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Lil Nae2 Vs. NoLost4Rhymes
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Timelimit: 20 min. no crew or d/r no excuses on not ta battle.. Do you wanna spit first..or me |
Yo..Dawg..check in..and tell me if u want to spit first or me
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u spit 1st checkin
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alright..gimme 15 minutes alright..just 15...or maybe 20
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hey..while u wait can u vote in the battles i'm in now..plz
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Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament...
Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit... You must have sensed your demise, so why would you provoke it?.. Hell yeah im scared, cause your gay as fuck and im homophobic... Dont feel bad you dont want your final thought to be regret.. You didnt use your head and now you feel your skull and neck disconnect... My shit is classic, and its causes damage to masses... And it pisses off 'Smokey The Bear' the way you 'throw away your matches'... The only wise words you talk are during the removal of your wisdom tooth.. Your battles? I missed them too, cause they get as much rotation as junckyard pistons do... Your escophagous should be in a sublimal state to speak those perposterous topics.. your lines are incompetent with no signs of any bars containing logic... Face it my freestyles are doper than any verse you'll ever write down... I'll go bananas n' strike crowns, n' rip fakes like yaself when I recite nouns... Ill knock you out like James Evans on anti-depressants and sedatives.. actin' as if your grammatically excellent when you dont even know the diff between nouns and predicates.. I hold shit down and thats a definite, I can only be described as a vet or legend kid.. I know your shook, my flows like 'Gatorade': I even got 'Commercial heads sweatin' it'... |
this kid tryin' to battle? you've got to be kidding
the battle didn't start, and people say i'll be winning!! why don't you shut up? no one likes-you-bitch if 'silence is golden', i'm waiting for him to "STRKE-IT-RICH" look at your verse, it's just so pathetic what are you, 14, kid? first learn your alphabet tryin' to get fans, but you ain't at all-famed we'll play POOL with your testicles--it's just 'small-game' sucky punchlines show that he's cumbersome go 'piss in a toilet', and you still couldn't go "number-1" nobody thinks you'll win kid, why do are you even tryin'? people said you had skills? then they must've been lyin' listen dumbass, you should just try-to-be-sharper if we 'learn from our mistakes', then why-aren't-you-smarter? your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name equip my guns , and get reaDY to be killin'-this-narc this pimple faced geek has more blackheads than the million-man-march!! battling me, trust that this will be the last time,-cuz... ...yOuR veRSe goES uP aND dOwn mOre ThaN tHIS LiNe-dOEs |
all rite lets gets some votes
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damn dawg..that shyt was hella good
"your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name equip my guns , and get reaDY to be killin'-this-narc this pimple faced geek has more blackheads than the million-man-march!! battling me, trust that this will be the last time,-cuz... ...yOuR veRSe goES uP aND dOwn mOre ThaN tHIS LiNe-dOEs" that shyt was good dawg |
thx yo shit was hott to i just hope ppl vote on dis
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yea...hope so too dawg..lolz.......................
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this battle was good...
best from NoLost: Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament... Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit... And it pisses off 'Smokey The Bear' the way you 'throw away your matches'... The only wise words you talk are during the removal of your wisdom tooth.. Your battles? I missed them too, cause they get as much rotation as junckyard pistons do... only bad part was that you tried too hard with the vocabulary...don't really need all that vocab in a battle verse... Best of Lil Nae: go 'piss in a toilet', and you still couldn't go "number-1" your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name this pimple faced geek has more blackheads than the million-man-march!! I'm voting for NoLost. Dude was stronger with his punches, and was more ocmplex. Lil Nae, your shit was just too simple in some spots, and you had a lot of filler. Vote = NoLost |
thanx dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dawg u forgot to vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nolost won no doubt he had better flo better punhes and better rymes
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yea..i agree wit street..he had better flow punches and rhymes
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ok yall gotta give more den dat atleast put more on there
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That was a fly ass battle
NoLost best line: Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament... Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit... Lil Nae2 best line: your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name Both threw gud punches and had good flow and sturcture. I think it was an even battle but i'm gonna have to go with Lil Nae2 on this one. Sorry NoLost! Vote on my battles playas franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
uppin on some votes
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i agree with streets Lil was only good but at the last part so i think Is NoLost that one cause he had punches,structure,rhymed and everything my vote is for NoLost
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Ok now that is hard to decide…….
Nolost4rhymes-that intro was tight, you had control and didn’t fall off But Lil nae2 that was also brilliant, great come back Flow- something of what one wonders All the way easy reader Punches – you had very good punches – no advice Personals- nicely done, formed perfectly…try punish his name a bit, cuz that’s the “strongest” Personal And it helps voters to see that you didn’t pre-write Mulies – Very good, every single bar was excellent( I qoute this one) good meti’s and Intro Check the meti’s( I underlined) Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament... Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit...You must have sensed your demise, so why would you provoke it?.. Hell yeah im scared, cause your gay as fuck and im homophobic Vocab – this is one of the reasons why I think this battle is yours, You have a very intimidating style, making you look more in charge Some more funny’s will make you an all rounder + a very powerfull textee THIS is what I mean by control(very mature) “Your esophagus should be in a sublimal state to speak those preposterous topics.. your lines are incompetent with no signs of any bars containing logic” all and all – 8/10 lil nae2-(the underdog)- after that terrible intro, i honestly thought that you sucked but you came back very strong, brilliant outro Flow- started of weak, but speeded up Punches – there is one punch, you should rather avoid, I quote This is honestly what I hate to see, its childish, and shows that your just filling space(Very Weak) “nobody thinks you'll win kid, why do are you even tryin'? people said you had skills? then they must've been lyin'” Personals – you had a lot more, there was two that I liked………….(to me I see a very immature style, maybe your still young, but it could also have been him, all I can say is keep it up Fav line in the whole battle-this includes great Meti’s(check the way he styled this one) (Again I underlined)1,2..1,2……that’s fucken good “your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name” vocab – very good as a said a bit undeveloped, THIS is a fucken brilliant outro, if you had more punches and less filler, you would win battling me, trust that this will be the last time,-cuz... ...yOuR veRSe goES uP aND dOwn mOre ThaN tHIS LiNe-dOEs All and all – 6/10 I think a rematch will be interesting, I believe it was an equal battle Maybe lil nae2is stronger, cuz he’s drop was very immature( 2 or 3 battles from him, should do the trick) My vote: Nolost4rhymes Sorry for the long vote, couldn’t help it, it’s hard too find an good battles… |
well i think nolost did hella good this tyme your overall style was 8 of ten ur flow was 7 10
overall 9 outa ten NoLost best line: Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament... Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit... u did good two nae ur best line was why don't you shut up? no one likes-you-bitch if 'silence is golden', i'm waiting for him to "STRKE-IT-RICH" over all vote hoes to nolost |
just one more vote then it's finished...plz..just one..
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Breakdown:
Punches: NoLost Metas: Neither Multies: NoLost Wordplay: Neither Flow: Tie Disses: NoLost Overall-Close Battle.Both Emcees Had Pretty Good Verses But Im Goin With NoLost4Rhymes On This One.His Punches Were Ok For The Most Part But He Won This One Over With His Disses.He Had Some Nice Multies In His Opening.His Verse Was Also More Consistent.Not Many Fillers Or Pointless Bars.Both Showed They Have A Extensive Vocabulary Which Makes Flow & Multies Look Better.Lil' Nae Had One Good Bar But & One Good Line.Not Consistent Enough.Close Tho.Keep It Up Both Of You. Vote-NoLost4Rhymes |
Oh And BTW...Can Ya'll Vote On One Of The Battles In My Sig?
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i just need one
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just one more vote..is that so hard to ask!!!!!!!!!
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I just need one more vote..plz!!!!!
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just one more!!!!!
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come on...is it so hard jst to ask for one more vote
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man dis iz to good of a battle fo yall niggas not to vote on it so can we get some votes
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yo dis was a hott battle both of u really stepped 2 da keyboard and faught dis 1 out i likez dat
check it both of yall had some nice punches and yall came wit personals off the monitor it was hott as hell yo and yall had some nice structure e-z to read dats good nolost- bestline-Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament... Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit... ^^ nice way 4 impression u started off wit a good opening 2 make me wanna keep reading yo verse nice..... worsteline-i dont think u really had 1 in my book u had some tight shit nice flow nae- bestline- this kid tryin' to battle? you've got to be kidding the battle didn't start, and people say i'll be winning!! ^^ another good line 2 start off yo opening act good job worsteline-didnt have 1 also u had a tight ending 2 i like dat good good nolost- open-10/10 close-9.7//10 punches-9.5/10 structure-9/10 mulits-9/10 personals-9.6/10 vocab-9/10 overall-9.4/10 nae open-10/10 close-10/10 punches-9/10 structure-9/10 mulits-9/10 personals-9.4/10 vocab-9/10 overall-9.2/10 vote-tapes good job 2 both doe |
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