J vs tha hoe va
 

aight lines as go check an then well drop blind

lol tite tittle

yurrrrrrrrr checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

itte u spit 1st i neva spit 1st............................................

motha fucka, it is blind, we spit at tha same motha fuckin time homie,,,,,checkin in

aight violation to va, this-a go this way wit J/
ya incinaration to play this day out is ya gay//
ya from bedrock, I got ya old ass on lock/
tha lyrical glock gettin ya for suckin cock//
I'ma Lyrical Crook, ya look at tha sig, ya get shook/
I'll book ya up past tha I.C.U., get ya a undergound nook//
ya lil 15 yr old dick-freestylin' faggit, I'ma gag ya ya maggit/
will I have to put 10 in while I beat tha fuck out this nimwit//
5th bar an I'm already tha star of tha battle, sit, I'ma assassin/
clashin wit ya, life flashes wit ya gashes you and ya dick-passion//
ya a lil hoe tryin ta be tha show while on a dick ya suck,cant grow/
got a 9mill to fill ya mouth, my dick say no to ya mouth to blow//
trick, sit ya Flintstone ass down wit a shattered glass frown, ya stained brown/
old mothafucka, i knock ya coffee on ya on ya, gimme my well deserved crown//
Get off ya comp, ya average 52.09ppd, oh me, ya a computer nerd ass geek/
I won this one fo sho, I got 52.09 Gs, moe dough than ya make in 104 weeks//

sucky an weak drop ya shit quick

iits like dat allot of da word dick in da shyte,to much 4 me to refrain yah gay bytch\\
i think u just lost yah crown to many dream an hopes im to shatter"em now\\
my 15-yrs could take u,it would be competiton ill lay down\\
im da king hurr taking ova tha game gaining my crown\\
violater u just been crushed im earnin a new name shyt i an't in no rush\\
i take u bak an show how we do in da south\\
let u sleep wit a purpose an let"chu wake up crushed\\
imma stop u right ,prolly can't comprehend wat i just flowed\\
well let me tell u clear,imma woop yah like da cops on a drug bust\\
no stick,no weapons just 2 fist u don't wanna fuck wit us\\
i came hurr tonite to explain to yah slow ass\\
since u wanna be a dummy ill have laying bout 6ft under da grass\\
:laugh2: :laugh2:
my maggitisum is good threw my spite\\
i eat lil chump ass rappers like u midnight snake all night\\
ok i just got flinestone ass up an got in yah face\\
i see u got" yah heat well bring it's "ok"
im bout to k.o\\my lyric flomatic but dey won't show\\
imma bout to be announced tha winner an imma tell u to sit\\
get bak up imma spitfire bak on yah ass,had enough\\
some tymes i gotta be cruel to talk rough\\
shyte betta quite go pack yah shyte an head home on da nxt groundhog bus\\

itts up 4 dem votessss

alright man..to tell you guys the truth..both of ya were equal..both of ya had same punch..no one had better ones...so I'll just go wit nephew J cuz he had just a few other rhymes that others don't use it..but wait, violation..ur sentence structure was bad also just ta let u know..but i know violation could do better..just didn't do good this time..alright...

hey..vote on mine plz...i want to get it over wit..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119080

i jus wanna say this was a boring ass battle didnt wanna finish reading eitha verse but i did so check it
punches-netha
struture-j
vocab-va
flow-va
open-j
ending-va
overall-va barley

ummm, va ya dumbass, I stated 8 barz, and you had 10 barz, but up for votes, an va for your advice, learn to follow tha mothafuckin rules ya dumbass.....uppin for muh votes

ok but i was tha one who was suppose to start this man fuck u

because the structure an the detail how he described his word it was hott i was feeling it

uppin.........drop votez an a link if ya feel it..........up

Ya kno i think Va is right bout you be gay Neph, you talkin bout dick and what not
i guess ya like it, but anywayz none o ya'll had punches, struture-J
vocab-Va
flow-Va
open-J
ending-Va
not hate'n on ya Nephew
final=Va

j sucks ass
 

vote va
both need to work on vocab badly
va's punches hit a lil harder
both need elevation though
and va had mad personals cause u really r gay lol :laugh2: :thumbup:

uppinn...............drop real votes an links if ya feel it....up..

overall i think J one he had some punches and the flow
V had punches but had no flow only in some phrases
J had the structure
so overall my vote is for nephew J

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

uppin up on this old ass battle right chere.....vote right folks, mothafucka got two votes from haters but

drop votes an' links if ya feel it

yall suck ass eveybody who is on this website sucks

v-o-t-e
 

basically tha same thing

Well It IAnt No Need to give teh vote to VA bcuz he Banned might as well Give it to the guy thats gonna be around to accept the award LOL

BUt

J

You Came Pretty Weak .......You Didnt Supply a very good personal Verse but Your punchez were sort of on .......Far as your Ya strcuture goes it was really sloppy ....those marks and dashes at the end of ya verse ....LEAVE them out it makes iy look stupid and then ppl dont wanna read the rest of ya verse

But Still You Get my Vote

Hoe

Aii Basically This is all I feel About ya verse..............BANNED !! lOL ...For cheating ....And cheaters never win

So My vote goes to
J


PLEase RTF In The link In My Sig Please

uppin on this shit playa

drop some votes honestly

i'll return honestly

check this uppity up up

drop some votes honestly

i'll return honestly

check this shit niggaz

drop a v-o-t-e

and I'll return honesty