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DirtBoy69 04-12-04 04:25 PM

realistdoggy11 vs. Dirtboy69
 
no dick riding bull shit votes votes must be explained!!!

10 line max.

first to five votes

and since you want me to post first i'll post now

this kid's a rapping dog? yet he claim's to be the realist?//
got you beat already 69 to 11 check the thread title to this//
pm'ing random people hoping you get one with soft fists//
but i be killing you and all your punches are a big miss//
your momma's gotta be a bitch if your really a doggy//
a hoe too and your girls stomach and tits be saggy//
if you can pull yourself away and get to typing here//
i still got nothing to worry bout cause your ridden with fear//
so pretend like this thread is like a infected mucus smear//
and just don't post ran away and just stay clear//

waiting on you

realistdoggy11 04-12-04 04:50 PM

rappin aint your thing so quit while ur ahead/
but u were never ahead so ur offically dead/
bitch u were rattled when u came into this battle/
ill smack ur bitch ass from ontario to seattle/(cause hes from ontario)
dirtyboy ur punchlines are numb like novacaine/
u beatin me is like a crimple tryin to dance on soul train/
my flow is hot but urs is dispicable/
look i dont think u got the right principles/
every line on urs was damn near predictable/


ooooooooooooooooooo lets get some votes

DirtBoy69 04-12-04 09:21 PM

uppin this for votes now both verses up lets get some votes in this bitch

DirtBoy69 04-12-04 09:43 PM

k come on now up and up lets get some votes !!!! leave links for you stuff too

DirtBoy69 04-13-04 11:12 AM

so yeah i think that i might be in need of some votes on this battle

Diagnose 04-13-04 08:00 PM

well..both of u guys were the same...u both lacked vocab...and multi's which u should use..

vote = realist

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

DirtBoy69 04-14-04 09:18 AM

uppin for some real votes explain them and leave links i'll vote honest on your battle

DirtBoy69 04-14-04 03:00 PM

come on now don't be sleeping i vote, now vote for my shit!!!!

franchiZe 04-14-04 03:16 PM

Both were equally good each demonstrating some serious skills.
The raps were a bit short and some parts lacking originality.
Realist showed some average punches with a couple of good hard hooks whilst dirtyboy was mainly throwin up soft jabs.
Both had good flow and good structure but they could both use a little more vocab.

Based on punches, flow and originality i'm gonna have to say realist is the big dog in this face off.

Vote on my battles to homeys

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293

DirtBoy69 04-14-04 07:39 PM

1-0 for doggy upping this more some more votes lets end this battle already

DirtBoy69 04-15-04 09:12 AM

damn it would you all just stop with the fucking sleepin on my shit fucking kids pming me all the damn time asking me to vote i do everytime too where are you though win i got a battle to finish????

DirtBoy69 04-15-04 06:19 PM

still looking for votes up in this fucking thead come on

Big'N 04-15-04 10:16 PM

Both started out really well then both kinda fell off. DirtyBoy69 I think got him with the~~ yet he claim's to be the realist?// got you beat already 69 to 11 check the thread title to this// Realistdoggy it wasn't that you were bad just maybe a little to simple. Vocab was o.k. you just need to be more complex when you flow. Actually both could work on the same.

Vote=DirtyBoy69

DirtBoy69 04-16-04 09:55 AM

cool upping for some more votes to finish this off leave links !!!!!

DirtBoy69 04-17-04 10:32 PM

uppin this stop with the fucking sleeping you so bad vote now blah blah blah

Shadows edge 04-18-04 12:09 AM

Hey vote on one of my battles and I will return an honest vote with good feedback, just drop a link.

Triple_N 04-19-04 08:20 PM

This was a weak battle...you both need to elevate in every cateogory, dirt your verse was decent, you had ok punches most rememberable 69 to 11 line, that was about it, no multies, or wordplay, could have had better vocab, overall not bad
Real...your's was about the same as dirt's only think is you didn't have one line worth mentioning an thats why you lost in my opinion, work on everything both of you, good battle, one
Vote: Dirt

S@ndM@n 04-19-04 08:44 PM

Realist urz was short but stragight 2 the point
Dirtyboy ur shit did not rhy E.Xyour momma's gotta be a bitch if your really a doggy//
a hoe too and your girls stomach and tits be saggy//

Vote Realist

DirtBoy69 04-20-04 10:09 AM

uppin this stop with the fucking sleeping you so bad vote now blah blah blah

realistdoggy11 04-20-04 07:17 PM

I had more multis and better flow and my rhymes actually rymed thease people dont no what there talking about.

DirtBoy69 04-20-04 08:59 PM

uppin this stop with the fucking sleeping you so bad vote now blah blah blah

E Looch 05-01-04 10:03 PM

Both started out really well then both kinda fell off. DirtyBoy69 I think got him with the~~ yet he claim's to be the realist?// got you beat already 69 to 11 check the thread title to this// Realistdoggy it wasn't that you were bad just maybe a little to simple. Vocab was o.k. you just need to be more complex when you flow. Actually both could work on the same.


dirty boy easily got this kid that verse was samll and no punchs in it lmao weak shit

BoRn2SpiTT 05-01-04 10:08 PM

Dirt boy really gets the vote because he stayed consistant throught whole rap... the other guy seemed to slip a couple of times.. both of u can still elevate.. vote=dirt

ReLiC 05-02-04 02:20 AM

Wow that was a joke Dirt killed him all around better verse.

Dirt=6/10
Real=3.4/10


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