G-Rattle Vs Young Renegade
 

Ez Dogg,

Letz roll,

No D/R
10 linez min

U Spit 1'st man

ayo, im the renegade,im standin here in my b-boy stand/
u the rattle? oh u a baby, nowonder u pissin in ya pants/
i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/
and My dick stay in ya girls mouth all the time like her teeth/
And the heat will have ya corny ass sweatin liek keith/
Ayo im a real gangsta ill throw ya body in the luandry hamper/
U just a lil kid still crawlin around in pampers/
fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/

ah fuck first line sound be " im the renegade, standin here in my b-boy stance"

Battle
 

Nice...

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse
2 buy a plot o land, stand in it luk around,
itz where u gonna b...dead and fuckin found

This shit your sayin in your text, u sure itz at your best?
I swear this little fucker sitting there in a pink vest
cuz u c he likes 2 use wordz like Gay, an Kidz
probly spanks hiz dad with fat-ass fuckin dustbin lidz
this keith guy your gay lover? u sure like 2 talk
U probly bend him over an fuckin shove in ya stalk

Yo man, giv my spade back, im very nearly dun
Peace out bro, my ryhmes thru, itz time 2 get the gun
Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it

cuz renegade why u ever think you'd win this battle
It'll teach u next time not 2 mess with da G-Rattle

uh keith is keith sweat, get it the heat will make u sweat like keith...aight llets get some votes

Letz get theze Votez Rollin now we both said our piece

Dude, how u sposed 2 get Keith sweat outta dat?
No offence dogg, but it waz kinda shit

make u sweat like keith...idk y u dont get it, i mean dudes name is keith sweat

Im Going To Have To Give This To!! Young Renegade!! lol.. Dude Took This Battle! Off Hand

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse

^But What The Fuck Is Up With These 3Lines'!! I Mean C'Mon' ... 0/10

this keith guy your gay lover? u sure like 2 talk
U probly bend him over an fuckin shove in ya stalk

^Good Punchline!!' ... 9/10

Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it

cuz renegade why u ever think you'd win this battle
It'll teach u next time not 2 mess with da G-Rattle

^ A Weak Closer!! But Got You The Win' ..!! 8/10

An Alright Verse OverAll Im Going To Have To Say

Now Check Young Renegade's Lines:

ayo, im the renegade,im standin here in my b-boy stand/
u the rattle? oh u a baby, nowonder u pissin in ya pants/

^ A Very Weak Opener Could Have Improved On That Shit 7/10

i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/

^ A Very Hot Line And Also Good Punch!! 10/10

Ayo im a real gangsta ill throw ya body in the luandry hamper/
U just a lil kid still crawlin around in pampers/

^Fairly Good!!! But Just O.K For Me!! 7/10

fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/

^Funny Closer!! It Was Aight' ... 9/10


How It Goes Down..!!! ' ' ' G-Rattle Evelate Kiid' ...!! And You Will Improve EveryBody Starts Off At A "Level" And EveryBody Could Work On Something!! That They Can Improve On!!!

But Ya'll Had Nice Structure & A Nice Flow!! I Will Give You That!!!

Good Battle On Both Sides!!

Vote: Young Renegade!!

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Ez,
I gotta admit wen i read da start, It'z kinda shitty, openerz need work

anyway Cheerz Dogg,

Upin 4 Votez :slick:

Adds 2 pennys.....

G-rattle...

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse
^^^^
?????<---- nuff said

Yo man, giv my spade back, im very nearly dun
Peace out bro, my ryhmes thru, itz time 2 get the gun
Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it
^^^^
ok i dont really know what ure doing but it aint battlin....

and how u didnt know who keith sweat is i dunno...

G-rattle, ya verse is lackin Venom, u need alot of work on battlin full stop...

Renegade...

i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/
^^^
lol, ma fave punchline of the battle...

fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/
^^^
I think that was a sick finisher..props...

so....
my vote goes for renegade, simply cuz his verse was better overall, punches were nicer, flow was a lil off but came out better than rattles...

Ayo Young Ren you doing your thing kid keep battling your killing um. i got that sweat line but it was ok not great but better then his ryhmes. but y you take out Next level in your sig. you still one of us boy?

Wow Young got it b/c he has nice flow and better structure Rattle that was sad but its obvious who won.

Young=6/10
Rattle=3/10

G-Rattle i give you my vote b/c the other guys verse was wack as hell. yours could have been better but all in all you had a better verse. your punchez could have been but but overall nice verse.

vote=G-Rattle

This battle was a dissappointing one idk what you guys think ur rapping about but do what u got to do renegade one this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Young you came pretty good especially over G rattle. Rattle not that your verse was weak it wasn't but his punches came to hard for ya. Nice flow from both of ya, and the punches were pretty good all around, but cause Young's punches were more creative and origional I give it to him.