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adamtomo vs. WildFire
10-30 bars
no dick ridin no hate votes you spit first |
do uz a favour man,u spit first i aint done this b4,
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you go first...or no battle...theres no guarntee how long you will take after i drop my verse...
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ok..... no guarantee.ok holla at this.....u wana battle against me ur tounge ul get sore/my rap styles raw uz a backstreet whore/i dnt mean no disrespect/i just u want u yo put me to the test/give me sum shit 2 spit against n ill show u im the best
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is that your verse????????????????????????????????
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yep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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your rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard..
you want feedback? your style is absurd... i don't even need to rhyme to beat you my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you notice i said you needed 10-30 bars you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars see you lose cause you ignored the rules left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crime |
Alright, quick and simple. The nod to WildFire.
Adam, your rhymes were weak, pointless and unoriginal (since you basically copied the first part of the rhyme you posted in Emcee Introductions). Plus, you were too short and didn't adhere to the rules. Wild, that shit was way below your level but, reading Adam's rhyme, I guess I can understand why you didn't even really try. "You had 5...thats 25 short...ya I like cars"???? wtf? Anyway, yeah...obviously you won. Oh, and buy the way, in most places suicide is technically illegal. ;) WildFire wins. |
my style is absurd,twisted and warped for words
but im here 2 b heard so listen as i spit the verb. u dnt need rhyme 2 beat me? bitch dont fukin treat me, im an mc-i spit neatly. whats all this about-i like cars? i like the fukin stars/ but i dnt feel the need to go put that in my bars! i might sound like an illiterate fool,but yo i think thats cool were lacking a bit of od school.but i didnt make the rule so this is wot i think of ur rhyme,its lazy n outta time, oh yeh and by the way,........................ suicide IS a crime. |
you know..that was OK....not better than OK tho...thing is...i could easily beat that...you tried to trick me..and i knew you would...you decided to break the rules...you said that above rhyme was your verse...if you want to try again...you gon' have to make a new thread...i wouldn't do that tho if i were you...anyways...nice try...i saw it commin
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Okay you fucked up by not followin the rules.
Technically, Wild fire won because his verse was easily better than your first, his punches were better, everything was better you tried to trick him just so you could have a chance at winning, which is why I will not vote for you. Besides that, your verse wasn't good even after you tricked him you had soft ass punchlines, no metas no anything |
i wasnt tryin trick u, jst neva done this b4, but now i know the score,ill b cumin back 4 more,i didnt understand the rules,u made me look a fool. thanx 4 ur time. catchya lata.
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battle me
u fancy another battle wildfire? or anyone?????????????????????????
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you spit first...and I'll battle you again...but in the mean time lets get some votes to close this shit
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yo vote back on my battles fellas:
alright, check it. all 3 verses in this thread sucked hard, but basically wild had enough to win.. i mean wtf was that adam.. you had like 5 lines, does'nt even meet the minimum for a battle in front lines, not to mention that you had no good punches. v/ wildfire. |
ya dude..i know the verseses sucked...you know I'm better than that so it's cool tho...thanks for the vote..uppin
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uppin for votes to close this......................
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uppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn................... .....
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alright here it is the vote goes to wildfire.....should there even have to be an explanation....NO....he ripped him and i can tell he didn't even try....
he rhymes flow and personals were all tight.... he's had better....but the other kid wasn't very good I've read him have better shit, but it was still tigyour rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard.. you want feedback? your style is absurd... i don't even need to rhyme to beat you my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you notice i said you needed 10-30 bars you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars see you lose cause you ignored the rules left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crimeht read it |
wild fire won this easily his rhymes had more punches...but adam ..damn nigga u gotta work on ya shit ..u aint bad but yet u aint good neither keep tryin nigga
wild fire u keep rhymin nigga u doing great !!! v//wildfire |
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