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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-12-04 09:20 PM

DisasterPeice420 Vs. Ghost354
 
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Drop Your Shit Playa!! & I Will Drop Mine' .. Might Be Early Tomorrow Because I Got To Be Out Soon!! Cool??

Inception 04-12-04 09:22 PM

yea coo wit me ill drop later then hell naw i see that classic bullshit

no crew votez
no votin on this skeeo just cause she voted on yo battle u lame ass niggaz

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-12-04 09:24 PM

Aye Yo Check Out The Rules!!


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You Drop First!
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Step To The Plate & Get Served

& Im A Female! - I Think You Already Recognized That??

Inception 04-12-04 09:25 PM

yea but u look like a man but enough freepostin ill spit after i get high

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-12-04 09:27 PM

Alright Im Out Of This Bitch!' .. PayCe .. Fool!

Inception 04-13-04 12:17 AM

letz ride

ma you nasty,milkshakez be the opposite of kelis/
shoulda been on swan,picz lookin like a disasterpiece/
lyricaly rushin u makin u shit on yourself like a maltese/
just stop rapin an go do vocalz for an old navy fleace/
niggaz dont pay u no attention like shadowz on a bootleg movie/
put u in e.r for yearz till u feal like george clooney/
causin a perfect storm turnin class sic into vlassic/
sour ass niggaz get raped in plastic when shit get drastik/


only doin 8 im tired
ok letz give her a 5-0 victory witout her verse u fuckin clit rydin ass niggaz

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:05 PM

Ok Im Going To Go E'z On You Killah!!!!!!!!!!

Checckin In' .. & Droppin Mah Shit'

Inception 04-14-04 05:06 PM

jus post a verse wit the same wordz in it an u should be able to win just repeatin the same word

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:14 PM

I'm A Femcee Mutha_Fuccka, You Still A 'Pussy-A$$-Bitch',/
Your Last Post Was Several Minutes Ago, Enough Time To 'Write-Your-Shit',/
The Only Crown You Going To Get From Me Is From My 'Right-Fist',/
When I Beat You With This Mic, And Make You 'My-Bitch',/
I Got Street Credibility Cause I Earned 'That-Shit',/
Not Because I Got A Weak A$$ Perm And Never 'Handled-A-Grip',/
You Aint Saying Shit That Could Hurt Me 'You-See?',/
Your First Name She Be Weak Last Name 'MC',/
Your The One Who Wanted To Call Me a 'Maltese',/
Now You Flipp'n The Script Cause Raps BackFired 'Off-Me',/

Never Under-Estimate Me' ...!! Haha

Just Fuccking Around! - - -

Plus While I'm @ it Throw in ' ' 'Milli-Vanilli' ' '
You (Ghost) Spend The Last Week ' ' 'Search'n To-See' ' '
If You Can Write a 'Verse' Half A$$ 'Proverse' As When I Free

^Just Some BullShit' ...!!! (LoL)

Inception 04-14-04 05:17 PM

ok but i dont write battle versez they just come az they do i dont copy an paste battle versez off other sitez like 99 percent of these niggaz do

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:20 PM

LoL' ... You Trying To Point SOmething Out To Me!!?? Saying My Shit Is Copy & Paste? .. Haha' .. Anyways' its Cool'

Upppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:32 PM

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On this Shit' ...!!!! No D/R Votes Needed lol

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ..!!!!!!!!!

Inception 04-14-04 05:35 PM

yea wha she said
UPPIN FOR VOTEZ

JPoll 04-14-04 05:35 PM

wow shit was tight on both terms
well first off ghost
here's what i think

ma you nasty,milkshakez be the opposite of kelis/
shoulda been on swan,picz lookin like a disasterpiece
8/10 fine poor wording
lyricaly rushin u makin u shit on yourself like a maltese/
just stop rapin an go do vocalz for an old navy fleace
9/10 funny but just aight
niggaz dont pay u no attention like shadowz on a bootleg movie/
put u in e.r for yearz till u feal like george clooney/
5/10 remember george clooney was the doctor...not a patient therefor it doesn't make sense
causin a perfect storm turnin class sic into vlassic/
sour ass niggaz get raped in plastic when shit get drastik/
7/10 decent closer

not onto disaster p
good shit
I'm A Femcee Mutha_Fuccka, You Still A 'Pussy-A$$-Bitch',/
Your Last Post Was Several Minutes Ago, Enough Time To 'Write-Your-Shit',/
8/10 good intro nice
The Only Crown You Going To Get From Me Is From My 'Right-Fist',/
When I Beat You With This Mic, And Make You 'My-Bitch
7/10 decent
I Got Street Credibility Cause I Earned 'That-Shit',/
Not Because I Got A Weak A$$ Perm And Never 'Handled-A-Grip'
6/10 fine
You Aint Saying Shit That Could Hurt Me 'You-See?',/
Your First Name She Be Weak Last Name 'MC'
10/10 tight yo and pretty original
Your The One Who Wanted To Call Me a 'Maltese',/
Now You Flipp'n The Script Cause Raps BackFired 'Off-Me',/
8/10 decent worked but kinda played

disaster = B
Ghost = C+

vote disaster

Inception 04-14-04 05:37 PM

niggaz dont pay u no attention like shadowz on a bootleg movie/
put u in e.r for yearz till u feal like george clooney/
5/10 remember george clooney was the doctor...not a patient therefor it doesn't make sense


yea no shit thatz how long u gonna be there till it make u think u workin lame go duck sick

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:38 PM

Thanks For The Decent' Vote' .. Appriciate It' ...!! Thats What You Call "MuTual Respect" ... Lol Nah Just Fuccking Around'

Anyways.. Uppin 4 More Votes People Don't Sleep On This Shit!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:44 PM

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On this Shit' ...!!!! No D/R Votes Needed lol

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ..!!!!!!!!!

I Will Return The Favor' .. No Matter Who You Vote For!!!' .... C'Mon Yall Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 06:00 PM

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On this Shit' ...!!!! No D/R Votes Needed lol

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ..!!!!!!!!!

I Will Return The Favor' .. No Matter Who You Vote For!!!' .... C'Mon Yall Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!!!!

threatz 04-14-04 06:09 PM

PUNCHZ- Ghost, his punchz wasent all dat.. but they was enought to get'em this...
I wasent feelin Disasterpeice's.. so dey wasent all dat from both sidez

VOCAB- Ghost get this again.. by usin wordz dat ain't commonly used.. DisasterPeice diden't really have much of a vocab on this battle.. but I seen her use some good vocab on other battles..

STRUCTURE- Both, ya'll both had good structure.. easy to read..

MULTIS- None, I really dident see any multis from either side

This wasen't tha best battle from both of you can I seen better from both.. but my vote goes 2 ghost

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 06:12 PM

Plus While I'm @ it Throw in ' ' 'Milli-Vanilli' ' '
You (Ghost) Spend The Last Week ' ' 'Search'n To-See' ' '
If You Can Write a 'Verse' Half A$$ 'Proverse' As When I Free

^^Theres Your Mutlies' Right There ..' .. (LoL)

Haha
... Anyways

Still Uppin 4 Votes >>>

GKillaz05 04-14-04 06:23 PM

Ghost354 - Alright spit, I have seen better.. wish thats what you woulda spitted VS me, but it had some good flow and alright punches and multi's.

Best Line - causin a perfect storm turnin class sic into vlassic/
sour ass niggaz get raped in plastic when shit get drastik/ (alright finish)

Worst Line - niggaz dont pay u no attention like shadowz on a bootleg movie/
put u in e.r for yearz till u feal like george clooney/

420 - Good solid spit like always, good multi's some pretty hard punches and even your "just some bullshit" was alright.. .lol

Best Line - You Aint Saying Shit That Could Hurt Me 'You-See?',/
Your First Name She Be Weak Last Name 'MC',/

Worst Line - When I Beat You With This Mic, And Make You 'My-Bitch',/
I Got Street Credibility Cause I Earned 'That-Shit',/
Not Because I Got A Weak A$$ Perm And Never 'Handled-A-Grip',/
You Aint Saying Shit That Could Hurt Me 'You-See?',/ (that wasnt bad... just weak compared to some of the other shit you drop)

OVERALL - I gotta give this to 420 for better punches and multi's and like always a solid flow, Ghost your shit was to short and you need a bigger vocab. Work on makin your lines longer and flow it better. You had some good punches just need to bring em harder.. no hate.. peace

Vote - 420

Return the Fav wit my battle wit THREATZ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118729

$$UPREME 04-14-04 06:24 PM

Flow-dp
Structure-dp ....ghost...a Tie..
Vocab-ghost...
Personals- Both
Good Battle....by Both..
But I Got To Go To Who Stuck Out Dp

Inception 04-14-04 06:26 PM

-lookz at signature-

nope tha dotn count niggaz sho cant read

threatz 04-14-04 06:27 PM

um...

you said it was just some bullshyt.. you shoulda added dat 2 da battle verse

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 06:32 PM

Thanks 4 The Honest Votes' ...!!

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ...!!

lol No Crew Votes' ..! - - - ForGot Haha' ... Anyways its All Gravy!!

Inception 04-14-04 06:39 PM

uppin for some BLACK folkz to vote on this shit no furbyz

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 07:56 PM

C'Mon Damn Folks Drop Some Honest Votes' On This Shit' .. & Lets Get It Closed' ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Triple_N 04-14-04 11:33 PM

yo this is hard for me to vote on cuz I cool wit both these catz but here we go...Dp you had a good verse, I can see you toned yourself down in this one, u had good multies, vocab, an punches, not any personals really.
Ghost...you had a good verse you opened good an then mellowed out in the middle, I didn't get the george clooney line dogg, but you had good punches especially the navy fleece line good shit.
Its a close battle but it comes down to who sustain their intensity throughout an I had to say Dp was solid from start to finish, ghost u had a good opener an one real strong punch then the rest was ok, an it just wasn't enough to get this one, no hard feelings dogg.
Vote: Dp

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-15-04 06:02 PM

Appriciate The Honest Votes' ... Thanks Playa!! Good Lookin Out!!'

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On this Shit' ...!!!! No D/R Votes Needed lol

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ..!!!!!!!!!

I Will Return The Favor' .. No Matter Who You Vote For!!!' .... C'Mon Yall Quit Sleepin On This Shit!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-15-04 06:46 PM

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On this Shit' ...!!!! No D/R Votes Needed lol

Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votes' ..!!!!!!!!!

Killah Bwoy 04-15-04 06:51 PM

lol aiight this wasnt even a challenge for u disaster easy win right here...ur flow was sick and u had sick structure i dont think i saw any punchlines..maybe a cuple but enuff to beat ghost lmfao nice battle

vote:disaster


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