ThaYoungin vs. Phat Mic
 

u'll spit first brotha because you've challenged..so your a-spittin furst

and crew votes are allowed..as long as they are not b/s or d/r votes

and we'll use discression on the votes..if both me and you think the vote is b/s we'll contact Strobe ya kno...
hey baby boy PM me if you cool wit this
and i'm being mellow so there's no beef babi..jus 2 people spiitin like always
and i'm not high or stoned...jus mellow
check in and spit and i'll spit back that day...hee hee...
i'm sleepy as hell so i'm out..and your spittin in 3rd and 4th period if i'm correct...it sux u gotta go to skool 2morrow cuz i don't..hee hee
well that's tha rules

ok im late but hy teacher was being a hoe and wouldn't let me drop so i got a sub in 5th and 6th. i'lll definintly drop then

ok here it is

You are "youngin" on rb but in the street ur "the toung star"
You may be thinkin im new but my spits are bizzar
its rb, this isnt nashville star so go back to texas
spit bricks in ur chast, leave you breathless and deffencless
your raps are the same there is no difference
the amout of this shit im cumin with is immense
your words and rhymes have to rap ant any expence
wile mine take offence, defence, and breck your mental sense
start losing to some newbs and that is really low slumin
lubricate and masterbate thats the only way ur comein'

alrite checkity check

niggaz is crazy to fuck wit one of tha best
in otha wurd mess wit Young and git leaks from ya chest

Phat mic been wantin me to battle..so i accept
man ur death is unavoidable..check tha hole's depth

leavin gunshot wounds to this sucka mc
if ya mic fat then i'm sic cuz it look skinny to me

ya rymes hold no portions they really lackin tha ill
i'm a fuckin god and like jesus i'll devour u as if u wuz my last meal

ya mic is turned off cuz nobody wanna hear tha mess
my rymes are infectious they git in ya body and infest

so i killed this wanna b..his rymes cudn't hold
ya debts to me cud neva b bought,paid,or sold

lil kwik keystyle fa ya

its done son so vote on this first then i'll drop a honest vote on yours

aight cool...see if you got time to vote on these 3 after i vote on yours..thanks homie

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118940

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119091

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118946

aight honestly...i think both of you could of done better....but everybody slacks from time to time....here is my vote...i think Yopungstar got it and this is why...phat mic, you tried usin multies...and it didn't work, your rhymes didn't make sense...you had one line i liked alot and that was..."spit bricks in ur chast, leave you breathless and deffencless"

youngstar had a few good lines..but one that stood out...that was...."if ya mic fat then i'm sic cuz it look skinny to me" that was a dope personal....you both had a couple of personals...but over all i just liked youngstars verse better...much love and respect to both emcees tho

ahemmmmm
UPPPPPINNNNNN
good battle son
no dis wit tha son
UPPPPPPPINNNNN

YoungStar* - Good spt man, not your best.. but it was still ill, wit some good punches and multi's.

Best Line - ya rymes hold no portions they really lackin tha ill
i'm a fuckin god and like jesus i'll devour u as if u wuz my last meal

Worst Line - Phat mic been wantin me to battle..so i accept
man ur death is unavoidable..check tha hole's depth

Phat Mic - Alright spit from you also, had some punches and an alright flow.

Best Line - its rb, this isnt nashville star so go back to texas
spit bricks in ur chast, leave you breathless and deffencless

Worst Line - You are "youngin" on rb but in the street ur "the toung star"
You may be thinkin im new but my spits are bizzar

OVERALL - I gotta give this to young becuz he brought it harder and his flow was better. Phat work on the punches and the flow and you will get better.

RETURN THE FAV wit the battle wit me and baller. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115

VOTE - Young

hey bro thanx but ima gurl
i jus thought u should kno for future reference

i was feelin phat mic's
so overall i think phat mic should win so my vote is for phat mic
vote=phat mic

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

^ hate vote.

But anyways, I'm not going to poll vote, because i know people will call me a d/r... or p/r whichever you prefer. But i would have to say, Though you verse was lackin, Youngin took it. Phat, work on ya shit, You have potential to be good... You just need a lot of work. Youngin came weak, But Phat had the worse line. The tounge star and bizzare shit...ew. But anyways, both ya'll elevate and come with heat next time. Lookin for a rematch maybe?..

hey phat mic ima PM strobe bout that one by gunit cuz that ain't wuz good..so yeahi don't think you'll have a problem with that

naw i told him it dont count and if he wants it to he will have to elaborate

both put up average performances that cud have been betta

they both had a couple of original lines and both had good flow and structure.
i agree with wildfire, phat mic the multies didn't work 4 u but youngstar, i din't like the jesus spit cuz tha second part dragged on.
Some average punches from both of you and in my opinion i wud say that tha battle was even.

I'm leanin more towards phat mic cuz he put up a good challenge and he is a newb
youngstar was gud but from an experienced playa like that i'd expect betta

Congrats Phat Mic, u get my vote!!
Take the time to vote on my battles after i vote on this one
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

yo i gotta give this to phat mic although it was close
i think he came harder nad had better word choice
both of there punches were nothing special and pretty dry
however i feal phat mic used better vocab, transitions, and personals.
so 4 raw lyrics i side with PM and his closer helped me make my mind

"start losing to some newbs and that is really low slumin
lubricate and masterbate thats the only way ur comein' "

call it how i c it

yo phat mic i'on kno but wut ya think bout Franchize's vote-
he basically voted for you because your a newb...when i was there no one showed pity for me cuz i was a newb..what ya think

Flow-phat
Vocab-phat
Structure-tie...
I Wasn't Feelin Neither 1's....both Kinda Of Basic......work On Flow And Punchlines And Youll Be Good.......

Hate 2 This But The Best Mc Was Phat Mic.......

y'all both could have done betta...
 

vocabulary: Phat Mic
punches: Young Star
structure: ties up
overall flow: Phat Mic

y'all could have did that betta... I got to give it to Phat Mic. Young Star*, i respect the fact that u a gurl but if a nigga try to bring it to ya, ya gotta drop him hard. Cuz y'all both had some weak lines but who doesn't... This was too close, Young Star battle me some time aight? Y'all get at me...
Just Lovely

My vote is... Phat Mic

phat mic -"lubricate and masterbate thats the only way ur comein'"
^^^This was ur best line.Get more like these.

"its rb, this isnt nashville star so go back to texas"
^first offf,you did not rhmye it.bizzare&defenseless does not rhyme with it.\
So come on now,you can do better.



Young-
yamic is turned off cuz nobody wanna hear tha mess
my rymes are infectious they git in ya body and infest
^^^This was ur best line

ya rymes hold no portions they really lackin tha ill
i'm a fuckin god and like jesus i'll devour u as if u wuz my last meal
^good punch line,but did not rhyme.meal&ill does not rhmye.It was good,but you should have rhymed it.

Flow would have to go to Phat Mic.Although he did not rhyme a few words as well......Young's mess up caused a nice punchline to sound messed up.

Vote-Phat MIc.