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JPoll 04-14-04 04:11 PM

BATTLE: Jpoll vs. bitch(franchize)
 
8 lines
no dr
no crew
no hate

bring it

JPoll 04-14-04 04:16 PM

spit in the next 10 minutes
then i'll throw mine up right quick

franchiZe 04-14-04 04:24 PM

da franchiZe is checkin in and he's ready to drop some knowledge on dis bitch JPoll

Check it............
JPoll u a flyweight whilst i'm new to RB but i'm a heavyweight//
i'll crush you with my bare hands and serve u up on a plate//
the J in JPoll stands for Junior, u a minor league baby//
i ain't even payin attention to this battle cuz i'm fuckin ure lady//
but wait, i forgot u don't play that way so i betta shut up fast//
not that it matters cuz how can u hear me when u too busy takin it up tha ass//
now who's that wit u dog, god damn u gettin freaky wit ure brother//
u like to keep it in tha family playa, if u were straight u wud probably be fuckin ure mother.//

JPoll 04-14-04 04:33 PM

weak kidd.............................................. ............wow how many peopel have used those exact lines....did copy paste or what...haha

weak
get original you idiot........think for yourself......haha....GAy jokes that's so played .......J is for junior was used just yesterday hahah...that's weak shit


well anyway here's my shit
hey and i thought it up all by myself...unlike, well you

yo yo
yo wack....this is easy....some of your shit didn't even rhyme...haha

FranBITCH, ya Ho i'm coming at you,
I laughed every second til ya rhyme was thru,
You claimin UK, well that's a shame,
I'd lie if that was me, I'd claim the Ukraine,
Unoriginal BITCH, that don't ever flow,
Stop the copy and pastin, and make yo shit grow,
Franchize, HA!, maybe in your own camp,
Cause everyone else is giving you the "NOBODY" stamp

it's ova

and next time write your own shit loser

franchiZe 04-14-04 04:37 PM

please bitch
look at u tryin to big ureself up b4 u start rappin
u da unoriginal wanksta cuz i've heard that shit b4
maybe when u've got some real skillz u wont have to try and swing tha vote b4 u even get started

Get votin ppl cuz we all know who tha tru joker is here

JPoll 04-14-04 04:38 PM

haha

look at my first battle....u use two exact lines from it hahah
week bitch

franchiZe 04-14-04 04:44 PM

we'll let tha votes show who's tha weak ass bitch

JPoll 04-14-04 04:46 PM

come on boy............your flow is terrible.............ur shit's uneven and no multi's it's brutal :spit:

Shadows edge 04-14-04 04:57 PM

weak battle all around... n shit's supposed to be 10 lin min. anyway, JPoll takes it for flow. both y'all had weak punches, franchiZe had more but all of his were unoriginal and his lines were way too fucking long, flow way off. JPoll came with a personal (franBTICH was weak though..) about the UK, so at least that's an effort. THe J = Junior we've all fucking heard...

v/JPoll but both of you guys need to fucking elevate.

JPoll 04-14-04 05:07 PM

uppin


getinto it

ya dig?
let us know.............................................. ..............................

M.F.P 04-14-04 05:09 PM

i have to agree with shadow both ur raps sucked but Jpoll had a lil more flow.

punches both ya'll pretty much were the same
vocab i got to go with Jpoll
flow was Jpoll

vote Jpoll

JPoll 04-14-04 05:21 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. :laugh:

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-14-04 05:24 PM

Alright' ..... Shit Was Weak On.. Both Verses' ....!!! So Let Me Drop It Like Thiss

..

Check JPoll's Lines:

FranBITCH, ya Ho i'm coming at you,
I laughed every second til ya rhyme was thru,

^Could Use Some Work But An Alright Opener!! 7/10

You claimin UK, well that's a shame,
I'd lie if that was me, I'd claim the Ukraine,

^^Probably One Of Your Best Lines' ... 9/10

Unoriginal BITCH, that don't ever flow,
Stop the copy and pastin, and make yo shit grow

^Good Punchline 9/10

Franchize, HA!, maybe in your own camp,
Cause everyone else is giving you the "NOBODY" stamp

^Weak Closer But Good Enough To Cast You The Vote!!!

Vote: JPoll!!!

JPoll 04-14-04 05:25 PM

keep the votin up................................................ ................................

Inception 04-14-04 05:26 PM

jpoll getz it for bein original and not usin the same gay personal on the j shit and for havin a better flow and a couple of good punchz
best linez
Franchize, HA!, maybe in your own camp,
Cause everyone else is giving you the "NOBODY" stamp

franchize dont stretch yo linez out so far an use more metaphorez for harder punchlinez that shti get u a win almost everytime

JPoll 04-14-04 05:37 PM

uppin for votes...let's get some honest shit///////////////////////////////////

Denver Max 04-14-04 05:45 PM

i say jpoll wins based on these lines alone:
You claimin UK, well that's a shame,
I'd lie if that was me, I'd claim the Ukraine,
Unoriginal BITCH, that don't ever flow,
Stop the copy and pastin, and make yo shit grow,

jpolls flowed well, kingz didn't even rhyme sometimes. i vote for jpoll.


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