Looch vs A.K.A.
 

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do dick ride votes or crew votes

where is the freestyle??????????????????????????????

u coulda looked at my registered date an seen i wasnt a newb/
leave shit leakin out ya head like flat that cant be fixed by jiffy lube/
u must be aka or alias the bitch made cocksuckin coward/
askin to see my private partz like a gay version of howard/(stern) <get it
this like i mob meatin dog be queit while the don speakin/
or ya freakin head will look like the mississippi leakin/
leavin u brain dead wit blank stare like u in a trance/
pistol in my pantz watchin this gay niggaz av breakdance/
punchlinez rushin u so hard u left wit a concushun/
u only 14 wha ya mom gonna do when she see u on here cussin/
so fuck u youngsta i consider u lame/
like a vegas tiger bitch i consider u taim/
but if u wanna flip ill put 4 threw u wit no hesitation/
so give up rap go get a minumum wage accupation/
even if i gave u a mac 10 u couldnt get in the gangsta nation/< get it

yo you only got ten posts so i got the rite to call you a newb//
your style is harder to figue out than a rubics cube//
i'm surprised that you new how to set up this battle//
don't even try, you ain't using a mic you using a rattle//
oh no i cuss go and tattle//
but i think that you should be aware//
cause my punches will make you piss you girly uderware//
you should a newb that you cant even set up avatar//
sorry kid but you got to rise abone the bar//
i'm spitting you out like you were tar//
you dissed my name what with e looch//
sorry pussy ass newb your still a pooch//
and i got to say your style is lame and i think i'll take you out the game//
i just reach in and take the ak out of my name//

lol damn u str8 feed off my verse but shit uppin for votes

i did with what two bar come on now what ever uppin for votes. plus your ass when off of my shit like name avatar and shit what with that.

oh man aka schooled u u guys both were straight though.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^^ wtf hell naw kinda vote is that

uppin this shit ill return the favor

no if you vot like that then that a dickridin vote not allowed

breakdown for Looch:

flow: alittle choppy in spots but for the most part alright 6/10

volcab:good use better then average 7/10

punches:my fav,"askin to see my private partz like a gay version of howard" most of them were alright some played topics and alittle too much talking about your self 6/10

overall:19/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for A.K.A.

flow:striaght forward basic but it worked i guess 6/10

volcab:pretty basic could use some work here 5/10

punches:nice punches mostly played ideas but i still laughed at most of them my fav. "your style is harder to figue out than a rubics cube//" nice personal 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--looch edged this out it was close though

fool u and streetsweeepa voted for each other u bot dickriderz
and return the favor meanz ill vote o nthe fucki nbattle u nerd not im automatically votin for them

i think aka won because he had better punchlines and better flow this time i give it to aka


Still inadequately explained
-Cprogress

Lol im sick of seein these whack ass voters in every post.....anyways

This battle was whack! Nuffin made me say "Damn!" But honestly,E gets my vote.So heres my explanation.
Punches:E
Vocab:E...lol even tho u misspelled a couple words but i knew what u was tryna say.
Creativity:E..his shyt was just better by long
Structure:Tie...Yal both had ya barz typed where i kan read good
Flow:E...shyt stayed on track da whole time..AkA u fell off a couple times
Opener:Aka...the rubics cube line was good
Closer:E..."so give up rap go get a minumum wage accupation/
even if i gave u a mac 10 u couldnt get in the gangsta nation/"...dat was da best line in this battle
Overall Vote: E Looch!

uppin this shit

UPPIN this weak battle lol just get it off the boards

^ like i said just vote and get it off the boards

Vote=Looch by a hair...for explenations iam tired vote an honest on me-vs-phat mic

peace

^^ um UPPIN

Dq that last vote it was only a sentence and it was not explained well.

he didnt even poll anyways nobody votin on this

UPPIN

yo looch could you vote on the battle me VS PhatMic

aiight this battle was ass one of the worst i have seen no punches no wordplay no structure no flow...i dont even know who to give ma vote to...looch man i know u better than this and i aint ever seen aka battle but i hope he comes harder than this..im gonna have to give this to e looch...his verse just presented itself better to me a.k.a u didnt come hard at all u had a nice opener and a ok closer but the rest of the verse was filler so u lost..

vote : e looch

~1~

vote on my battle against disasterpieces420 please

yea i droped down to his level lmao just vote an end it get it off this site

damn vote on this get it off the boards

u coulda looked at my registered date an seen i wasnt a newb/
leave shit leakin out ya head like flat that cant be fixed by jiffy lube/
Nice Opener 6\10
u must be aka or alias the bitch made cocksuckin coward/
askin to see my private partz like a gay version of howard/(stern) <get it
I Like The Flow On This 8\10
this like i mob meatin dog be queit while the don speakin/
or ya freakin head will look like the mississippi leakin/
First Line I DIdnt Get But Second Was Alright....4\10
leavin u brain dead wit blank stare like u in a trance/
pistol in my pantz watchin this gay niggaz av breakdance/
Nice Dude Nice Flow Multis 8\10
punchlinez rushin u so hard u left wit a concushun/
u only 14 wha ya mom gonna do when she see u on here cussin/
Alright Line Not The Best 5\10
so fuck u youngsta i consider u lame/
like a vegas tiger bitch i consider u taim/
???????......0\10
but if u wanna flip ill put 4 threw u wit no hesitation/
so give up rap go get a minumum wage accupation/
even if i gave u a mac 10 u couldnt get in the gangsta nation/< get it
Best Line\s Yet Alright Line 9\10
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yo you only got ten posts so i got the rite to call you a newb//
your style is harder to figue out than a rubics cube//
Nice Metahpor 7.10
i'm surprised that you new how to set up this battle//
don't even try, you ain't using a mic you using a rattle//
oh no i cuss go and tattle//
BOOOOOOOOOO!!! 3.10
but i think that you should be aware//
cause my punches will make you piss you girly uderware//
Not Good At All 2.10
you should a newb that you cant even set up avatar//
sorry kid but you got to rise abone the bar//
i'm spitting you out like you were tar//
What....3.10
you dissed my name what with e looch//
sorry pussy ass newb your still a pooch//
OMFGOSH DUDE 0.10
and i got to say your style is lame and i think i'll take you out the game//
i just reach in and take the ak out of my name//
Best Line Yet....6\10

As You Can See Points Go To Elooch

alright 2 votes left to get this weak battle of the boards do us all a favor an vote

UPPIN

^^

Uppin

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

yo I'll come with a honest vote if you hit this battle up

dont freepost that shit in here unless u votin bitch

UPPIN to get this weak shit off the board

N offense A.K.A shit was all garbo not saying I can talk :shocked:

its all about structure,and flow, and looch had better flow in my eyes vote goes to looch no dbout.. :thumbup:

You ya'll take a vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676 no hat votes meaning you A.K.A

come on 1 vote left close this battle up

This was kinda weak battle... Looch had some ok punches, coulda been better, decent vocab, solid flow, good structure, no wordplay, some personals though, overall solid verse
A.K.A....that was an ok verse, ya punches were weak, bad structure, ok vocab, no personals, no wordplay, you need to elevate but no disrespect intended son
Vote: E Looch