Looch vs realistdoggy11
 

10-15 linez
no crew votes all i ask

checkin in u do the same an ill spit

yo im hear spit

ok check it

u claim to be the realist but wont even shoot the breeze/
its like im allergic to bitches when u around i be ready to sneeze/
i just wanna hand u a beatin that last a century/
so bad that it be in russel simmonz next documentary/
make me go undefeated for a year like a 1972 dolphin/
like the first murder in a scary movie its about to begin/
they say a man is made by what he goes threw/
better hope its true after this u gonna have to rebuild from mildue/
and please dont make me paralel park my gun in your throat/
the visual of it make u change the picture like a remote/
leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/
punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/

ok here

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/
just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/
cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/
lyin from the cealing dead and straped wit a note/
i made u suck my dick then i cut out ur throat/
while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/
ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/
ripin E looch is a uncontrollable addiction/
i'll nail u 2 a cross like jesuses crusafiction/
ur lines were predictable they messed wit my health/
i just ripped u so copy,print,and put it on ur shelf/

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i liked relistdoggys shit better u both had good flows but when it came to the punches i like doggys more, i liked both intros they was hot but for the rest doggy won it...1 return da favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118359

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Flow: Both flowed about the same to me....so i'll say its tie in this department

Vocab: Both had punches....realists' hit a little harder though. Neither had many multis, if any at all

Originality: Both original....

Structure: The structure was pretty equal....damn near the same

Overall Vote: Realistdoggy11....Mainly because his punches were harder

get some vet votes on this uppin

realistdoggy11 had some hard punches and came strong...


E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

nice opener ^^^^^^^^

Elooch had some hard hits and everything but overall realistdoggy had the better structure and better overall flow...


Vote: realistdoggy11

ok uppin for some people that arent 13 and know punchlines to vote

No Bull-Shit' .. Both Verses Succked A$$' .. But Let Me Hit This Shit Up With An Honest Vote!!!

Check Doggy's Lines:

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

^An Alright Punch & Very Nice Opener!!! 9/10

while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/
ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/

^A Weak Punch' .. But An Alright Multie In There!!!

Vote: Doggy'

damn these people are idiots on this site shit should be called hip hop and r&b battles

looch had a gangsta ass verse doggy shit was garbage an he slightly fed off what looch did i ait even votin no mo just puttin in my 2 fuckin centz looch u go to a diferent board an that shit rip him an many wayz stay up

just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/
cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

ooooooo this 2 lines killed it. doggy had some nice punches and opener
good verse yo

8/10

looch - iight verse. finisher was weak as shit tho
your opener was you best line

leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/
punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/

vote - doggy

This was an alright battle I guess, gotta give it to doggy tho for a better flow and better punches. Work on your flow and rymes Looch and you will get better.. alright battle ... vote goes to dogg

return the fav - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115

they were both aight, but i gotta give it to elooch....his shit was more complex...he had rhymes that were funny...although both verses didn't flow that well....ya dig

e-looch- weak battle

flow - that was OK, not much too say though
punches - i didnt c much either, you can tell a tale including him(but that dont mean its a punch)
metis - there was some nothing to say
personals - none
all and all there is nothing to say bout your battle, you held back and wrote a verse of filler........no offence kid but dont be surprized if you dont get 1 vote..1/10
not trying to be harsh.............just honest

RealistDoggy - nice opening, nice everything.......a tad weak

flow - consistant
punches - there was one good one(quote)
"while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/
ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade"
personals - not any thing worth bragging about
metis - again both of you came very weak

This right here is not right man.....honestly you should think twice when say shit like that...............i can garentee that this will not help your battle score, or howmuch friends you have..........not tryna be a prick just think it's very imature....so just drop it(quote)
"ripin E looch is a uncontrollable addiction/
i'll nail u 2 a cross like jesuses crusafiction"
all and all 4/10

vote: RealistDoggy11