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CarsonJetX2 vs. L.I.
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10 lines/5 bars due 1 hour after check in no hate votes or d/r crew votes are allowed (in same crew) no feeding aight goodluck.... checked in........ |
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This kid's 14!...He went ta rent LionKing an still got carded..
Born wit Failures....You had L.'s in your name before you even started Overall RB Record, 14 an 3, 11 KO's...But they werent like me.... Exept for 3...Cus honeslty Between you an me I am the real peice of U ta E.. you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... Fuck your bars....why did you even accept? You can hang wit my words... Your drop's like ya avatar...played concepts mixed wit quality blurred LI or AI, drop 1 to the head an 4 in the mesh, just to stain ya dress... Don't sweat....its jus the net... You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test" |
My Verse
Ok....we in the same crew...no beef....goodluck!!!
Check it.... Cocky attitude needs to be checked...cuz it has him losing respect.... Could have Sherlock Holmes detect...hed say u have a loss to expect.. Records 36-10 thats good and all...only have it cuz u take newbies to brawl... My record next to yours looks small...But lets check your opponent recall... Most wins are against herb newbies...battles like these dont make true emcees... Bitch please, i think everyone agrees...you need to end your bragging spree... Go to the old rb grounds...its a guarantee youll see ya record flipped around... You dont run this town...time to face the fact that you aint superstardom bound... L.I.'s career he be takin?....haha come on u must be mistaken... Wit lines "wacker" than masterbation...suggest u stick to sig makin... give the honest votes....goodluck |
wow carson you had a nice lil flow going on and some decent punches and some multis and i know your trying to get back in the groove of this whole text thing but overall good drop
6/10 L.I nice drop you are elevating into this battle shit nicely you had some good flow decent multis decent structure vocab was kinda basic on both of you guys but i was just feeling your flow a lil more 7/10 |
iight 1-0..................uppin this ish........................
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alright here's the breakdown:
Carson: Yo, I think you had the better opener out of the 2. Your flo was nice and you had pretty good punches and personals. But you kinda lost your flo in the last few lines LI: you'r opener's flo was a little off, but after that everything went good. I was feelin' your flo after that. YOu had very good punches and personals, which I think hit a little harder than Carson's. Also, your Closer was nice I think LI won this one by a very close margin. Good battle. |
Aight 2-0 Thanks For The Feedback.................up It Goes!
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uppin 4 votes god damnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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they were both fine...good rhymes and shit but not original at all...i didn't even smirk during either but li's was a little bit better...just cause it made more sense and eventhough he's 14 it was smarter than carsons
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uppin
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L.I. - Good spit man, like always.. awesome flow and brought some hard punches and some good multi's.
Best Line - L.I.'s career he be takin?....haha come on u must be mistaken... Wit lines "wacker" than masterbation...suggest u stick to sig makin... Worst Line - NONE (never has one) Carson - Very good spit also man, nice flow goin on.. and some pretty good punches. Best Line - you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... Worst Line - NONE OVERALL - I gotta give this to L.I. cuz I was feelin his punches just A little more, your shit was hot to carson.. just thought L.I. was a lil better.. Vote - L.I. plz return the favour wit me and baller.. thx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115 |
uppin....thanks for the feedback....keep it coming...............
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i suggest you newbs learn how to vote
kid LI had all filler until his closer carson came solid and original in his whole verse LI had shit that didnt rhyme and wack concepts learn how to rap and evaluate this is why i stay at old RB cus battles like these r a disgrace, voting wise v/ carson |
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i agree....but he's in my crew so its all good....but it is true...sorry LI |
Alright Let Me Break This Shit down!!! No Bull-Shit!!
Check Carson's Lines: This kid's 14!...He went ta rent LionKing an still got carded.. Born wit Failures....You had L.'s in your name before you even started ^ Very Nice Opener!!' ... With A Good Punch... 9/10 you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... ^Again Droppin Decent Bars' .. With Good Punches' ... 10/10 LI or AI, drop 1 to the head an 4 in the mesh, just to stain ya dress... Don't sweat....its jus the net... You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test" ^^Structure Fell Off Long' .. And that Fucked Up Your Flow/Verse!!! 8/10 OverAll It Was A Nice Verse I Enjoyed It' .. Work On Structre And Verse Though!!' ...(Advice To You) Alright Check L.I.'s Lines: Cocky attitude needs to be checked...cuz it has him losing respect.... Could have Sherlock Holmes detect...hed say u have a loss to expect.. ^Great Opener' .. And Nice Multie In There Also!!! .. 10/10 Records 36-10 thats good and all...only have it cuz u take newbies to brawl... My record next to yours looks small...But lets check your opponent recall... ^Nice Punchline' ...!! 9/10 L.I.'s career he be takin?....haha come on u must be mistaken... Wit lines "wacker" than masterbation...suggest u stick to sig makin... ^Very Nice Closer' .... & Punchline With Good Use Of Multies In There' .. 10/10 OverAll' .. I Also Enjoyed Your Verse' .. And It Was Very Nice Structured & It Flowed & Went Together Nice!!!' ....!! :) Vote: L.I. |
ok uppin for that final vote........get that ish explained....................
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L.I. - it was a good as flow homie u came right at yo opponent i was diggin dat u had some tight multis and wordplay
u didnt really have a woste line in my opinon u had all god shit Carson - u had some hot shit also u came right at LI as well good job. fav line - you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... Worst Line - You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test but in da end punches-jet vocab-LI flow-LI structure-jet multis-LI closing-LI beggining-LI" vote LI |
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