Sten. Cell Vs. Triple_N
 

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ah'ight then son you drop first^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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When are you going to drop something^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Come on son drop something already damn!!!!!!!!!!!!

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's
Your Old News,Ill Beat This MC Cubed & Rock This Blockhead
Ill Bruise This Newb & With Ease-Droppin More Lines Than The Feds
Tis True He Sucks,Ill Cover Him With Sheets Like The Klux
These Blows Dont Duck But Ill Drop This Dick Like A Kick In The Nuts
Either I Smell A Win By Far Or Its Your Scripts In The Garbage...
But You Could Breech Wit Screech's & Still Couldnt Bring Ur Smartest

I Was Watchin A Movie Again...My Bad

I Cut It Short

You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/
You impersonate an emcee better than "dave chappelle"/
Your ryhmes are weird an unclear like the movie "others"/
I'll take this win, say thank ya plz, like pops from "wayne's brothers"/
This nigga's a fool, a blockhead this bitch callz me/
Its cool, cuz I know he stole his name from Dragonball Z/
I give ya props u spit for all ya worth, but sorry welcome to eath/
You punches are lighter that nerf, an your delivery is similar to papa smurf/
I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/


Didn't really put much effort into it, so don't really know how it's gon' turn out but good battle...may the best mothafucka win, one!

triple N, hands down winner dog, that was sick
those lines were flowing like wonkas chocolate

He did not poll.. now need 25 posts to be able to poll. If he comes back and polls without giving a better explanation, it will be removed
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Sten: You had nice flow, but punches fell of pretty bad towards the end. The closer was decent, but your second and third bars were just pretty weak.

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's

^^ that's hot, nice word play, personal, everything. best bar of the battle.

triple n: nice multis, i see you elevating there, flow got better because of that. the problem is your punches. the first line was ok, 2-4 were just weak for me. i think you gotta use more setup lines so you can get some depths in those punches or something.. the way it is its just like 4 straight disses, and none are particularly great.
the dragon ball Z one was a pretty good personall, and your closer was ok. but man, that second to last line:

I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/

man that's weak. the second part has nothing to do with sten, so the set up is kinda wasted. also, people inject dead versions of disease or weak versions of disease as vaccination, so its like your saying your weak or something. i think that kinda killed the verse for me.

tight battle guys, especially for this few lines. really close, but for that nice openener by sten and for the wordplay i give sten the vote.

holler back on my battle v franchiZe.

I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's

oooooooooooooo i think this line killed it dog.
amazin opener and a nice personal

his punches hit a lil harder.

triple n u had a nice line too

Your ryhmes are weird an unclear like the movie "others"/
I'll take this win, say thank ya plz, like pops from "wayne's brothers

im a fan of ya shit triple n. you got mad respect from me since we battled

but i have to give this to sten

no beef,

return the favour pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...31&page=1&pp=15

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can you vote in my battle pls
i took time to vote 4 u
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119431

No No No I Think Triple Had Better Verse..yea U Guys Right He Did Have Trouble In One Of Tha Verse But Still I Think He Did A Hella Lot Betta..sten U Did Good Too But I Juss Thought Ya Verses Didnt Make Sence ..srry

V:triple_n....yea Boy Good Job Ya Did Better

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yo triple you did phat as hell you know have earned my respect u just destroyed hime esspecially at the endI'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/
that is so sweet 4 real
stencell u did good but not good enought to earn my vote it was a good battle but triple n had better punches it was funny urs was boring my vote swings the way of triple N

Uppin this for votes, holla back y'all^^^^^^^^^^^^

You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/
You impersonate an emcee better than "dave chappelle"/

^Nice Opener!!! 9/10

I give ya props u spit for all ya worth, but sorry welcome to eath/
You punches are lighter that nerf, an your delivery is similar to papa smurf/

^ Nice Multies' .... And Good Punchline 9/10

I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
For u no vendication, or ego inflation, stick wit ya best talent "masterbation"/

^Closer Fell A Bit Short' .. But Nice.... Also 9/10

Vote: Triple_N

Uppin for some well explained votes, holla^^^^^^^^

Uppin for some votes, quit sleeping on this^^^^^^^^

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

hit this battle up right quick aight ya'll.

nice battle

triple n came nice with multies and some hard punchs the opener was pretty nice closer had a bunch of multies and a pretty decent good punch and some solid punchs threw the whole verse it didnt flow that well though and had decent wordplay

sten cell had beter wordplay and a good openin punch that shit was pretty sick but the rest had a few good punchs closer was kinda off overall a decent verse

vote triple n

Uppin for votes, well explained votes needed, come on y'all close this out

My Breakdown
 

Yo:

Opener: This most defintley goes to Sten. Cell. That line was the illest of the battle:
Flow/Structure: I give this to Triple N. Sten, your structure wasn't as strong as Triple N's, you kept falling off towards the end of your flow.
Vocab/Wordplay: This goes to Sten, he intertwined so many words together that made most of his lines good. Triple N, yours was decent, but Sten. most def. has this topic covered.
Punches: This goes to Triple N. You had nice hard hits and this is what your known for, all of your punches were good and hard. Sten. Your punches got weaker as your verse went down, try to keep on top with that.
Multi's: I give this to Triple N, Sten, you had Multi's but Triple N has a good perspective on them and your Multi's didn't seem as strong. Try to work on that.

Triple N, you barley got this one. I have seen you way better then this.
Sten Cell, try to work on punches and Multi's. Your structure seems good.

Vote- Triple N good battle.

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overall this was aight sten cell had some decent lines his punches were aightso was his flow could of did better tiple n was pretty decent to he also had some good punches and personalshe also could of did better but the that stood out the most is sten cell so he gets my vote nuff said

Uppin for votes, explain your votes people, holla back!!

breakdown for triple_n:

flow:mah not great i thought it was kinda choppy 5/10

volcab:alright better then average 7/10

punches:best line,"You style is old an played out like "patti labelle"/" and even it was kinda played out not a great job i bet you can do better 6/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for sten cell:

flow:alright nothing amazing though 6/10

volcab:good job kinda basic 6/10

punches:nothing real quotable, i didn't see any lines that really stood out here 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--triple_n gets my vote