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$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:02 PM

$$UPREME VS. chalk clorox
 
i set up .....
you got til 8:30 west coast time...
drop first...

$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:08 PM

check in........
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:35 PM

1.....2.......3.........
 
THIS IS WHAT EVERYONE HAS BEEN PATIENTLY WAITING FOR.....
IF THIS IS WHAT YOU WANT THIS IS WHAT YOU GET.....
$$UPREME-------



I SPRAY-YOU-ON THEN JUST TAKE-YOU-OFF LIKE A REAL GRAFFITI ARTIST*
U JUST PLAY-ME-CLOSE LIKE VAMPIRES DONT BITE ME I AM DA HARDEST*

OPTIONS TO KILL: LYRICS,GUNS,KNIVES,BOMBS*
POPPIN-2-MANY-PILLS WOULDN'T COMPARE TO THE STATE OF MY QUALMS*


YOUR BOUT TO SUFFER A CONCUSSION YOUR HEAD WILL BE TRACED BY A LINE OF CHALK*
CALL ME LUDACRIS I THROW-DEM-BOWS AND LEAVE YA WERE PEOPLE WALK*

$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*


I-SHAKE-HATERS OFF LIKE FLEAS-ON-DOGS*
C-FLAKES-LATER LIKE TONY THE TIGER ON HIS JOG*

IT'S GONNA-BE-A-WHILE TILL I LOSE GO GRAB A SNICKERS*
CUZ I COME WIT MORE NUTS THEN EVER BETTER GROW-SOME-QUICKER*


PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT*
OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE*


CHALK CLOROX --------- JUST GOT FADED------------------

$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:39 PM

I Droped First???????
U Were Supposed To Go First....
Deadline Was 8:30
Your Late Chump.........
But I'll Give U A Break.....

$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:45 PM

STOP LYING.....BITCH.....
YO COMPUTER IS WORKING GOOD.......

FACE IT YOU GOT FADED.......



$$UPREME

$$UPREME 04-13-04 11:54 PM

I Said I Wouldn't Do No Rematches ....
I Don't Want To Beat U Twice....
But If U Want After This...
I'll Battle You 100000000 Times...
If U Want............

Sean.C 04-13-04 11:57 PM

preme took this one easly wit better punches and struckture it was alot longer to good work
chalk good battle you should have made it a lot more expansive and u should have used better vocab good battle

$$UPREME 04-14-04 12:01 AM

Thanx ...
Koopa ....
Honest Vote........
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

$$UPREME 04-14-04 12:05 AM

You'll Need To Applogize......1,000,000,000
Every Time...

Inception 04-14-04 12:08 AM

supreme took this one had a good flow and some hard punchz and good structure wit a couple of good personalz
best linez
$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*

clorox i didnt see much in this battle linez were real short and weak punchz when u had em get some worplay an stretch ya linez out a lil bit
best linez
..........money signs in your name?
thats a weird a occurence,
you could have had a heart,
but you couldnt afford insurence............

vote/supreme

vote on my shit

Nephew J 04-14-04 12:10 AM

easily won by $$umpreme, ol dude, eww, sucky ass structure

$$ had great punches
$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*
like that one
PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT*
OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE*
and that one

V/ Defently $$upreme

return honest favs, like here:

Nephew J vs Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117337

$$UPREME 04-14-04 12:19 AM

Thanks.....
Much Luv.......
Uppin 4 Votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Oc6 The Caustic 04-14-04 12:47 AM

Yo
 
Breakdown homies:

$$UPREME:
Nice opener. You had a very good structure which keep your rhyme nice and solid, nice clean flow. You had the better Punchlines also, plus your personly's were on the spot:
"$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*"
Thats the punch and personly's I'm talking about, I felt that this was one of your best. You came at him at the end, defending youself also, nice flow.

Chalk:
Your structure was very weak and all of your rhymes were basic. Get at him with more Personly's and punches. You had some punches but I felt that $$UPREME had better ones. I was feelin' your vocab and flow, just work on your punches and personly's.

VOTE: $$UPREME.


return da favor: Oc6 The Caustic VS spitfire.

$$UPREME 04-14-04 10:38 AM

Uppin 4 Votes....
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

$$UPREME 04-14-04 02:43 PM

Uppin 4 Votes.......
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 06:04 PM

Don't Use All That Fancy Text Shit' Fucks Up Your Flow!!.. Like Red & Black.. .. Lol DAMN

And I Can't Vote Here.. No Crew Votes' ...

$$UPREME 04-14-04 06:14 PM

chalk clorox you still want a rematch,............$$$

Renegade23 04-14-04 09:58 PM

Flow. punches, structure, vocab, rhymin was all done betta by $$upreme
Chalk ur shit was jus plain weak n' ha nuttin to it
My vote goes to $$UPREME


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