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franchiZE vs. Shadows edge
U know tha rules bitch!
I like it fast and hard 25 lines max 15 lines min I spit first homey! |
checkin in and leaving for class, I'll be back in an hour or so, then i gotta eat lunch. ill drop by like 1 or so Central Time.
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Check it, I'm gonna flip tha script!!
You know i'm tha franchiZZy and my lyrics are tha shizzy// i'll put you in a head daze spitting endless shit 2 make ya dizzy// my style is unique like an antique and my flow is tha number 1 original// i got a full license for tha mic you ain't even got ure provisional// i'm the thrilla from manilla and u jst the ice without tha vanilla// like lightning i strike givin you the five knuckle shuffle to leave u unsteady// then wiv my clawed hand i silently creep into ure dreams to slaughter u like my name is freddy// i stand tall rockin tha set fillin tha crowd with much anticipation// with my rage building up inside i'll drop u with a lyrical decapitation// i dominate this rap shit furious and fast, i light you up to smoke u like i smoke tha grass// just so you can remember me i'm gonna leave an imprint of my size 12 ridges in ure ass// i'm the invincible rap killa so u need to sit ure ass down and be quiet// my flow is rated ten star whilst u about as clever as a skinny kid on a diet// i drop bombs like a terrorist creating quakes that go off the richter scale// i leave u bringin up chunks just like stifler after a taste of the pale ale// i originate straight from the depths of hell and my powers are satanic// u need to take ure nursery rhyme shit back 2 school or u'll sink like tha titanic// my first battle was wack but u should know that i didn't even flex my muscle// i'm a 24 carat playa reelin u in like a fish so i can work my hustle// u call ureself the shadows edge keepin ure flow in the dark// well i'm the shining sun exposin u for tha fake ass bitch that u are// forget this rap battle it don't matta if i get beat// cuz everyone knows that u belong chantin junior rhymes on tha street.// |
aight.. checking in just got back. your drop was longer than i expected, so ill drop in like half an hour..
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Yo check it, I wrote this shit in quick reply....
Yo quit the lies, you only work for one franchise You know the one that sells big macs n fries Dip your rhymes in the oil just to make your verse slick Wishing there was a super size button for your dick… I’m an Ill Mental MC, merking you is in my line of duty Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity Your punches couldn’t deliver if they was Dominoes When you at the mic, rap reaches new fucking lows Yo I’ma have to disfranchise you from the rap nation Soon you hear me diss franchiZe on every rap station Only time you ever hustled was chasing the ice cream truck Check it dumb fuck, eating lucky charms won’t bring you luck Your just a fat ass diabetic but your rhymes anorexic Just check your name, it’s clear your dyslexic Got my rap gun cocked, now I squeeze the trigger .22 caliber rhymes, leave a nigga disfigured 0-0, your record looks like fucking fruit loops You like a teenage girl the way you listen to fruit groups |
breakdown for franchize
flow-alright basic nothing too clever but good job 6/10 volcab-in spots it was really on but for most of it like at the start and the end it was lacking 6/10 punches-a few alright punches nothing great but my fav,"my flow is rated ten star whilst u about as clever as a skinny kid on a diet//" mostly played topic though 6/10 overall-18/30 well rounded verse but with room to improve breakdown for shadows edge- flow-straight no off spots good job 7/10 volcab-basic here i think the only real spot where you lack to your oppenent 5/10 punches-nice lines some alittle played but overall you out punched your oppenent best line,"Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity" 7/10 overall-19/30 good job still room to upgrade though vote--shadows edge |
uppin ^ give me a link and i will drop an honest vote.
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mother fucking uppin ^^ can i get some votes.. just drop a link ill give an honest vote
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i tink this battle was really weak no disrespecting i saw this battle like
DirtyBoy69 saw it...good shit both of u.. Vote=Edge |
uppin for some votes... 4 more and this shit will stop.. just drop a link and i return the favor
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come on people
up these votes and wen u done vote on these: franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
wtf with all the herb battles I can't get a damn vote in here.
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c'mon ppl up these votes
and then vote on my other battles franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
like lightning i strike givin you the five knuckle shuffle to leave u unsteady//
then wiv my clawed hand i silently creep into ure dreams to slaughter u like my name is freddy// i drop bombs like a terrorist creating quakes that go off the richter scale// i leave u bringin up chunks just like stifler after a taste of the pale ale// i think these line killed it. franchise ya flow was kinda off but u had much better vocab, punches hit a lil harder. edge had a good line tho: Yo quit the lies, you only work for one franchise You know the one that sells big macs n fries a sick opener i liked that. very close battle: franchise return the favour pls http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119203 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119416 |
thanx 4 tha vote playa
i'm gonna vote on ure battles 2 can i get some more votes on my ova battles and i'll return tha favour franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
Edge Came Harder, His punches Hit, And Had Ok Personals, Wordplay Was Decent, Flow Was Good, STructure Could Be Better Though. This was A Long Battle, I Excepted More, Frachize Came Weak, Some PUnches Hit, Ok Flow, Bad Wordplay, No Personals That Made Me Impressed, Vote Edge
I'll Poll my Vote After YOu Vote HERe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119363 |
aight i voted man.. uppin for votes dont sleep on this people. drop a link and i will vote honest.
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Breakdown:
Punches: Shadow Metas: Shadow Multies: Neither Wordplay: Neither Flow: Shadow Disses: Shadow Overall-This Battle Was One-Sided.Shadow Took This One With Stronger Punches And More Complexity.He Also Had Better Flow & Disses.His Opening Was Tight & His Ending Was Nice Too.He Had A Few Flaws With His Flow & Punch Delivery.Some His Lines Were A Lil Weak Too But He Still Takes This One.Franchize's Verse Had Too Many Fillers And Weak Punches.He Had A Choppy Flow And In Some Parts He Seemed To Be Just Talking.He Needed To Focus More On His Opponent Then Himself. Vote-Shadows edge |
3-0 .......... drop a link, I'll give an honest vote.
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come on lets get sum more votes on this battle
drop a link and i'll vote 4 ure battles franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
damn uppin this battle a shit load and a shit load of lines 2 but check it
shadows edge had a good opener and closer but the middle wasnt that good but you had some solid punchs threw it and you had a good flow to it franchizzy lol had some good punchs in there 2 just inconsitent with them like the other 1 said focus on your opponent find shit about him 2 use against him more vote shadows edge barely good battle |
shadows edge take this, das sum good shit, but your finisher coulda been better if u said sumin bout food groups cuz dat fruit group was dumb and off set the good line before it. st8 up good shit tho real nice punches
other cat take notes on how he did dem punches. take everyday things and use wordplay makin 'em punchlines das dat ticket. hah. but gyeah do that like these two by dat guy Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity Your punches couldn’t deliver if they was Dominoes das how ya do it on here. vote-shadow yo dis my second battle i voted of your franchise hit up my battles |
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