NoLost4Rhymes Vs. streetsweepa
 

alright man..lets go and start ta battle..

ok im gonna spit my verse i guess ill got first !

alright..cool..lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pm me wen ur done alright so I could just go and start my spit

yo yo you call yoself no lost 4 ryme//
but battelin a bitch like u is like battlin a mime//
OH NO!! ITS ALMOST NINE!!//
isnt it about around your bedtime?//
your not gonna win dis battle its my time to shine//
i kno your a lil scared so u better disperse//
but OH NO its only gonna get worse//
ive crushed u and i aint done wit the first verse//
ur a bitch i will destroy u with my fool proof words//
ur chances of beating me are the same of breaking a curse//
and about the odds of seeing gays like you not carrying a purse//
nowm im gonna higher the bar and raise the stake//
u try to be like nelly but you more like justin timberlake//
naw your like prince and micheal jackson A BIG FRUIT CAKE//
and battelin against me was you only mistake-//

Lmao...thats your verse yo streetsweepa you are garbage, I'd beat ya ass anyday, lol you suck!!!!!

fuck you faggot dude give me a fucking break im new ok damn

If you want people to give you a break, you need to stop talking shit, an If you want me to give you a break, you must know that was a weak verse.

okn hey listen dont vote for him if mine was better ok do it fair not cuz you hate me

that is all im asking of you dont so it cuz you hate me

alright..lets go...

you keep sayin this is a mistake//
I'm goin against someone that lost 2-3 battles straight//
dawg i thought ud know that ya wack and that nolost cant lose//
and i bet ya sex lifes dead cos like dynamite uve got a short fuse//
im already holdin my hand up like the liberty statue and thats true//
cus when this battles over ull b further underground than ya crew//
keep u out like a door man..think u can beat me? well imma foil ur plan//
ya punches dont connect like foster parents and an orphan//
bitch ur just a disgrace to hip hop and all ya attempts at hits r soft//
cus its like ya got foot wear on ya hands the way every punch u flip flops//
wheres ya punches? even wid a microscope i couldn't hav found dum//
leave u bloody on ya knees beggin for mercy like the g unit album//

yea..now its 2-0 for me

tight verse ok man uppin for votes hit us up wee need votes

damn..come on guys...votes..PLEASE!!!!! I want ta get this over wit..

nolost4rymes had the better punchlines. u could also follow it better. streetsweepa u had some ok shit just keep workin on it. My vote nolost4rymes

come on..i need more votes on this battle...just vote..how hard can that be

breakdown for streetsweepa:

flow:your definatly improving this was a whole level better then that verse against me you had still room to improve though 5/10

volcab:alright basic use you should work on this cause it can be a deciding factor in close battles 5/10

punches: again better then stuff i've read of yours you are improving your best line,"ur chances of beating me are the same of breaking a curse//" still the strength of the lines could be upped but good job 6/10

overall:16/30 this was a leap forward for you as in the quality of your verse not sure if it's enough to win yet though

breakdown for nolostrhymes:

flow:alright alittle off in the first few bars but it levels out nicely 6/10

volcab:good use pretty basic could improve this 6/10

punches:not too many that really hurt best line,"cus when this battles over ull b further underground than ya crew//" aside from that pretty played 6/10

overall:18/30 good verse

vote--nolost4rhymes gets my vote

damn dirtyboy is always doing big ass break downs

street - i understand you are new so i wont be that harsh ok you really need to stay on point and not get lost in the moment and stretch words just to make them rhyme your flow is pretty basic same with the vocab and structure nothing that stuck out to me keep elevating
2/10

nolost- ok your flow was decent you made some of those lines run a lil long and that fucked up your structure vocab was basic no real hard punmches some decent multis
4/10
vote-nolost

both you suck but man i guess since i like punches i got to go with streetzsweepa. nolost4ryhmes it was ok keep going but work on punches.

yo this was hot i give this to nolost 4 rhymes he came harder and he had rhyme structure ad an elevated vocabualry over strresweepa. there isnt much more to say the shit was one sided

I just need one more vote..and plz vote on my other battle win kitten

just one more vote

just one..only one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ez Dogg,

I came over 2 go check out your shit, an i gotta say it goes 2 NoLoss

sweepa had the flow an sum OK structure, but waz just spitin a load o shit,
Best Line = nah, I cant actually find 1 I like, soz man.

Nolost came in with a bit better Flow, an hiz structure waz OK aswell, he threw in a few Punches.
U got a decent bar goin here azwell dogg

dawg i thought ud know that ya wack and that nolost cant lose//
and i bet ya sex lifes dead cos like dynamite uve got a short fuse//

Vote = Nolost4rhymes

thanx dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man..i would vote for u rhymes..but it says i need 30 votes

lolz..that's cool dawg...thats alright..someone will vote eventually

ya man rymes u had so some tight punches it was jus easier to understand, street sweepa just keep workin on it.. urs was ok also

so my vote goes rymes

Vote in my battle

hey u forgot to vote in my battle..i'll vote in ur battle now..just vote now also

Aight Check Dis..

StreetSweepa: 4/10
You Need To Elevate. I've Said This In All Your Battles But It Seems Like You Never Take The Time To Learn. Your Punches Are Wack Because The Word Usuage Is Fucked. Mulits and Metaphors Would Help Your Verse Out A Lot. Nice Flow, Just Work On Dat Shit. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope.

NoLost4Rhymes: 6/10
Nice Drop, Simple and Sweet. Punches Weren't Really Hard Felt But They Were Enough. Not Really Many Mulits and Meta's but It Atleast Had Sum. Flow Was Alright, But Structure Was Off. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope.

Vote - NL4R

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