realistdoggy11 vs. franchiZe
 

I set this shit up so listen up!!

U know tha rules by now so check it

10 mins to spit

10 - 20 lines max.
no d/r
no hate
no crew

u spit first!
the mins start when u check in homey!!

ok im checkin in

get ure shit goin then doggy

come on doggy u only s'posed to get 10 minutes
u already had ure ten but i'll give u anova 5

rip it quick cuz u dont want a DQ for not respondin

ur not the franchize like the houston rocekt.
i'll put my gun in ur throat sit back and cock it/
if im gettin 2 hard u can tell me 2 stop it/
nah bitch im playin im a sit back and pop it/
u lucky dis aint a talent show cause u know u would lose/
the shit that i spit will have u lyrically confused/
im'a beat u so bad dis battles gonna be on the news/
franchize u like guys so just screw u/
ur mad at me cuz u let michael jackson do u/
u havent hit puberty so im gunna call u fuz nuts/
i fucked ur girl like she was a fuckin lugnut/

bitch im high as a mutha fucka 2

were u at nigga i gave u like 10 minutes but ill give u 20 more seconds

nice shit doggy, like i aint heard that shit b4
now get ready cuz i'm a drop some mad bombs on u

Check it......................
i'm an all-round playa spittin fast, spittin slow//
u got as much hope of winnin as Shaq makin a free-throw//
i thought u had talent but then u opened ure mouth and spoke//
the day u beat me will be the day bill gates goes broke//
this battle is already over, i don't even need to speak//
u might want a paddle tho cuz ure floatin down shits creek//
yo realistdoggy tha shit you spit is wack//
u call ureself realistdoggy cuz u take it up tha crack//
i'm out to slaughter u and state my dominance//
u can't help but lose cuz its ure providence//
for a dumbass like u providence means destiny//
like when ure dad saw u at birth, his providence was a vasectomy//
but then he took a second look and dropped dead on the spot//
and ure mom went crazy and now she's smokin tha pot//
now ure drivin along with ure dad in the hearse//
everyone lookin at u thinkin "who knew evolution could go in reverse"//
i'm gonna stop now, lay you out and please no drama//
here little monkey, choke on this banana!!//

Peace out muthafucka!!

check it playas
lets get uppin these votes

drop sum links and i'll drop sum votes 4 u 2

that was a nice ryme from 8 mile...... get your own shit bitch

yo playa
when people vote they can take that shit out of there and i'll still have ure ass beat
face it ure shit was wack
i gave u ten minutes it took u twenty to write back

it took u more than 10 min to playa i didnt try cause i am high

my shit took so long cuz i was too busy complainin about ure slow ass
i figure u make me wait i make u wait
not that it matters, u cud have had the rest of ure life to spit and u still wudnt come close to me

dog u aint shit if i tryed u would be fukin done plus u pre wrote that shit it has nuthin to do bout me

nah nah playa
it dont have shit bout u cuz i dont need 2 do that 2 win
i got tru skillz that dont require me to bitch off ure lines

but enuff of dis shit
let the votes do tha talkin

get uppin these votes so i can free up a spot

vote on my ova battles and i'll return da favour

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

get uppin these fuckin votes cuz there aint none yet

vote on my ova battles 2
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

punch: $$$
thought into it:$$$
multi's:same

well $$$ won this one..doggy..just keep writtin..ur punches just arn't strong enough..youll get there

i thank franchize got this 1 that rocket punchline was already used on him so that an tha 8 mile shit cancels out and franchise had better punchs that conected doggy came wit some punchs none really that good specially that michael jackson shit is gettin old use rkelly or somethin lol not the best ive seen from either of u though

vote franchize

franchize had better punches he made'em hit a hellalot harder too.....real u did great man but hit those verses harder make ya punches more better all and all it was a great battle between both of yas

v///franchize

aiight i think im gonna have to give this one to franchize..had nice wordplay the structure was good...packed wit some multis...not too many personals but when he did say one it came hard...a for realistdoggy11 his verse was alright but i dont think he came hard enough to take this win...his verse lacked in a few areas..but overall good battle

vote:franchize

franchixe took everything
dog i liked nthing in ur drop work on vocab personal multis and punches oh i guess ur flow was good
fran work on mulktis and personals good punches and very good vocab

my votes goes to franchize...

now realist had some nice flow agaisnt franchize punchline using franshize name and whatnot

but franch had much better punchilines and metaphors
for example.
'm an all-round playa spittin fast, spittin slow//
u got as much hope of winnin as Shaq makin a free-throw//
i thought u had talent but then u opened ure mouth and spoke//
the day u beat me will be the day bill gates goes broke//

hott..

but realist had these nice lines too

ur not the franchize like the houston rocekt.
i'll put my gun in ur throat sit back and cock it/

even if the above liens from him were plagiarized from jay-z,jadakiss,young gunz,, sigh how many people have used franchise 3ike the houston rockets?????