streetsweepa vrs. jpoll
 

this bitch talked shit and said he wants to battle then wouldnt set it up
so im ready
10 line min
no crew votes
no dickriding

oh yea almost forhor bitches spit first so that means u

shit
 

forgot not fohor

u told me u wanna battle what happend?

yo i kno ur online see ur scared firgures i sent u two private messages and evrthing i didnt think u could handle it

Battle me StreetSweepa drop 15 lines ill hit u back peace..

fuck it then man ill post my shit in tha morning naw wait im gonna wait ill take a shower and if u havnt posted by then ur a forshore bitch

naw im not gonna battle u this right here is unfinished buisness im waitin for that dickridin ass jpoll
u want a battle ill set it up for tommorow

watheva dude peace..u wanna battle MIXXED MC DROP A 15 set it up peace

who r u tryin to battle? this is a battle between me and jpoll its unfinished buisness and if u want ta battle waight till tomrow

ill battle u tommorrow......................................... ................peace

if im on nigga battle tonight i might not get on tommorow cuz my comp isint the best computer ever

go to front lines ok
then go to new thread
then type in who vrs who then write the rules then scroll down and it says check the box if u wanna slaughter this face emcee check it and u got urself a battle

i set up the battle me and u

okay let's battle...i've been watching tv all night idiot

nigga u spit first u fucking peice of shit u dickriding asshole

haha....your such a puck....................you even talk shit when i'm not online ....well i'm here now bitch....haha...............haha.....haha......you 're such a fucking NOBODY

im here spit ur hit already jpoll

haha well then you go first...yo bitch always having to go second

fine ill go first u damn cunuck u gotta be such a bitch

hahaha............................................ ........................................do you need a tissue?

I kno your afraid to battle, but ur online//
think about this shit nigga u can run but u cant hide//

You should quit rappin;come on nigga consider it //
what the fucks wrong with u jpoll are u illiterate?//
shut up bitch u kno ur styles wack//
you an triple N dickride evryone knos that//
hes the only vote youll get “ and thats a fact”//
u talk to much shit and you should be smacked//

tripleN might vote for u but no one else will//
all your shit is weak, sorry to inform u rappin takes skill!//
this battle aint over yet, i didnt even move in fo tha kill!//
u dont ryme like 50 u ryme like elvis for rill//
what? U think i wont win? Trust me nigga i WILL!//

for u this is gonna be a fucking disastor//
this shit is gonna be a canadian massacre//
ur my canadian bitch, and im ur master-

even triple _N cant bail u outn this tyme nigga!!

who the hell is triple n he's never voted on any of my wins ....man it's like you're actually retarded....and what happened to the rule is said that was make it 8 LINES YOU FUCKING NOBODY MORON>>>

haha me illerterate.?....haha...i have an education you nobody....hey what gr did you drop out in???

haha

you cant read the rules...???

or maybe rhymes two words with more than one syllable

what are u gonna spit or u just gonna say stuff about thia kid

here it is you trash talkin bitch...what the fuck was your verse....the answer...fuckin elementary....haha....the only time you get good lines is when you steal them...hahaha...your so weak bitch

well heres' my shit
hey remember before you set it up we decided 8 to 10 lines what the fuck you idiot...

well this is easy...his shit is weak...

yo yo
Streetsweepa, you ain't shit, stop wit da threats,
Only language your usin is cussin, like a bitch wit ta-retz,
Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!,
I'm informin ya elvis never rhymed, n well neither do you,
You rhyme like a ref in sports, it's like your all sniffin glue,
N who the fuck is Triple N, i don't even know this kid
A reminder your verse was supposed to on me,not some fucking skid,
My advice to you, is get some new technique,
Start practicing, or stop rhyming you lil worthless geek,
Me illiterate?!?!?,haha you're the one from The D-isease,
I could say anything here and still win, i like my OJ squized,
First you don't follow our rules, then you bring that weak ass shit,
Next time DON'T challenge me, I hate combatting "retard's spit"

haha...you're terrible
consider the streets swept wit yo face motha fucka

uppin............................................. .................................................. ...........

J Pull U Did Aight But As U Went On U Gradualy Didnt Make Enough Sence.....streetsweepa Now That Nigga Made Sence He Rhymed And Made Everything Connect J Poll U Need To Consider To Think

V/streetsweepa

U Can U Way Betta Tho J Poll Srry Tho

tripleN might vote for u but no one else will//
all your shit is weak, sorry to inform u rappin takes skill!//
this battle aint over yet, i didnt even move in fo tha kill!//
u dont ryme like 50 u ryme like elvis for rill//
what? U think i wont win? Trust me nigga i WILL!//

didnt like rhyme pattern of that. too simular sounds very basic yo

Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!,

best line in the battle. nice feed yo. took advantage of him not stating that in his rules good job

ya flow was hot too.

jpoll took this

good battle tho

respect

nice battlle...i would have to give this to jpoll

he was all around betta....i was feelin his flow more....good flow to street....

jpol: you had betta meta4s and betta evrythin just about....good punches..you got potiential kid...you just need to work on structure and your vocab...all in all6/10

street: you need somework on your vocab meta4s and punches...you should have came wit some personals..evryone loves good personals...jsut given some advice...and i wasnt really feellin your rymes.....all in all5/10

vote=jpoll

i have two votes for me but only one on the top>>????????????????????????

weak battle...
the breakdown....
flow-j-poll...but both flows were basic....
vocab-tie..neither
structure-j-poll..

both need to step it up.... VOTE J POLL

uppin for them votes hahahahahha where's all the trash talking now streets?

uppin............................................. ..................................................

I'll give this one to JPoll. I liked his style and flow a lot better. Had a few good punches in there that made me laugh.
Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!, lol I liked that.

Streetsweepa. Ya shit was tight. But u need some harder punches to back up ya shit and make the flow smoother so its easier to read.

Vote. JPoll

Damn JPoll back his talk up sweepa He gets my vote

uppin this shit...yo make your comments longer thanks..............................respect

Alright Ima Break it Down This Way For Once.

Street:
I kno your afraid to battle, but ur online//
think about this shit nigga u can run but u cant hide//
4. Bad Opener didnt even ryme
You should quit rappin;come on nigga consider it //
what the fucks wrong with u jpoll are u illiterate?//
6. Alright Punch
shut up bitch u kno ur styles wack//
you an triple N dickride evryone knos that//
hes the only vote youll get “ and thats a fact”//
u talk to much shit and you should be smacked//
5. Meh, nothing great
tripleN might vote for u but no one else will//
all your shit is weak, sorry to inform u rappin takes skill!//
this battle aint over yet, i didnt even move in fo tha kill!//
u dont ryme like 50 u ryme like elvis for rill//
what? U think i wont win? Trust me nigga i WILL!//
7. Best Punch yet
for u this is gonna be a fucking disastor//
this shit is gonna be a canadian massacre//
ur my canadian bitch, and im ur master-
5. Lol, whatever

Overall 27/50

Jpoll:
Streetsweepa, you ain't shit, stop wit da threats,
Only language your usin is cussin, like a bitch wit ta-retz,
8. Nice start
Me dickryde? 1 vote against you, it's cause you're wack,
Ur skillz worse than TIMBERLAKE beat boxin, "that's a fact"!,
6. alright
I'm informin ya elvis never rhymed, n well neither do you,
You rhyme like a ref in sports, it's like your all sniffin glue,
5. Hmm....
N who the fuck is Triple N, i don't even know this kid
A reminder your verse was supposed to on me,not some fucking skid,
6. Nice
My advice to you, is get some new technique,
Start practicing, or stop rhyming you lil worthless geek,
5. same old same old
Me illiterate?!?!?,haha you're the one from The D-isease,
I could say anything here and still win, i like my OJ squized,
4. coulda been good
First you don't follow our rules, then you bring that weak ass shit,
Next time DON'T challenge me, I hate combatting "retard's spit"
7. Nice closer

OVERALL 41/70

I have to give this battle to JPoll for the better punches, and multi;s and flow... other guys shit was good too his punches just didnt hit as hard. vote/J

Can you guys plz return the fav wit my battle VS A.K.A thx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510