streetsweepa vs. dirtboy69
 

10 line max
post by tomorrow night
no bullshit or dick riding

ok whos goin first? cuz im ready i guess ill go then

yo i vote for y'all if y'all vote on this battle it's A.K.A. vs. e looch and be real. i repay the favor both ways. holla back son

my verse:

yeah i know your eager to loss so i'm gonna post up right now//
run up on your with a knife swinging wildly like i had mad cow//
son's sweeping the streets thinking that he's got dirt covered//
but you got it backwards fucker cause dirt's got you smothered//
slice off your left ear lobe to watch you bleed like a flooding river//
line up my shot using an axe looking at your neck about to sever//
i got this win unless you really are a gay prositute posing as a rapper//
pulling some hacker shit getting into the site and with the poll tamper//
those two ideas you better look into cause other wise your void of votees//
miss spelling your words kinda like william hung hitting all them wrong keys//

mah quick shit hurry and show

you call your self dirtyboy sixty-nine//
but with my lyirical vocabulary ill crush your spine//
yea im a lyrical crook//
and this battle is the first win in my never ending book//
m not trying to be profain//
but rappin agaisnt me u might as well consider your self slain//
now your gonna feel the pain//
yea street sweepa thats my name//
pimpin is my game//
and after this battle trust me you wont be the same-//

quickest battle i've had on this board in ages lets get some votes on this

ok honest vote
dirtyboy had a good battle verse had some good punchs and a couple of tight personals good structure just needed some more metaphors
best lines
son's sweeping the streets thinking that he's got dirt covered//
but you got it backwards fucker cause dirt's got you smothered//

streetsweepa that didnt really look like battle verse u talked about your self bout as much as u put him down bout the only thing u had goin well was multies just elavate a lil bit
best lines
m not trying to be profain//
but rappin agaisnt me u might as well consider your self slain//
vote dirty

vote on my shit

yea lets get some votes that was a fast battle vote

punches-streetsweepa
flow-streetsweepa
personals-noone
overall-streetsweepa
best line - you call your self dirtyboy sixty-nine//
but with my lyirical vocabulary ill crush your spine//

not 2 good of a battle
dirt-u was ite
punches-6/10
vocab-5/10
structure-7/10
flow-5/10
overall-6/10

street
punches-6/10
vocab-6/10
structure-6/10
flow-6/10
overall/6.1/10

alright then 2-1for him lets get some more votes up in here

uppin this come on now leave links i'll vote on them

Dirt boy had better puches and personals...um hey street...that verse wuz too much selfglorification and not enuff punches you feel
guys ya'll can spit betta than that..this battle wus weak
VOTE -the boy who needs a shower

ok ok two to two is gonna be close it was weak i could do better than that

Vocab: Equal

Structure: Equal

Flow:Equal

Punches: Dirtyboy had more punches

Overall Vote: Dirtyboy

i got to give this one to dirtboy 69 ... cuz streesweepa was more into glorfiying himself.. i thought this was a batlle.. not glorification????? anywayz... dirtboy needs work but streetsweepa is ugly rappin is not for you... u had shrot abrs you ahd a long bar then a short abr. thats is not structure.. inconsistent and just rhythmless... i give this to dirtboy......

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118718

yo vote them battles return the favor!

thanks for the votes checkin your threads now uppin for the last vote!!!

ill get you next time dirty im gettin better and fuck you vc or whatever your name is bitch sayin rappin aint for me thats a bunch of bullshit your a fucking faggot

This was not a good battle but...dirtboy did have a decent verse, he had some punches an some mates, good flow, an ok opener, but the biggest thing of all is that it was an actual battle verse.
Street, I don't know what you were doing but you weren't battling, you jus posted a weak verse about yourself...you had no punches, no personals, no metas, all you had was a halfway decent flow, that was horrible.
Vote: Dirtboy