z;s lips.Flow was off too.U gotta get more original shit.And next time,try to add some personals.SKillz had you this time.Nice stuff SKillz/ Vote-SKIllz |
skills got this shti with hard punchs rightto the point and consitnecy stayed constetn wit hhard punchs nice drop and notoriuos you didnt bring much but a bunch of filler i didnt see really anything i liked you need to elevate alot in wordplay and harder punchs
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sk nice battle ha dominated it with flow and punches still good battle
Sk=6/10 mc=4.5/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
this was a weak battle but if i had to give it to anyone of you it would go to mcnotorious b/c his verse made more sence and it rhymed more.
vote=mcnotorious don't fotet to return the favor |
i got to give dis battle to mcnotorious because i was slightly feelin dat copy and paste line.for da rest of it is was average. for da other guy you rhymed the same words like 20 times and i dont consider dat rappin.
vote:mcnotorious |
opener - skills ur flow was off but ur punches hit alot harder
flow - mc took this skills u need 2 work on this try 2 even out ur lines a lil and that should help punches - skills nice punches u came ill mc ur were pretty played and didnt hit as hard workon creativity both personals - skills by a mile mc didnt really have any so he could ork on this closer - skills hit a lil harder mcs was nice 2 but a lil played good from both vote - skills he came harder and he had personals that hit pretty hard mc work on ur creativeness and personals |
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