Looch vs MARVOLoUsJ1009
 

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jea im here lets get it goin........................

Hey vote on these 2 battles honestly, and I’ll return the favor…thanks


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119269

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119249

JEa!!!.....

u soft da type da tell cops..but dunny dem shells hott //
u not "sick" if u thru ya rap book at a nigga with "aids" u a give da "man-a-cure" like "nail shops" //
u nice? nah often dis flop...but ima send u a coffin and few shots //
i know whut type of dude u is "run" 2 da precient next day "walkin" with 2 cops //
but stop talkin like u pac...cuzz u neva was "sick" like u was "born with a flu shot" //
dude-stop!!..when i spit all u could do is panic and watch //
looch u wanna battle any "time's-cool" like puttin a "fan in a watch" //
rapbattles he's pussy i made looch i hide so hard he ran in da "pac" //
i got dis-nigga....e looch da hottest spitta??? //
dogg u couldn't "flow-nasty" if u "drunk out a toxic" //
come da queens actin up dez brother's here a blast tecs //
i aint mean da tell u dis but u da reason ya mother scared da have sex //

cuzz u a bitch... hurry up and spit dunny u got till 2 nite

you claim to be the sickest on this site,shit i should slap you out of spite/
i must be a blind man cause when i looked at the top you were no where in sight/
i got more weapons then ossama and elusive like mcguyvor/
fuck goin to the carribean grab yo pistols lets play survivor/
ill even give you a rematch when u pulled from them chalk lines/
you fabolous imatater ill marvolously whoop yo ass 1009 times/
call this man j the turtle the way i put that shell in his back/
got me like damn where u get that worst rapper alive plaque?/
only time u ever spit fire iz when u spit gas into hairspray/
ill drop yo ass off the queens bridge an listen to you yell MAYDAY/
givin me till tonite to beat that prewrote shit, no need bitch/
just gimme a switchblade to call lilo, cause u just got stiched/

uppin this shit dont sleep on a good battle

Checckity Checcck Checck It lol!!!

Alright Check E Loochs Line's:

you claim to be the sickest on this site,shit i should slap you out of spite/
i must be a blind man cause when i looked at the top you were no where in sight/

^Nice Opener' Nothing Great But 'Nice' ...!! 8/10

call this man j the turtle the way i put that shell in his back/
got me like damn where u get that worst rapper alive plaque?/

^Nice Punch.. But Didn't Get Connected 8/10

givin me till tonite to beat that prewrote shit, no need bitch/
just gimme a switchblade to call lilo, cause u just got stiched/

^And An Alright Closer!! Enough To Take The Win!!

Check Marv's Lines:

u soft da type da tell cops..but dunny dem shells hott //
u not "sick" if u thru ya rap book at a nigga with "aids" u a give da "man-a-cure" like "nail shops" //

^Weak Opener 6/10

dude-stop!!..when i spit all u could do is panic and watch //
looch u wanna battle any "time's-cool" like puttin a "fan in a watch" //

^Ok' ... Shit Was Fuccked Up!!' .... 6/10

rapbattles he's pussy i made looch i hide so hard he ran in da "pac" //
i got dis-nigga....e looch da hottest spitta??? //
dogg u couldn't "flow-nasty" if u "drunk out a toxic" //

^These 3Lines Just Fucked Up Your Verse!!' ..... (Nothing Out Of Ten)

come da queens actin up dez brother's here a blast tecs //
i aint mean da tell u dis but u da reason ya mother scared da have sex //

^Weak Closer!! But Better Then Any Of Your Other Lines' !!!! 7/10

Vote: E Looch

coo coo UPPIN close this shit up

Ok, E Looch takes this one for his better word play, flow and punches. The lilo and stich line was really nice, so was this:

"you claim to be the sickest on this site,shit i should slap you out of spite
i must be a blind man cause when i looked at the top you were no where in sight"

good use of the multi to keep it flowing well and a nice punch.

marv.. your lines were way too long and the only real good punch you had was the last one, which was kinda stretched out. i've seen you do better.

return the favor on Shadow vs franchiZe (link in sig)

ure flows were both gud and both had gud structure
both threw average punches but i'll have 2 go wit shadow and give tha match 2
E Looch
return da favour and vote on my battles
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

UPPIN this shit 2 more votes

dont sleep on a good battle uppin

UPPIN for votes dont sleep

Uppin On This

Uppin this shit

shit.
 

looch u r fukin lame.rappin aint 4 u.horrible appaling ugly verse

^^LMAO so i guess you think you can beat me pussy<<ROFL

Uppin this shit

UPPIN this shit dont sleep on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119676

yo I'll come with a honest vote if you hit this battle up

^do you just post that shit in everybattle tryin to advertise that shit knock that shit off


UPPIN

UPPIN for some damn votes

^^ UPPIN close this shit up

Uppin this sshit

uppin for 2 fuckin votes

this shit should done have been closed uppin for some damn votes

Yo
 

Good battle, but its obvious who the victor is.
Looch had a lot of wordplay, his flow was a lot stronger then Marv's. Marv, you need to work on your structure, your words didn't fit together that good and your rhymes were too basic. You have more talant then this dawg. Looch had the better sense of Multi's, but they could be stronger, but good. Looch had the better Punches in this one, Marv, you really need to focus on Pucnhes and Personly's, there a big check it battles. The Vocabulary that Looch brought was good, make your words more advanced Marv. Anways my vote goes to Looch, he overpowered you in all subjects. Nice opener also.

this to me was a pretty good battle both of u threw punches and both had good stucture..marv u good but i thoght u needed to elevate u could of did way better
Looch yours was very good and it was better than marv so u get my vote
holla at my votes against lil rip