spitfire-+ vs Oc6 The Caustic
 

no d/r vots
crewhate vots
10-25 linz
no bullshyt

an u go 1st

Aight. I'll post within' 25 mins. Cool?

yurr

My Verse
 

Ok dawg. Here's my verse. (Done in 15-20 mins)

Battle with Oc6, leaving ya fucked up signing off ya disability check/
You couldn't spit fire if I put hot sauce on the mic and you swallowed it/

People say I'm too young for this game to be on top/
But you couldn't be more of a man even if ya balls dropped/

You burn the innocent? We'll I burn the fuckin' guilty/
And your guilty of losing this battle, voted by the Frontline Emcees/

Your a helpless row-boat getting sunk in my sick flow/
You'll get hit with a lyrical wave that will lay you next to the titanic victims down below/

The way your leading your un-organized style into war, you must be a chaotic chief/
But I'll lay your whole army of lyrics out as if i was a psychotic belief

No one can handle my vocab., It'll have your brains stirred/
And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/

So the next time you see this face, remember who had you shook/
I usually like my fresh meat raw, but you have just been pre-cooked/

Hit it up my homie

Come on man, you have been online for at least a half over. You had plenty of time,lets go

It's been a whole HOUR! I smell pre-written........Spit your verse!

itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\

lets blaze the field up an tie him up in it\\
yu"ll be burned up worser than ashes matta fact u won't be shyte\\

im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\
i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\

im lyrical acclaimed to let tha innocent die\\
u will be my next victum i shread up, stabb u in da heart an tear out cha eyes\\

this isn't offical pain its just why u hurr so enjoy\\
i grabb u will u sleep drag u out side feedchu to my as if u were a chew toy\\

im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\
want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\

im quick to notice a victum of defeat\\
how u ask 1st i grabb u by there hand and chop off there feet\\

then i toss the remains into a selective ponds \\
you won't be found again till a legal statement in court an then sum agreeable bonds\\

itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\

lets blaze the field up an tie him up in it\\
yu"ll be burned up worser than ashes matta fact u won't be shyte\\

im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\
i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\

im lyrical acclaimed to let tha innocent die\\
u will be my next victum i shread up, stabb u in da heart an tear out cha eyes\\

this isn't offical pain its just why u hurr so enjoy\\
i grabb u while u sleep drag u out side feedchu to dog my as if u were a chew toy\\

im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\
want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\

im quick to notice a victum of defeat\\
how u ask 1st i grabb u by there hand and chop off there feet\\

then i toss the remains into a selective ponds \\
you won't be found again till a legal statement in court an then sum agreeable bonds\\

uppin in dem votes

Finally. UPPIN FOR VOTES^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

This was a good battle y'all both dropped some nice shit....Oc6 you had good punches, you flowed well, an you snuck in a few multies, no personals or wordplay but solid verse, liked it playa.
Spitfire..your verse was good you had ok punches, your flow was ok, jus like Oc6 you had no personals or wordplay, but you had an ok verse.
For me it came down to the openers
Oc6: Battle with Oc6, leaving ya fucked up signing off ya disability check/
You couldn't spit fire if I put hot sauce on the mic and you swallowed it/
Spitfire:itte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\
Oc6's opener was way stronger than spitfire's, an for me that won the battle, but y'all both need to elevate but good battle.
Vote: Oc6

itte sum nice clean votes

i agree wit triple n both of yall came real strong
oc6-u had some real good shit i liked yo flow homie u had some good vocab some good struture and good punches

worstline-You burn the innocent? We'll I burn the fuckin' guilty/
And your guilty of losing this battle, voted by the Frontline Emcees/

wont feelin dat ^^^^^

bestline-
And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/
^^^ did dat rhyme wit stirred???

spit- descent verse not all dat but it was descent u also had good structure vocab and punches

bestline-im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\
i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\

wostline-im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\
want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\

some of yo sentences was longer than the otha u need 2 even it out but all in out love yo flow 2 be new

oc6
punches-7/10
struture-8/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
start-8/10
ending-9/10
overall-9/10

spit-
punches-7/10
struture-8/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
start-9/10
ending-8/10
overall-9/10

imma base this on how many personals and spit won personals since yall tied in overall so vote to spit

Good lookin on the honest vote Choppa. UPPIN for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^

itte we need sum good clean votes hurr

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 dem votes

uppin in dem votes

punches: caustic
flow causetic
breakdown: caustic u did good but theres room for improvement cuz u could do better
spitfire ur good for a rookie keep practicing
my vote caustic

Thanks street. Uppin on those VOTES^^^^^^^^^ drop a link, I'll hit it up, holla.

tte hurr comes anotha one 4 tha kidds\\
imma bout to teach Oc6 The Caustic a lesson he will never 4get\\
... yeah.. weak.

lets blaze the field up an tie him up in it\\
yu"ll be burned up worser than ashes matta fact u won't be shyte\\
... yeah... weak. also, poor flow, simple rhyme

im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\
i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\
not great strucuture, weak but existent punch

im lyrical acclaimed to let tha innocent die\\
u will be my next victum i shread up, stabb u in da heart an tear out cha eyes\\
again, poor structure, overused punch, not much going on here

this isn't offical pain its just why u hurr so enjoy\\
i grabb u will u sleep drag u out side feedchu to my as if u were a chew toy\\
feedch to my... what? dog? even so this is weak

im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\
want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\
yeah... kinda getting repetetive hear, and the lines are too long

im quick to notice a victum of defeat\\
how u ask 1st i grabb u by there hand and chop off there feet\\
the first line was ok, but this went nowhere

then i toss the remains into a selective ponds \\
you won't be found again till a legal statement in court an then sum agreeable bonds\\
second line waaay too long. "selective ponds" .. wtf? your second line was also weak

Overall man, you gotta elevate. Work on some actual punches instead of just "im gonna kill you" shit, work on multis, work on rhymes, work on worldplay, work on structure.

Like this:

"
No one can handle my vocab., It'll have your brains stirred/
And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/"

See how its an actual diss, more elevated wordplay and then he uses a personal.

oc6.. you gotta work on your structure too though. not great in this one, and it didn't flow together well. also work a bit on punches, although you were definetely better.

v/caustic

Thanks Shadow, i'll take this input in, appreciated.

d/r votes i smell

rofl. i said his was weak, yours was just much weaker. grow a pair man.

spit fire...hurry up and drop....i dropped first just for you kid

Yo Wildfire, hit this battle up with a vote and I'll return. Spit, its called honest feedback, watch and learn kid.

aight caustic i got you.....lemme read this shit...

aight i'm gonna be honest..OC6....you have done much better...but i guess everybody raises the bar when it's required to compete...your verse was enough to win....but i wasnt really feelin the punches that much...onl;y thing you really had that was good was structure..no disrespect...i know for a fact you can do better..so don't even worry about it

spit fire...i'm almost sad to say i can't say the same for you...your verse was weak as fuck...you had no wordplay...no good punchlines..no personals..you didn't have anything...stay up tho....i'm sure you can elevate if you just take a look at what everybody else is doin

what is everyone talking about....flow disses personals everything went to oc 6 ...now maybe it wasn't his sharpest shit...but it was most definetly tight...

vote oc