Kingz vs JPoll
 

JPoll to spit first
10-14 lines
no crew
no dick riding
no hate
verses due as soon as poss
failing that noon 2moro

checkin in.... i'll drop my verse after i'm done dinner

checkin in.......im goin 2 bed now. i'll drop mine in the mornin

alright here it is
check it


You wanna hear GOD laugh? Tell him your plans,
You say you'll beat JPOLL? But his son is da man,
Kingz, you're a bitch, OH NO, not a lightweight,
You're callin Cheltenham,but they even know your fate,
I only battle vets, I ain't got time for rookies,
You're a crosseyed BITCH, whos lovin girls wit cookies,
You live by the sword, but you'll die by my gun,
The only thing you spit is worthless witless wack puns,
Yeah you might laugh last, but it's cause you think slowest,
Don't fuck wit Mr.Poll, cause you know he's the dopest.

ya done
ho

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who u calling a hoe son?....im pimp ya ass out
theys no money to be made from you...thas without doubt

you new to RB..lemme show you how this shit goes
punches and flows..so shocking...ya jaw drop down to ya toes

why u call yourself 'poll'?....cos you aint even gunna get one 'vote'
im about to murder this kid...with four more 'punches' to his throat

you reppin 'calgary'?....nobody even knows ya name
i should be reppin there yo....they way i spit 'flames'
(Calgary Flames - NHL team)

son the statement that summed up ya whole verse
was wen you put ya motherfucking dinner first
(check 2nd post in this thread)

either they stave you dog...or to rap you not dedicated
u taken 'vallium' again?...ya verse flowed like you 'sedated'

'Poll' stop upping for 'dick riding' votes...look this kid got an 'erection'
why so serious?....this is a rap battle...not a presidential 'election' :hump:

upping 4 votes yo.................................

u cant beat me,cum n battle me ill make u c therz no one iller than me,cumon spit somert freestyle nigga,show this white english kid wot u got

damn man....if you like hockey..your no friend of mine...jpoll automatically gets my vote............








naw i'm kiddin

naa i dont like hockey at all but thought i should stick it in there. seemed like a good meta at the time

[yo wildfire battle me,quick freestyle, wana c wot u think of my skillz

aight you put somethin together real quick....and I'll reply when i can

dont post in the battle unless its a vote
go to bitch slap

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Lol Kingz Got This Shit!!' .....

Break Down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check King'S Lines:

who u calling a hoe son?....im pimp ya ass out
theys no money to be made from you...thas without doubt

^An Alright Opener Could Have Been Improved A Bit 8/10

why u call yourself 'poll'?....cos you aint even gunna get one 'vote'
im about to murder this kid...with four more 'punches' to his throat

^Nice Punchline' ...!!! I Like That' ... 9/10

'Poll' stop upping for 'dick riding' votes...look this kid got an 'erection'
why so serious?....this is a rap battle...not a presidential 'election'

^^This Line MERKED' JPoll' .. Badd lol... 10/10 Awsome Closer!!


Vote: Kingz

Punchz- Kingz had more an better punchz in his verse, Jpoll had some punchz too but I feelt they really wasent hittin dat hard..

Structure- Both of you had good structure, both verses was easy to read

Multis- Kingz had more multis an they sounded good together for example
"you new to RB..lemme show you how this shit goes
punches and flows..so shocking...ya jaw drop down to ya toes"... I dident really noticed any good ones in Jpolls shit

Metas- Kingz got this too.. with that hocky line, i dident really see any metas with Jpolls verse..


this battle was pretty one sided.. i say kingz took this easily..

vote=kingz

King Came Way Harder Than That Jpoll Cat My Vote Goes To King

i think it was pretty retarded how kingz had to put things in brackets to have it make sense. it should just make sense or you should just not say it. jpoll was original. i vote jpoll.

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i think Kingz is the winner automatically because that dude says he battles vet's when his a flyweight
plus the punches,structure,rhyme and everything Kingz was winning so my vote is for Kingz

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

hit this battle up right quick aight ya'll.

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uppin........................ come on ya'll lets get this ish closed

yo come you vote!!!... i will return a honest vote jus leave ya links

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I thought this was an alright battle....... JPoll came wit some OK punches but none really stood out. Flow was pretty basic but it was there. No real metas or wordplay though........ Kingz came wit harder punches because of the metas he threw in there. His punches were personal too...........That's why Kingz gets my vote

Vote - Kingz

Hit up some of my battles wit some honest votes.....

IM A give this shit to Kingz yo shit was hotter than j polls.

J poll you need to work on structure guy and flow.

so my vote goes ta kingz for punches