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Shadows edge vs Denver Max
You spit first, 10-14 lines cuz I'm tired, drop and I'll drop in 20 minutes
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alright. this is my "spit"
If this were monopoly, you'd be Baltic Avenue I'd ofcourse be boardwalk, where i'd sit and laugh at you. I'd have hotels on my lot, and i'd lay in my cot you'd be my butler, i like my porridge hot. I'll make you sweat cause my rhymes are so ill Get you healthy and fit like the george forman grill. You've got trouble with your gameplan like the philadelphia eagles i'll make you run like a flock of seagulls. I dont know what else to say cause i hate rap but i really like Michael Bolton..... |
hahahhahhahahhhhhahahha........................... ..............................wow that was tight....finally something original
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He posted that in the bitch slapped thread: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...947#post1230947 |
and...........???????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????are you going to come back?
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yeah sorry, i fucked up. i am deeply, deeply sorry.
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oh shit, I didn't realize you put it here too. sorry man. anyway, I'm tired so I'm just keystyling this shit:
BETWEEN THE TWO OF US, YOU FINISH THIRD CANT MACH THE MASTER OF THE WRITTEN WORD ID BE ANOREXIC IF I FED OF YOUR RHYMES N ID GET CHANGE IF I BOUGHT YOUR GIRL FOR TWO DIMES YO I SPIT FIRE, THIS BATTLE IS LIKE A LIVING CREMATION DONT APROACH THIS MAN, IM GODS ONE DAY CREATION YOUR RAP CAREER ABOUT TO BE ON PERMANENT VACATION GET BACK TO BEING ON N'SYNC'S BACKUP BAND, FOOL I RIP THE MIC SO HARD I TOOK YOUR HAND TOO LEAVES YOU WITH 5 FINGERS TO COUNT THE DICKS YOU JERCKED AND ME 5 FINGERS, ONE FOR EACH HERB CREW I MERCKED |
lol .. didn't even notice that my CAPS LOCK was on ^^
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Ok, I was helping my room mate with some homework, I'm sorry, please find it in your heart to forgive me. Shit, look at my rhyme, no way did I spend more than 5 minutes on that. |
damn...can crew vote on this battle? cause if so my vote goes to shadows edge....shadow...you prolly didn't even know i wad down with Ill mental did you?...lol...decent drop the denver...u gonna drop on our battle?...by the way'
vote on this please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119249 |
denmax/ stru 8/10
/flow it was hott 9/10 /punches hella blow 10/10 /img 10/10 nice but u wasn't good enough ovall/ 8/10 shadow/ stru 9/10 /flow crazy hott 10/10 /punches itte 9/10 /img 10/10 shyte i was felling datt ova all 10/10 v/shadow |
yeah crew votes i guess so long as you explain that shit. yo spit you gotta actaully vote in the poll man ^^
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uppin, can I at least get one fucking vote ^^ drop a link, I'll return the favor
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Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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haha....i'm still laughin and i heard this verse yesterday....mayhe people don't get it....hahah
but it was a tight battle, they came with it BETWEEN THE TWO OF US, YOU FINISH THIRD CANT MACH THE MASTER OF THE WRITTEN WORD thatwas pretty tight....but not in the same way....it wasn't original like denvers shit If this were monopoly, you'd be Baltic Avenue I'd ofcourse be boardwalk, where i'd sit and laugh at you. I'd have hotels on my lot, and i'd lay in my cot you'd be my butler, i like my porridge hot. I'll make you sweat cause my rhymes are so ill Get you healthy and fit like the george forman grill. You've got trouble with your gameplan like the philadelphia eagles i'll make you run like a flock of seagulls. I dont know what else to say cause i hate rap but i really like Michael Bolton..... sick sick ssick flowed well sick punchlines....sick everything this kids tight vote denver |
this battle was tight
shadows edge has got skills i know cuz he's used them on me both rappers had good flow and structure i was feelin it and both threw some good punches. i'd say they were even all tha way but i have to give it 2 Denver purely on originality!! Denver wins!! Vote on my battles so i can start rippin some new talent http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119318 |
this is why i hate herb votes ^^. whatever, shit's getting canceled anyway.
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uppin for votes...for these two this was tight ....................................... :thumbup:
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read this shit...it's pretty good.............................................. ........uppin
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uppin this is a good battle............................................ .................uppin
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You've got trouble with your gameplan like the philadelphia eagles
i'll make you run like a flock of seagulls. I dont know what else to say cause i hate rap but i really like Michael Bolton..... denver..that verse was really good..accept for that last part.in my oppinion you fucked yourself over hardcore with that...i really liked your other lines..but that is just horrible shadow...your verse was decent..nothin great..just consistent the whole way through..decent punches./..good structure...decent personals...it doesn't get any better than decent tho...but my vote goes to you shadow |
Vote- Shadow
Had Better PUnches, Made MOre Sense, Better Flow, Nice Structure, Need To Work On Wordplay. Denver, came weak, once again, you needa elevate, ok flow, no good punches, structure was nice, and wordplay could have been better. Shadow=Vote |
i thank jpoll uped this battle more than anybody smell like some dick rydin but shit check it
shadows edge easily won this denver your verse was original but punchs werent even that strong to me no personals either kind of a garbage battle verse and shadows edge kind of a weak verse from you 2 not that many personals a few good punchs but wordplay wasnt there either but still a better verse overall |
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stop freaking free posting ^^ vote or dont leave a link
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Aight Shadow took this by way of the crowds so he desrve it N oh Denver damn you got some Dr freinds
vote: Shadow its a wrapp |
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