Da Solution vs. Truth
 

10-15 lines
no d/r
no crew
u spit first

checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn in drop yo verse man

Yo solution how do u setup a thread to battle some 1? cuz i been tryin and askin peepz they dont tell me how do u set it up??

Yo..yo..Check it..

im holdin Chrome-Traits, when lyrics Blast..ya Dome-Breaks/
cuz you know 'I-Land' more "Punches" than ya 'Home-State'/(hawiian punch)
and like a 'Drunken Housewife' im 'Bringin Bars-To-this bitch'/
i'll have this 'Hoe Stuck In The Dirt' like a 'Gardener'/
pardon-him, he dont realize how wack-he-is/
grabge verses 'Eat Yaself' like 'Subtractin-Ribs'/
you rap-wit-fibs, and you think you 'Holdin-Truth?'/(Solution?)
i got more Lines for 'Call Outs', than 'Phones-In-Booths'/
so stop actin like ya rappin does some harm-to-me/
...i got more Heat than Fires in an "Armory"/
like Mexicans that got Xzibit yo i 'Scar-Mcs'/(watch pimp my ride, X got cut up, lol)
im bout to 'Elektra-Cute' ya, like 'Carmen-Be'/
so dont step-to-me or i'll unleash the weaponry/
this 'Bitch Lacks Creativity' like 'Hysterectomys'/

ok uppin fo your verse theres mine..

Here i go

Call me Sherlock Holmes cuz Im teachin simple elementary
you'll never beat me/not now/not never/or tha next century :nono:
It's science/u a low level/Im a king claming higher defiance
youre' right u r a house wife and this is domestic violence
If spat my best shit at you it just would'nt be fair
I don't do harm you? :huh:bitch I'll leave u in intensive care
yo mama like my rhymes and da way that I spit it
After i fucked her /every dude on da block was sayin :hitit2:
I got more flow than you kid /add it up/and stack it/
if this was a tourny u would'nt be qualified 4 tha loser's braket
Truth be told killin this kid is becomin boring and unfun
U got firepower?/whatchu packin? a slingshot and a watergun :laugh:
I don't know why this stupid homophite even got involved
But I'll end on this/ I merked him / and problem sloved :thefinger

aight fellas vote on this battle......peace................................. ......

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breakdown for truth:

flow:nice work a little off at the end of some punches but overall 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches:some real good personals my fav,"cuz you know 'I-Land' more "Punches" than ya 'Home-State'/" good job 7/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for da solution:

flow:alright a few multis to help it along in the start 6/10

volcab:nice job through most of it kinda leveled out by the end though 6/10

punches:nothing really great here 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--truth gets my vote

aight tanx for the vote ok vote fellas....peace.................

aight... truth, I really liked your worldplay. stuff like the carmen electra line, that's tight. problem is, the punches were kinda lacking in your verse, thought that personal was real good. getting a good punch in there is more important than wordplay, this is a battle.

da solution.. first of all, cut the smilies out. now you had some good punches, like the watergun/slingshot thing, but your wordplay, vocab were all ementary and your punches weren't all that creative. so you gotta work on that.

tight battle, but i give it to da solution because punches kinda make it in a battle this tight.

vote back on my battle against franchiZe in my sig.

word play is important in a battle man it ups ypur level alot to win a battle its not just
about punches...lol anyways vote on this battle fellas peace...

He forgot to vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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im gonna have to say this was a really hott battle truth came hard and so did da solution...i liked truths wordplay and strcture...didnt have many punches/personals that i liked but he came nice...da solution came harder tho i thought structure was a little off but his punches made up for it...nice battle im gonna have to give it to da solution though i just felt his verse a lil bit more

vote: Da Solution

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he winns
 

solution- a asshole but goood mc
lines - good
multi - good
ending - aight

truth - raw need work
lines- good
multi - bad
ending - aight

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Da solution had more harder punchlines
The truth was aight

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Vote Gaddamnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin

this an aiight battle.....solution....u c ouldve done much better
punches-Truth
multis-Solution
personals-Truth
Overall-Truth
Solution....u got some elevating to do

simple breakdown

flow - solution...i was feelin ure verse more!
structure - solution...just thought u kept ure shit tighter!
punches - tie...both were gud but truth took the personals and solution took the multis thats why i call it a tie.
creativity - tie again...both showed gud creativity and truth came strong wit them personals but solution used more multis so that is a tie.

OVERALL
in punches and creativity both came strong for an even match, solution wins cuz i felt he had better structure to his spit allowin for a better flow.

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i give it to da solution on dis one his punches landed and they made since he had a few multies and he had good damm structure very good wordplay.truth your verse wasent all that bad its just where he did good you didnt do enough to win but this was a close battle and i give the nod to da solution

ma vote da

Imma give it @ Da toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I jus gotta get more post 2 vote

please return the favor and vote 4 me

and do it honestly

It was a close Batttle But I think it goes to Truth. Right now i Cant vote but when I can I will. :evilgrin:

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upinn 4 votes

This was a close battle but'll have to give it to Da Solution becuz he had betta punches

uppin 4 votes plz

Good spit from both yall niggaz.
I was feelin Truth more in this battle his shit flowed nice. Tha punches was on point and personal. Solution your shit was cool but tha punches was nowhere. You did your thing wit tha smiley faces though.

vote=Truth
check this shit out yall
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122780

I agree but i think there was a lil more punches than u say there were but anyway a real hott as fuck battle keep it up