KKbug vs. -untitled-
 

RULES:
1. house rules
2. no crew votes
3. no a** ridin
4. verse due by tuesday
5. i'll drop 1st inless you want to drop now

if god gave out skill you waz never it/
i look at your punchlines but they never really hit/
i'll try to take it easy so you won't lose your mind/
jus' to make sure you won't fall behind/
f*ck this race/
i can't stand your face/
it makes me wonder if your in the right place/
your ryhms sound so gay/
i bet your mama ashamed of how she live wit you everyday/
you say your an emcee/
god i try to make it easy as a.b.c./
you don't seem to see/
that you'll never be/
what it takes to be me/

fuck this nigga, you cant even spit//
you think your a killa, your justa piece o shit//
i really dunno why you prefer 'ASSES' than 'clit'//
maybe your mama was born without one, instead she was born with a 'dick'//
if thats your best line, it proves the fact your wack//
if i was your boss bug, you would of gottn the 'sack'//
i doubt it though if you even get a job fool//
your lines dont make any sense, it wouldnt surprise me if you droppd high school//
bug you should have a better punchline//
fuck 'punches', il 'shoot' you on 'frontline'//
it dont matter if its winter, spring, autumm or summer//
your just another road kill for my kkbug-killa-hummer//
and another thing 'muthafucker'//
i would rhym to that, but ive made my point earlier//
get that mic outta yer hand, your just a looser without a career//
fuck fear//
i think its obvious who has won here//

KKBug jus tore ur azz up BIATCH

constructive critisisms please. if you think im wack, pm you fuck and lets dance. :gfy:

dis 1 was a lopsided victory even doe both of u need 2 elavate
but kbugg u need alot of work.....u didnt have no punches no wordplay,structure was bout the only thing u had

best line-if god gave out skill you waz never it/
i look at your punchlines but they never really hit/
^^ best line and dat get a 3/10 so yo verse wasnt on point

worsteline-your ryhms sound so gay/
i bet your mama ashamed of how she live wit you everyday/
^^ played out momma jokes not goin cut it pimp,gay jokes been ova wit...

untitled-yo verse want consitant eitha u had like 1 punchline the whole time lil bit vocab alright structure needs work overall

best line- really dunno why you prefer 'ASSES' than 'clit'//
maybe your mama was born without one, instead she was born with a 'dick'//

again momma jokes played out but on dat 1 i had 2 laugh LOL

worste line-fuck this nigga, you cant even spit//
you think your a killa, your justa piece o shit//

^^ not good 4 a opener

bug-
punches-3/10
flow-3/10
structure-7/10
start-4/10
finish-3/10
vocab-3/10
persionals-5/10
overall-4/10

untitled-

punches-4/10
flow-4/10
structure-7/10
start-4/10
finish-4/10
vocab-4/10
persionals-5/10
overall-6/10

Okay Chopper I Kno U Got To Be Kiddin But Jus' Remeber You Have Battles Too

omg i got a vote, and i thought that was my worst verse. RFLMAO

keep em comin, gotta show this choke artist he's a fake.

alright i was gonna do a big breakdown but then i read kkbug's verse and when i started to read untitled's a knew who won and i don't think it needs to be broken down too well first kkbug's flow was choppy he had no real punches and basic volcab, untitled's flow worked he had punches and still had basic volcab so in the end my vote is for untitled cause of the punches

vote-- untitled

my votes don';t count but i give it to -untitled- but i ain't pollin' it kkbug u seriouslt could have done a lil maybe a lot better...

Flow-Un
Punches-Un
Personals-Tie
Metas-Un
Overall-Un

he just came harder but good battle uppin honost votes in sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

man untitled had dis by a long shot kkbug u suck u ain got no flow nothin it was so boring elevate chick titled u should elevate to but u jad it cause your punches hit way harder

aight this was a weak battle....untitled threw punches....kkbug didnt....simple as that.....untitled had a better flow....both need to elevate in punches....use sum personals and metas.....nothin was hard hitting or direct....both need to elevate....but im goin with untitled cause he had the verse wit "punches"....

vote - untitled

hey hey, i got 3 votes. cumon guys, all i need is 2 mo to win..

thnx for votin ppl.

peac ya'll

Ok Untilted Had Dis// Its Simple As Fuck//

Un Had Good Punches

Kk U Had None

Vote Un

hey thnx for the votes guys. all i need now is 1 more vote. and i know its weak. please 1 of ya'll vote. thnks.

peac

Aight on the real this battle was soft yo even though yall both tried to hit hard like some young Babe Ruths. Untitled ya verses was better, ya punches was harder, ya meta's, well you didnt have any meta's but you still did it though.

KK- you was shaky, no one had the best opener, but KK you had effort that I thought was consice and topical on the note of battlin. But my over all because of your whole rhyme scheme vote goes to untitled, KK was weak with it.