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$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 03:06 PM

$$$tim$$$ vs White-ice
 
ill set this shit up right now ...no bullshit lets try and keep this shit real

bitches go forst ill be back in like 10 to 15 mins

remember think before u speak ...either way u still gonna lose

u spit first..also u better spit as good as u talk shit
:gfy:

streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress

white-ice 04-15-04 03:18 PM

bitches go first so spit bitch............................................. .................

$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 03:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by white-ice
bitches go first so spit bitch............................................. .................

i guess il go first cuz ur to afraid

$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 03:52 PM

alright alright ......
ya rhymes arent strong .....there soft //
i ur wasting your time ..u already lost//
ya rhymes dont connect ,
like obe one kenobi and laura croft//
nigga u dont even kno how to start this shit off //
im gonna tellu the truth and a lil story....//
these people dont like you your rhymes are boring !!!//
come on british bastard u got these people snoring///
ya not gonna win s thats the end of ya glory!!!!//
to tell u the truth ya rhymes cant even hold me //

so fuck u bitch u aint got nuttin on me...
this battle should already be considerd murder,naw this is homaside
this is juss gonna be juss like a british genocide//
u might try to percrastenate u miight try and run..but u cant hide!!!//
yea nigga thiss battle is gonna take away your fuckin pride!!!//
so do us all a favor and dont waste ya time ....this fuckin battle is MINE!!!!!//

In-Vision 04-15-04 06:03 PM

Hey vote on these 4 battles honestly, and I’ll return the favor…thanks


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119257

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119270

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119249


http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1231919

In-Vision 04-15-04 06:31 PM

lets go white ice.................................

$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 06:44 PM

this nigga scared
he knows he aint got shit his rhymin is wack ass shit nigga im tellin ya right now

white ice u a lil punk ass bitch

In-Vision 04-15-04 06:45 PM

white ass....you only got so much day..i'dhurry up

$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 06:55 PM

this mutha fuck punk'd out he aint gonna write shit .....

$$$tim$$$ 04-15-04 09:57 PM

hey i told u the posts have to be in by twelve am u aint got much time left and if u dont try u automatically lose

streetsweepa 04-16-04 01:00 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by $$$tim$$$
hey i told u the posts have to be in by twelve am u aint got much time left and if u dont try u automatically lose

u didnt make the deadline so u lose nigga ur dqued

Triple_N 04-16-04 02:55 AM

well its obvious $$$tim$$$ won this shit, great no show white

white-ice 04-16-04 04:30 AM

[bin asleep.............................gimee 10 mins................

white-ice 04-16-04 04:44 AM

whos this motherfucka,disturb me from my sleep/
why r you so keen to rack up a defeat?
first off... youre opening punch woz weak/
sounds like ur ass,woz taking a fukin leak
so im a briish bastard?,ive got a fukin dad
hes big n bald, like the one u wish u had/
so he can fuck u up ur bum wilst ur licking out ya mum / need 2 check ya spelling,thats wot they all be yelling/
dosile prick/her names LARA dum ass bitch/
ur a racist mother"fucka" but my cock u can "sucka"/
so u can kiss my english ass/go put this one in tha past/go sit wit all them other wack artists,who came where u came....last.

streetsweepa 04-16-04 08:25 AM

ok BREAKDOWN FOR "WHITE ICE":
DO THEY HAVE GRAHMER school over in england? what the fuck i s a mum??
u berely even put any punches into it .......why?
ur a racist mother"fucka" but my cock u can "sucka"/
please what in the hell was this weak ass bullshit?
U JUST PUT TOHETHER WHAT RYMED THATS NOT HOW U BATTLE!!
OBVIUOSLY RAPPIN AINT FORU maybe u will get better so keep tryin but ur fucking worthless man rappin like that shyt last tyme i bateled u u lost 5- 0, and im pretty sure it will happen again.
u need to have atleast some talent man thatz what u lack so work on dat shyt
anyway heres ur breakdown ( by the way i do feel ur getting bettr)
rymes 9 /10
punches 3/10
flow 5 /10
style 6/10
BREAKDOWN FOR TIM
rymes 8/10
punches 7/10
flow 8/10
style 7/10
ur best line:these people dont like you your rhymes are boring !!!//
come on british bastard u got these people snoring///
ya not gonna win s thats the end of ya glory!!!!//
THAT SHYT RIGHT THERE WAS FUKING FIRE
my vote: $$$tim$$$

Status 04-16-04 11:50 AM

im givin this to $$ his shit was alround betta.....

$$: you had a betta opening and just all round liked your flow.....could have used betta meta4s and punches...all in all5/10

ice: you was all round soory...could have done some meta4s and punches ...also if it was a lil longer you could have had a betta chance..all in all4/10

this was a coo battle for some newbs..

vote=$$

Wulf 04-18-04 02:54 PM

Flow: wow uhh...this one will be given to TIM he just maintained structure..even tho it was simple

Punchs: I will just give this one a draw...there wasn't anything that i saw that should be quoted or even make my mouth move

Vocab: NONE

Overall: well This battle reminds me of one of those pre-k fights but ohh well..nothing stands out nothing great but TIM had this one because white didn't have anything that even reminded me of a battle

VOTE: TIM

Wulf 04-18-04 02:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wulf
Flow: wow uhh...this one will be given to TIM he just maintained structure..even tho it was simple

Punchs: I will just give this one a draw...there wasn't anything that i saw that should be quoted or even make my mouth move

Vocab: NONE

Overall: well This battle reminds me of one of those pre-k fights but ohh well..nothing stands out nothing great but TIM had this one because white didn't have anything that even reminded me of a battle

VOTE: TIM



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