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kingz vs. creativitie
look kid this is a crew battle........
no hate no d/r no bitin no crew 25 min blind spit. most of all no prewritten may the best man win CLASS SIC (creativitie) vs. U.E (kingz) |
once you check in you spit first...you got 25 min...check in
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ok dog. i didnt even kno i was battling you. its ok tho
i gotta go offline to go shopping but i will post within 45mins ok? u got to decide the rest of the rules i'll post a message wen im dun, then we both drop verses at same time |
son r u finished yet......................................?
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aye yo...im at school.....but i said you spit first...i no your finished wit your prewrittin shit so just drop it...........this aint my checkin.....and i wont feed off your verses
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drop as soon as u see this
i aint got much to dog |
is this a blind spit.....i thought i told you to spit first. cuz im tired of the noshows....
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ok im's spit now. u spit str8 after..............................
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‘king’ jokes are played…not effective….you’ll never take my ‘crown’
can’t believe ‘classic’ sent a vet…that can’t even spell his hometown (lol @ sacrawmento) Im gonna take over ‘Sacramento’….cos it’s the home of the ‘kings’ Keep ya hood as my memento….cos you aint got any nba ‘rings’ I remember you son…aint you the one that deranged-the-game? Oh yeh! Aint you dj em sce?…but you’ve jus changed-ya-name Stop with all the lies….changing you name don’t change you…as it implies Cos everyone knows this guy’s…. a pussy wanna be MC in disguise all your votes will be haters…so we should call you ‘hate-tivitie’ but from what I’ve seen before…you wont have much voting activity Dog there was no need to change ya name…cos like you it was shitty That was the worse name change…since Puff Daddy to P Diddy Creativity, I will wipe out you dog, and your whole crew Classic HA when im done you will all be extincted….we can rename you ‘Jurrasic’ On ya sig….’candlestick’?…but you aint ‘creative’ enough to light one step to an Undestructable Emcee?…u aint creative enough to lyrically fight one son you cant compete…with the ‘eight elite’…even if you cheat your rhymes are ‘corny’…like you sed your ‘tuffa than African feet’ (check his title) |
blind spit. so spit dog....................................
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aight if i can....cuz like i said im at school...i no for a fact i can spit in about 50 mins...cuz next period the teacher is hella dumb........but i will try to.......plus got some crew shit to handle...brb
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oh shit........already had shit written....aight let me see wat i got in the head pieces...remember i got 25 mins........
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dog u sed blind spit!! why are u goin back to write ya shit? i posted cos sed u wud spit str8 after!!!! u scared of losing yeh?
its only a battle, jus spit. it aint life or death. no wonder u got such a good record |
coo spit,.....i give you much respect......but sacRAWmento..meaning that sacramento is raw....coo spit....
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if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility//
lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility// its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites// king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse// im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements// this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements// look king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic// wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix// this kid should have known im restricted to looses in this textin section// when i get in this textual territory i leave m.cs shell shocked in deception// sorry got o go...i just got in trouble..i will get on next period |
This was a sick battle wiv Kingz spittin out some of the funniest shit i've heard.
creativitie u had a few good lines in there if you reached your apex you still couldnt exceed my versitility// lyrical creativity to surpass the cosmos is my only responsibility// its not an optional decition to lacerate these edible opposites// king set many opsticals so i cant levate as an incredible apocalipse// Kingz, ure rip was non stop sick from start 2 finish u started wiv a solid punch, threw some good ones in between and finished with tha knockout blow. Vote=Kingz Vote on my shit so i can free up a spot and battle some ova bitches franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374 franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290 franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293 franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335 |
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aye yo kid.....i wasnt finished..i just got caught up by the teacher,,......i still had to perfect my shit..and fix structure...and make my punches hardeer.........and i wall also gonnin to make a few lines longer but i can tnow...owell.....
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Nice battle but creativitie knida got a little stuck and he played off your name change and siggy and stuff kinda koo but no crew vote but nice shit
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yo good battle...you both came with really different styles...i liked them both...but do think king came with better...more punches personals and such so here's the break down
kingz bestline Im gonna take over ‘Sacramento’….cos it’s the home of the ‘kings’ Keep ya hood as my memento….cos you aint got any nba ‘rings' worst...all the liines were above par flow...9/10 punches...10/10 personal....9/10 humor....8/10 extras...7/10 overall....43 Creativitie bestline im fuly equipt to make you suffer wit elepisy when i make advancements// this synthetic mc wil neva elevate,so thers no need 4 my enhancements worst line ook king could neva excell wit an adolecent style so basic// wile he proceed 2 a certain extent,i defy da laws of science wit my fisical matrix// i'm not big fan of this right here...wording...the meaning was aight flow...7/10 punches...7/10 personal...6/10 humor....4/10 extras....10/10 vocab overall...34/50 v- kingz |
look this kid is dick ridin,..rite afta king voted for jpoll and his battle jpoll voted for him...thats strictly d/r........
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actually i was writting the whole time and i didn't know who he voted for....you came sick too though....i wish your teacher wouldn't have caught you cause it would have been tight...
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no it not because jpoll verse was better. i only drop honest votes. i think i deserve to win this one too.
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hey both you guys voted for me against strreetsweepa and only one of you voted...could the other person please vote...thanks...respect to both mc's
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see jpoll knows its adick ride vote thats why he tryn to give me compliments and shit....fuckin d/r i hate that shit
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creativitie wot u mean d/r? u vote for him too! he clearly had the better verse
wot u buggin for? |
nah i think if i would have voted first for him i would have this vote ......fuc it.. i aint trippen.....may the best man win......
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creativity was ok but Kingz got the name he had sturcture, rhyme, ending, and punches thats it he wins my vote
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
^^ this dude is a mad herb voter. that shit doesn't even start to count. uppin people... serious fucking votes, this was a good battle.
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ima give this shit ta Kings..... Kingz had NON stop flow and punches. yur stuff was hott yo keep on spittin i wanna see whatchu got instored for uppin opponents.
Creativitie yo shit was koo and you had a couple good lines but there was Too many complex wordplay and it sounds to poetic. its koo when you use a couple here and there but yur whole spit was based on complex wordplay so i would just try and minize the big words and focus more on structure and Punches. My vote goes to KINGZ for those killer Punches & Flow |
my vocab is to great for these infantile m.cs..........i guess you want some funcin immature punches.
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Funcin??????? Man u need ta relax. i would like to see you win a battle face 2 face with that wordplay cuzz. its all fake and if i saw you and you were battlin someone in front of eachother i would laugh atchur College bound rappin ass
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calm down kid..........i murdered you wit it..didnt i.....
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I gotta go wit Kingz on this one. Both verses weren't as good as I've seen from these cats. Kingz had some nice wordplay and clever punches but it didn't really flow right. Creativitie can definately do better than what I saw from him. The shit was hard to follow and obviously wasn't finished. But the fact still remains that it was his submitted verse so I gotta say it was wack...........
Vote - Kingz |
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