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$$UPREME VS. chalk clorox
i set up .....
you got til 8:30 west coast time... drop first... |
check in........
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THIS IS WHAT EVERYONE HAS BEEN PATIENTLY WAITING FOR.....
IF THIS IS WHAT YOU WANT THIS IS WHAT YOU GET..... $$UPREME------- I SPRAY-YOU-ON THEN JUST TAKE-YOU-OFF LIKE A REAL GRAFFITI ARTIST* U JUST PLAY-ME-CLOSE LIKE VAMPIRES DONT BITE ME I AM DA HARDEST* OPTIONS TO KILL: LYRICS,GUNS,KNIVES,BOMBS* POPPIN-2-MANY-PILLS WOULDN'T COMPARE TO THE STATE OF MY QUALMS* YOUR BOUT TO SUFFER A CONCUSSION YOUR HEAD WILL BE TRACED BY A LINE OF CHALK* CALL ME LUDACRIS I THROW-DEM-BOWS AND LEAVE YA WERE PEOPLE WALK* $$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX* I-SHAKE-HATERS OFF LIKE FLEAS-ON-DOGS* C-FLAKES-LATER LIKE TONY THE TIGER ON HIS JOG* IT'S GONNA-BE-A-WHILE TILL I LOSE GO GRAB A SNICKERS* CUZ I COME WIT MORE NUTS THEN EVER BETTER GROW-SOME-QUICKER* PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT* OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE* CHALK CLOROX --------- JUST GOT FADED------------------ |
I Droped First???????
U Were Supposed To Go First.... Deadline Was 8:30 Your Late Chump......... But I'll Give U A Break..... |
STOP LYING.....BITCH.....
YO COMPUTER IS WORKING GOOD....... FACE IT YOU GOT FADED....... $$UPREME |
I Said I Wouldn't Do No Rematches ....
I Don't Want To Beat U Twice.... But If U Want After This... I'll Battle You 100000000 Times... If U Want............ |
preme took this one easly wit better punches and struckture it was alot longer to good work
chalk good battle you should have made it a lot more expansive and u should have used better vocab good battle |
Thanx ...
Koopa .... Honest Vote........ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ |
You'll Need To Applogize......1,000,000,000
Every Time... |
supreme took this one had a good flow and some hard punchz and good structure wit a couple of good personalz
best linez $$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX* clorox i didnt see much in this battle linez were real short and weak punchz when u had em get some worplay an stretch ya linez out a lil bit best linez ..........money signs in your name? thats a weird a occurence, you could have had a heart, but you couldnt afford insurence............ vote/supreme vote on my shit |
easily won by $$umpreme, ol dude, eww, sucky ass structure
$$ had great punches $$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX* like that one PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT* OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE* and that one V/ Defently $$upreme return honest favs, like here: Nephew J vs Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117337 |
Thanks.....
Much Luv....... Uppin 4 Votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
Yo
Breakdown homies:
$$UPREME: Nice opener. You had a very good structure which keep your rhyme nice and solid, nice clean flow. You had the better Punchlines also, plus your personly's were on the spot: "$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*" Thats the punch and personly's I'm talking about, I felt that this was one of your best. You came at him at the end, defending youself also, nice flow. Chalk: Your structure was very weak and all of your rhymes were basic. Get at him with more Personly's and punches. You had some punches but I felt that $$UPREME had better ones. I was feelin' your vocab and flow, just work on your punches and personly's. VOTE: $$UPREME. return da favor: Oc6 The Caustic VS spitfire. |
Uppin 4 Votes....
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Don't Use All That Fancy Text Shit' Fucks Up Your Flow!!.. Like Red & Black.. .. Lol DAMN
And I Can't Vote Here.. No Crew Votes' ... |
chalk clorox you still want a rematch,............$$$
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Flow. punches, structure, vocab, rhymin was all done betta by $$upreme
Chalk ur shit was jus plain weak n' ha nuttin to it My vote goes to $$UPREME |
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