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DirtBoy69 04-12-04 08:43 AM

restricted vs. young duke
 
deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Restricted 04-12-04 02:41 PM




.::Checkity Check::.

Good Luck Duke..

(No Disrespect, Just Business)

~R~

Yung Duke 04-12-04 09:07 PM

Fa sho'. It's only right that the Championship is between two members of the hottest crew on the site. Also Check

DirtBoy69 04-14-04 09:00 AM

hey don't know if it'll happen on everyone's computer but young duke your sig, doesn't let me sroll all the way to the bottom of the page, also the championship match is next week win this if you still wanna be in it

Restricted 04-14-04 03:42 PM

How Come It Says Dirtboy Posted Reply....But It Stops At Yung Dukes Last Post??

~R~

Yung Duke 04-14-04 08:42 PM

Yea I though it only fucked up mine. cause even that poke shit had fucked up on my computer, but it was ok to everybody else

Restricted 04-14-04 09:59 PM

This is Week 5.....This Is When THe Champion Is Supposed To Be Decided...WTF??!?

~R~

DirtBoy69 04-15-04 08:53 AM

this is week four next week is the championship

Restricted 04-15-04 08:57 AM



Aight Aight..Well When Are The Records Gone Be Updated...I Should Be 16-0...Since I Beat Lyrical MC Last Week..

~R~

.::Dropping At Sum Point Today::.

DirtBoy69 04-15-04 05:38 PM

i don't know i sent the win loss stuff to the admin on monday i guess he hasn't done it yet hopfully soon

Yung Duke 04-15-04 07:18 PM

aight nigga, it's about time for ya record to get fucked,
I need to start throwin punches so hard, you cant get up,
Ya record talks for itself, so i know better than to start testin you,
But it takes a real nigga like me to bring out and beat the best in you,
I'll beat you like a runaway slave, trust me, you dont know me,
I'll tie ya up, start whoopin ya ass, and tell ya that ya name's Toby,
My intellect is higher than yours, it's like I'm the road runner and you're Wiley,
Once you see a loss on ya record, I'll turn ya face into a frown from smiley,
This shit should be in sacred scriptures, cause I'm re wtittin the Ten Commandments,
Thy shall not win this battle, and Duke shall be the last man standin,
See so far you're the king, but i'm here to rob you of ya riches,
The only way you bringin a new era into the game is if you entered it rockin a fitted,
See you use 20 dollar words and they vote for you cause it sounds ingenius to them,
Well it wont work cause Duke's here and I'm restricting you from gettin a win,

Restricted 04-15-04 08:33 PM



.::Aight..Check It!::.

.::Lyrical Battle ChampionShip Round 4::.

Check It...Yung Duke, Re$Tricted...

Check It...3....2....1.... :gfy:

Your Worst Mistake Was Actually Posting A Verse In Dis Thread,
Shoulda Forfitted This Match, You Could've Had Your Dignity, Instead../
You Posted Up Your Wack Verse, Full Of Mis-Directional Assumptions,
Want A Hunch Kid? Include Sum Metaphors and Multis Like Packed-Punches/
I'll Make Ya A Post-It, Sticky The Thread So You Don't Misplace It,
I'll Give Ya Another Shot, Just Type A New Verse, The Old One, Erase It/
I Guess It Doesn't Matter, Cause By The Time You Typed Two Bars,
Re$tricted Would Blow This Kid Away, Like An Intergalactic Star/
Acting Hard? Well Atleast You Did Recognize I Am The Champion,
Your Best Spit? Shoulda Typed "Me Betting Re$tricted? It Can't Be Done/
Sorry Son, I Know Your Yung and Your Dukes Are Still Fresh and Soft,
Maybe That's Why Your Punches Aren't Felt and You've Seemed To Feel Off/
This Ain't Go Fish, And Son Nothing I Possess In My Hands You Can Match,
You Smelling Pussy? Prolly Cause Your Nose Is So Far Up Your Snatch/
Watch Me Lyrically Tranquilize This Cat, A Year From Now Still In Shock,
Tick'N Tock, Your 15 Minutes Of Fame Has Passed, Please Remove This Cock/
As Soon As They Read Your Third Bar They'll Contest What They've Heard,
That Was The Weakest Punch I've Ever Seen, Why Am I Battling A Herb?/
This Kid Needs Escorted Of Stage, He's Too Yung To Be Unsupervised,
Just Commit Suicide, Your Not A Thug, Only Time You'll Have To Choose Do-or-Die/

~R~


Adebisi 04-15-04 11:53 PM

LMAO...

I posted our little "battle" on 3 neutral sites....

You lost 37-0

LMAO @ this site

Enygma 04-16-04 08:43 AM

I liked yung duke's verse cause it had some originality to it, but you kept on sayin how good he was in your verse. That will give you a loss everytime. Restricted came a bit harder just because of Duke glorifyin him. ~R~ did kinda feed though......... I gotta give thi one to ~R~ though........ He just came harder the whole time. I would have voted for Duke if he didn't keep on sayin how good ~R~ was...........

Vote - ~R~

DirtBoy69 04-16-04 09:05 AM

uppin this over every other thread one of only two that had both show up

Shadows edge 04-16-04 09:59 AM

I'm with enygma. Duke.. I know he's good man, but don't pay him respect in your verse. Nothing good with using his record, getting a punch in about his first loss or something, but it seemed like half your verse was just how good he was. You gotta come straight with the punches, and I just saw very few. I've seen you drop better verses. Restricted had good punches, certainly not the best I've seen but good enough to take this.

Shadows edge 04-16-04 10:22 AM

hey man.. didn't realize there were no crew votes.. but these guys are both in my crew, so does it still count?... my bad.

DirtBoy69 04-16-04 01:30 PM

breakdown for young duke:

flow:good flow no off spots this was solid 8/10

volcab:nice nothing special but difenatly not basic 7/10

punches:some good lines not quite what i'd of tried to do in that size of battle best line,My intellect is higher than yours, it's like I'm the road runner and you're Wiley" i laughed 8/10

overall:23/30 one of the best verses of the week probably

breakdown for restrcited:

flow:slick flow working well this week 8/10

volcab:good use as always you got the best in the league thus far 8/10

punches:not much this week really i was expecting more from you my fav,"Re$tricted Would Blow This Kid Away, Like An Intergalactic Star/" aside from that nothing real great 6/10

overall:22/30

vote--i gotta give this to young duke, one hell of a match though

Restricted 04-16-04 04:22 PM

Aight Check It....

.::Re$tricted=2 and Yung Duke=0::.

~R~

Yung Duke 04-16-04 07:38 PM

ok thats restricted 2 Duke 1. I fell ya'll when ya'll said i was glorifyin him but everyone know he is argiably the best on the site. I'm Just sayin he could be Pac for all I care. but i did hammer on it for too long

Concrete 04-17-04 11:01 AM

Re$tricted-Ill verse, outstanding punches, nice vocabulary, and metaphors, great verse.

Young Duke-Good verse, liked the smiley line,but you DID state how good he was TOO MUCH, and you forced some words in there, like that toby line.

Punches-Restricted, he had nice punches, couldn't really see any diss duke threw.
Multies-To be honest, I didn't really see any in both verses.
Metaphors-Restricted, he just had more.
Vocabulary-Restricted again, he used big words and everything.
Flow/Structure-Restricted, his verse was like all in line and easy to read.


vote-Restricted, his verse was just all out better

streetsweepa 04-17-04 09:38 PM

breakdown forduke:
rymes8/10
flow 6/10
punches4?/10
you need to elevate your capable of way better
your best line:This shit should be in sacred scriptures, cause I'm re wtittin the Ten Commandments,
Thy shall not win this battle, and Duke shall be the last man standin,
restricted:
rymes:9/10
style: 9/10
punches 8/10
your best line:Your Worst Mistake Was Actually Posting A Verse In Dis Thread,
Shoulda Forfitted This Match, You Could've Had Your Dignity, Instead../

streetsweepa 04-17-04 09:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
breakdown forduke:
rymes8/10
flow 6/10
punches4?/10
you need to elevate your capable of way better
your best line:This shit should be in sacred scriptures, cause I'm re wtittin the Ten Commandments,
Thy shall not win this battle, and Duke shall be the last man standin,
restricted:
rymes:9/10
style: 9/10
punches 8/10
your best line:Your Worst Mistake Was Actually Posting A Verse In Dis Thread,
Shoulda Forfitted This Match, You Could've Had Your Dignity, Instead../

my vote goes to retricted

DirtBoy69 04-19-04 07:57 AM

4-1 restricted wins


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