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Ghost354 vs. franchiZe
check it ghost, i'm ready to rhyme
u know tha rules 10 lines min 15 lines max no d/r no hate u spit first. Now drop ure shit and i'll follow. |
ite checkin in
gimme 30 minutez for this blind spit |
check it
let u know ima flow in this bytch like"Pacz spirit"im"ghostly"/ lyricz makin ya head "spin" like "ring around the rosie"/ ill take ya name "franchize" like im in a #3 rocketz jersey/ got "hot barz" meltin u like a stove top "hershey"/ u betta off gettin a sex change an switchin to francine/ leave the u.k.,get at"kay slay"an become the"drama queen"/ if that dont work u can alwayz belly dance on broadway/ be on stage dressed like ya av in a homoerotic produced play/ thinkin u ready to rhyme, but sound like u ready to square dance/ find the time,to get that camel toe from showin in them tite pantz/ im only doin 10 didnt really feal like postin |
Nice spit, now check this shit
in my last battle u said i need 2 use more metaphors// u fuckin annoyin like a crazy bitch with menopause// u may be the ghost but i'll be the one 2 scare// i leave u cryin in the corner with nasty stains in ure underwear// ure rhymes stink like a fat man with diarrhoea// ure about as popular as an in-bred with gonorrhoea// with that tired ass spit u wrote ure own will// i'm like oxide & neutrino cuz i shoot 2 kill// u call ureself a rapper yet u aint got no flow// u really work at pizza hut, i'll take a 12 inch to go// so u think i'm a bitch who cant cut it with you// with ure dick its like scooby-doo..."Where the fuck are you?"// if i was in ure shoes i'd be ready to migrate// u can't get no play, here's a dildo......set it to vibrate.// |
come on playaz
lets get some votes on this shit |
^ thatz how u posta do it thatz better
uppin |
yo much respect 2 u 4 tha advice
guess that shit worked gud battle!! |
c'mon up these votes man
send me the links 2 and i'll give an honest vote to ure battles |
wats up wit u people
get in here and vote and if u drop tha links i'll drop a vote on y'all battles |
both of u came good in this battle but i tink franchise player came a bit harder
twisting the script feel me... Vote=Franchise |
with ure dick its like scooby-doo..."Where the fuck are you?"// fanchises best line
ill take ya name "franchize" like im in a #3 rocketz jersey/ ghost's best line those are more of what u need, take other things *(word play) and turn them into punches, das what battlin is all about. to really take a battle have every bar do that. ghost played off franchise's name really good, but fran had a better finisher, wit another wordplay punch. fran had two of 'em and ghost had one real punch vote-franchise get at my other battles |
thanx 4 tha votes playas
Truth u need to poll vote as well as just postin it Get votin on my other battles homeys franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 |
up these fuckin votes man cuz i need 2 free up a spot soon
i'll vote on ures 2 if u vote on mine franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 |
uppin these votes man
vote on my ova battles and i'll return da favour franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
isn't SIMILIE..when you compare things with the word "Like""? oh well...
that was a good line regardless.....i'll vote later |
ayo this was a hott battle...i think ghost came hard but franchize came jus a lil bit harder...nice verses from both...franchize had better personals and wordplay and structure...and i was feelin ghost's verse until the last couple bars shyt didnt stay consistent overall good battle...
"u may be the ghost but i'll be the one 2 scare// i leave u cryin in the corner with nasty stains in ure underwear//" ^^ LOL NICE BAR ~1~ |
franchize had better punch lines than ghost did
i feel fran connected better than ghost did and frans lines were better also.... ghost u had sum good shit also u juss keeep workin man and u should have it in tha bag ..fran had sum tight ass rhymes but he won it by far v//franchize |
get uppin these votes on this here tight ass battle
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Franchize came harder wit his punches
Punches Fran Flow- Fran vocab-Fran Multis- Fran u may be the ghost but i'll be the one 2 scare// i leave u cryin in the corner with nasty stains in ure underwear// so u think i'm a bitch who cant cut it with you// with ure dick its like scooby-doo..."Where the fuck are you?"// 2 really solid bars, basically beat down anythin' ghost had to offer. |
Franchise:
franchise..wut waz this? in my last battle u said i need 2 use more metaphors// u fuckin annoyin like a crazy bitch with menopause// ??? it doesn't even rhyme...but if it did...i guess it went wrong..well anyways...this battle sucked... punch= 7/10 multi=????? thought into it=5/10 overall: 7/10 ghost: aight...ur flow basicly wasn't good enough to beat franchise, cuz his punches were just enough to beat you..though they were'nt that good..just enough... Punch:6/10 multi:????? Thought into it:4/10 overall:6/10 vote goes to: franchise |
lets get uppin more votes on this battle
vote on my ova battles 2 franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505 |
hey yo pretty good battle
good flow by franchize... flow 9 humor 8 punches 7 personals 7 ghost f 7 humore 8 punches 7 personals 7 tight battle but i gotta give it to fran u may be the ghost but i'll be the one 2 scare// i leave u cryin in the corner with nasty stains in ure underwear fave line by fran- |
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