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Carsonjet -v- JPoll
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Normal Rules.... I drop first....He does 30 minutes after |
yup, true that i'm waiting on you...wow 36 and 10 against a rook...haha...we'll see how it goes dog...good luck boston
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thanks for setting it up...i've never done it...ya dig...thanks
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JPoll, Scar'd from birth now u spitin wit no net'worth...
for what it's worth...you aint the first, 38 came before your merk.... Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse' aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst... Cus you's a tourists here, I mean dawg look at you... What u call the streets...I call 5th Avenue... It's simple arithmatic, 5-0 poll no J cus I simply ripped da bitch... An I lay low wit plastic hips..Merked by my best minus 4/5ths.... I know's ya style, your probly gonna wanna speak bout all ya guns... which ones? I kno...every cracker's dream of holdin Ak's an 8 plus 1's... ya dun.... bitch...lol.... |
Yo here it is
alright yo…. I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles, I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle, I’m a high speed roadster that’s too fast for sight, You’re just a toaster set on light, This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend, It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen, You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna, If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure, Maybe back when there turned into thurr, Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga, Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah. It’s ova |
nice verse buddy...good luck man...it should be exciting to see what people think about the two.
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Im Going To Have To Give This One To CarsonJet
No BullShit Check Carson's Lines: JPoll, Scar'd from birth now u spitin wit no net'worth... for what it's worth...you aint the first, 38 came before your merk.... ^ Nice Punches And Great Opener!!! :) - - Good Use Of Multies Also 10/10 Check These Lines For Punchlines: Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse' aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst... ^^Once Again Nice Punchline' 8/10 I know's ya style, your probly gonna wanna speak bout all ya guns... which ones? I kno...every cracker's dream of holdin Ak's an 8 plus 1's... ^And An Alright Closer To Finish It Off!!! .... 7/10 Vote: CarsonJet!! Return The Favor And Hit Up My Battles With "HONEST VOTES" ... Enygma Vs. DisasterPeice420 & Mcnotorious Vs. DisasterPeice420 |
yo dog... how about you give some comments to both people...i had tons of multi's too....commone dog a little bit more effort than that....by your comments it didn't even sound like you read my shit
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aight....Jpoll i really liked a couple of your lines...but i wasn't feelin the rest of them, when you had good punches, they were real good...but the resyt was kinda weak...no disrespect...thats just my oppinion...your structure was good tho...neither of you had many metas....but Jpoll you had some multies...so did carson, your verse was good jpoll..but i was feelin the complexity of carsons more..my vote goes to carson....much love and respect to both emcees
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yo...drop links....I'll hit em up...I aint fishing for battles....-1
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rule number 1..... shut the fuck up an take your ass whoopin..... you aint the first.... you aint the last.... Just be happy im rusty as fuck....an stop complaining |
thanks wildfire...hey what lines didn't you like dog? Just wondering for next time... thanks for the critizism dog
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whatever kid, you came like you are all hardcore and i came real...my shit was way smarter than yours...you came weak...
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people should start looking for how smart lines are...
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and shut the fuck up boston...you're weak just like benzino
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Alright JPoll!!!!!!!! I'll Hit You Up With Some FeedBack On Your Verse & Yes I Did Read It' lol Was A Bit Whack & Dis-Organized!! But Let Me Break It Down To You!!
Check JPoll's Lines: I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles, I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle, ^^Alright Multies! Wheres The Punch? Not A Good Opener!! 4/10 This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend, It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen ^^Alright There Is A Decent Bar & A Good Punch!! Nice, Playa 8/10 You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna, If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, ^^Im Saying WTF?? 2/10 Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure, Maybe back when there turned into thurr, ^^Shit Went Off Line There Fixx It Up 2/10 Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga, Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah. ^^A Good Closer' Better Then Most Of Your Lines..!! But Yet Again Wheres The "Punch" ....!! 6/10 I Thought You Could Have Done Alot Better!!!! Work On Your Skills' .. EveryBody Has Something That They Can Get Better At.. I Wasnt Feeling Your Flow Though!!' .. So I Had To Give It To CarsonJet!!!!! ... I Mean You Had A Nice Structure But Something Went Wrong In Your Verse!!!!' ..... Evelate Kiid!!! ... There Is My Advice To You!!' .. SInce You Were Looking Forward To It!!! ... (No Disrespect) You Had Some Clean Lines In Your Verse' . But Not Many!! |
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your down 2-0...... |
okay let me explain the punch is he's be like botswana cause they were rated the worst country to live in the world...saying he's wack
second his shit we wrong when there turned to thurr cause that's when rap got wack with all that nelly and ja and chingy bull shit third the punch at the end was tight,,, saying all the kids boo him...like saying boo with the other meaning at halloween...do you get what i'm saying...think about shit people write when he's just talking simple shit...no my game is elevated |
Uppppppppppppppppin This Shit For My Boi's
CarsonJet & JPoll Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' ... |
My Vote
ok ok bar by bar breadkown...
JPoll, Scar'd from birth now u spitin wit no net'worth... for what it's worth...you aint the first, 38 came before your merk.... Nice opener...hot multi's...good little punch...9/10 Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse' aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst... Another hot bar with nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...also nice meta..9/10 Cus you's a tourists here, I mean dawg look at you... What u call the streets...I call 5th Avenue... Nice punch....7/10 It's simple arithmatic, 5-0 poll no J cus I simply ripped da bitch... An I lay low wit plastic hips..Merked by my best minus 4/5ths.... Nice personal...hard hitting punch...nice multi's...10/10 I know's ya style, your probly gonna wanna speak bout all ya guns... which ones? I kno...every cracker's dream of holdin Ak's an 8 plus 1's... Nice closer...hard hitting punch...9/10 Score... 44/50 Ok carson...not really much advice needed...all i suggest is using more personals....nice spit...enjoyed it....keep droppin.... I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles, I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle, Ok...u had some multis..boring punches though..5/10 I’m a high speed roadster that’s too fast for sight, You’re just a toaster set on light, Ehh toaster...boring punch...plus flow was off on that...4/10 This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend, It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen, ok punch...nice multi's...6/10 You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna, If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, boring punches...3/10 Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure, Maybe back when there turned into thurr, Ehh doesnt really make sense...2/10 Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga, Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah. Ok decent punch...nice closer...7/10 Score... 27/50 ok...first off work on using personals....ur pretty straight in the multi category...werk on direct punches....personals will help with getting direct punches....stick wit people on ya own level....keep elevatin kid...ull get better Vote - Carson return the favor in my topical with violatin-to-va....crew votes r allowed... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118924 by the way im not gonna poll my vote on here until i figure out if crew votes r allowed in this battle.....are they?? |
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nobody cares....... dont write lines that arent self explanatory....you suck anyways... nobody knows the worste rated country off the top of there head... so you pre=wrote...which makes sense cus u didnt have one personal.... so u made me spit first....and dropped a copy an paste.... see what happens when u keep complainin? shit gets deeper.... keep opening your mouth....-pc-1 |
It Just Says "Normal Rules" So I Would Guess Crew Votes Are Allowed
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whatever all the guys are probably in your "crew"
weak shit...hey and get some education and you'll things like that kid |
crew votes should never be allowed that's weak...it's totally biased...how about we get some one in here with more than a gr 9 education to vote
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Lmfao' .. Im "NOT" Even In Carson's Crew DumbA$$' ....
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uppin for votes..please no crew votes...............yadig.... and think about the verses
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uppin for votes everyone....
............. :nono: ......... do it do it |
uppin vote on this you guys...shits decent ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I would honestly give this one to JPoll. it was funny and creative. i actually laughed out loud for some of his lines. like when he said if people were countries Carson would be botswana. that was classic. and the closer was good. how he rhymed its ova with the last 2 lines. not hatin on the vet, but i have to gove this one to the rook. maybe carson better step his game up. especially since he has a battle with the Blaze.
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Jpoll: i'm not voting, i respect if you dont want crew votes. its like this though.. i see where your coming from.. im a white boy, i have an education, im in college, etc
but this isn't fucking english class, its not poetry open mic night. its a battle.. supposed to pack witty, punch hits in little sentences, not fucking prosaic epics. get it? |
uppin 3-0.....
I dont speak for my bars....they do the job themselves.... |
simply a total merking here...ok....so you guys know...carson got this....id hate to explain but damn...whateva....
Flow=both...no need to explain Multis=both...both had ok..now stfu Punches-carson...well lets see...he actually made more sense on bars here... personals...carson...this is not the best ive seen but most were here for carson.. complex=both....no hate... ok there done...u know the breakdown...ok guys hit up my audio battles please...there being slept on... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118772 <---vs Regicide http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118886 <---vs T West |
prophet?
welcome bak...... uppin |
why didn't that guy who voted for actually put it on the poll? wtf?
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put it on the poll juss blaze...thanks though man....i thought for a quick second that my humor wasn't cought by these guys...good to see someone gets this stuff
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uppin............................................. .....................//./././//.//. :gfy:
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uppin for votes//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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damn carson u aient have 2 beat this dudess ass like dat ahahahahahahahahahah
check it out poll u gotta do more than creativity u gotta put shit where niggaz kno wat u talkin bout not If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, wtf is dat now jet u put 1 up homie Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse' aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst... now jpoll dats ^^^^ a motha fuckin hit line hahahahaha punches-jet flow-both structure-both vocab-jet start-jet end-jet winner-clear its jet |
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