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shadows edge versus accomplishment
yo check five bars
ur droppin first i'll drop prolly within five min after u no biting feeding or recycling no d.r. hate votes check in |
aight so you not leaving? or should i drop like *right now*?
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ya just drop right now i'm typin some shit down on my wordpad so i'll just drop that right after urs aigh FIVE BARS...is dat cool
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yea sure.. sorry, checking.. ill drop right now ^^
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your verse was better before your writin begun
your rhymes outdone by vanilla ice rerun 8 times you rehearse your verse and still end in the hearse i spit first, so this battle like rags to riches in reverse each time I spit it straight up triple split your lip my verse rip your hip n leave your spine clipped kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip beat the herbs but always drop against an ill matic mc makes sense, can’t spell accomplishment without a-c-c* *for anyone here who doesn’t follow college basketball, the acc teams got far but ended up crushed by uconn (my bad for taking a while.. had to take a piss :laugh:) |
uppin for accomp... thought you were gonna post right after me... ^
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Thanks for the votes. Looks like i KO'd this one, peace.
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My bad wrong Thread. I'm voting for this battle soon. (I meant to put that post in my thread)
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Whoa...ACCOMPLISHMENT STOMPIN YA'LL OUT
Ya stepped to quick to get hurt, vets like me dispurse of da rest... I merk who is left, its likeya "heart is a magnet" the way theese "bullets" hitten ya "chest"... Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic... ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../ I spit madness, while you spit wack-son, last line you seein will be a flat one... catch some lead without ya vest-on, blame it ona "wardrobe mowfuntcion" like "janet jackson".../ Fag, verse isnt noticed if you typed in bold, cuz you puttin ya "hands" around "heads", aint mean you give "choke holds"... my freestyles is "ill" off da "dome", like i gotta "head cold".../ Licken ya wounds and talkin shit, avoiden my beatin Aint-helpin-it... cuz ya be seein I.C.U. more than the fucken Alphabet... Yo sorry i was to late man i was at my g-mas gettin my grub on CLASS SIC |
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Good battle...shadow had a good verse wit decent punches and solid wordplay I liked it son... you should have made it longer in my opinion though...shadow had good vocab, an structure...it flowed well as well
Accomplish you started out kinda slow but you finished hella strong son...you had good punches an you killed wit the wordplay son...your closer closed the deal son, your structure was a little off but your flow was ok an decent vocab...but when came down to it accomplish verse was just a little stronger Vote: Accomplish Holla back y'all http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118296 |
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VOTEs i mean ...................votes
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Upp yo uppp yo upppp
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tight battle
accomplishment had a tight ass battle verse good punchs and tight ass metaphors waz fealin a bunch of them and that shit flowed well together best lines Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic... ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../ shadows edge had a nice verse 2 was kinda shaky in parts but where it waz good made up had solid punchz and more and tight personals liked those best lines kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip vote accomplishment hit my shit up with an honest vote |
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ok heres the lowdown
this was one of the tightest battles ive ever seen on rb both of ur punches hit both of u had great wordplay the flow and structure of the ryhmes were matched up but my vote goes to shadows edge i just felt that his verse hit a little harder it had a good opener and a good closer the only thing that u gotta work on is stop trying to ryhme with the same thing any monkey can do that. there is a time and a place for that and its called grade school. but anyways awsome battle and good job shadows edge Vote: shadows edge return the favor with an honest vote hit up Mike12ikeda versus Diablo-vice |
aight *cough* *Cough* uppin for votes
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ok all the herb battles get 5 votes and this gets none. upin ^^
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uuuuuuuuuuuupin for votes up in hurr
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votes man..................COME ON PEOPLE WILL RETURN DA FAVE DROPPA LINK
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umm nice battle....
STRUCTURE-shadow PUNCHLINES-accomp WORDPLAY-..accomp PERSONALS-umm nun ENJOYED-accomplishment...no hate on shadow but i aint feel da way ya bars was ryhmin dunn... MY VOTE-ACCOMPLISHMENT RETURN DA FAVOR NIGGAZ 4 REAL WHERE EVA U SEE MY BATTLE AT VOTE |
Upppppppppppppppppp for votes accom up 3-1 shits hard to watch like medusa
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yo votes people chomon
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Alright No 'Bull-Shit' ... Im Going To Give This Shit ! To Accomp For The Fact That His' .. Punches Hit Harder & Connected If That!!' ..
Checck These Lines For Good Punchlines & A Good Opener: Ya stepped to quick to get hurt, vets like me dispurse of da rest... I merk who is left, its likeya "heart is a magnet" the way theese "bullets" hitten ya "chest"... Fag, verse isnt noticed if you typed in bold, cuz you puttin ya "hands" around "heads", aint mean you give "choke holds"... my freestyles is "ill" off da "dome", like i gotta "head cold".../ ^Nice Use Of Multies! & Good WordPlay' ....!!! Licken ya wounds and talkin shit, avoiden my beatin Aint-helpin-it... cuz ya be seein I.C.U. more than the fucken Alphabet... ^ I Like The Closer!! Nice Shit' ... Playa..!! I Enjoyed Your Verse But You Need To Work On Your Structure & Flow!!!! Shadows edge!! : You Need To Work On Your WordPlay & Vocab Vote: Accomplishment!! (Well explained Vote) |
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this one goes to accomplishments it was hot.... aight and this is as follows
accomp showed his ass off... especially liked this line.... Ya verse is racket, get mad at it, stopped and leave ya body wrapped in plastic... ya oblivious fuck a casket, i leave ya body on ya front porch, inya easter basket.../ accomp. flow 8/10 style 8/10 rhythm 8/10 vocab 9/10 punches 7/10 therefore it's 40/50 here is the line i liked from shadowsedge kick this *ass* out of *classic*, leave it with the same empty clic as the sound of your whack crew firing guns with empty clip...that tookok some thinking hot line shadow here is shadowsedge flow 5/10 style 7/10 rhythm 7/10 vocab 6/10 punches 5/10 30/50 my vote is for accomplishments |
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