killah bwoy vs disasterpiece420
 

lets go gurlie take it easy on da newb here lmfao
10 lines
you go first (haha)
no d/r,cv or biting
good luck


lets go good luck

close this! my bad lmfao......................................

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lmfao lets go gurl lets just use this one..............

Aight Playa' ..... 10Lines Min 25Lines Max' ..!!!!! I Got 20Min.. So hurry The Fuck Up You Drop First Playa!!!!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122221

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE ILL RETURN THE FAVOR WHEN YALL DROP "PM" Me WHEN YOU DONE!!

Killah Bwoy All The Homosexual Speak Got You Lookin Conspicious,
Your Fag Kick Is Shit And Its Getting Rediculous,
Dont Get Your Undies In A Bundle, Take It As Constructive Criticism,
Slow Your Runnin 'For You Fumble' Cause This Is Real Lyricism,
All Im Sayin Is You Should Spit Something Different, You Know A Little Variety,
And Dont Let LyriKal DestruKtion Sexual Preference Peak Your Anxiety
Your Punches Are Weak Like Bones Of Old Ladies With Osteoperosis
My Flow Seeps Through Your Lobes Like Reverse Osomsis
Its Like Severe Psychosis Win I Get In The Zome
I Get Carpel Tunnel Syndrome Firm Grippin The Microphone
Elevate Your Diction And Overhaul Your Whole Style Of Spitten
Cause Your Verses Aint Hittin, Sounds Each One Is ReWritten,
Version Of A Previous Excursion Of Perversion,
And Cursin Like Your Rehearsin For Your Sunday Sermon,
You Preachin To The Converted Cause We All Believe Your Wack
All You Do I Fuckin Yack Like You Spent All Nite Smokin Crack
You Need To BackTrack & Disperse More Diverse Observations,
Ur Verse Compared 2 Pervasive Stimulation Is Simply Stated, An Inverse Correlation,
Im Not Hatin And This Conversation Is Not Up For Debatin,
You Brain Is Stuck In Neutral, There Is No Neural Detonation
Only Slight Vibrations Give Any Evidence Of Any Cognitive Sesation
Lyrical Elevation Should Always Be Your Destination
But Your Intentions Are Misplaced And Your Just Wastin
Time So Come Back When You Got Something New To Say
Im Through Fucking With You, I Got Shit To Do Today!! (LoL)

And It's Over Im Through:

My Weakest Punch Leave You Off Your Balance
Your Rhymes Are Below Average Cause You Got No Talent


True That:
Everyone Else Knows Its True Yet You Still Refuse To Believe,
If You Find Any Emcee/Femcee That Says You're Better Than Me Then I'll Leave,


If I Fucked Up I Apologize.. I Was In A Hurry! - - - Im Out For Now Though (Peace)
And G'Luck.. Killah

lets go..imma make u regret leavin LD haha lets go.....

I'm the "mail man" like Karl Malone 'cause im deliverin losses to this hoe/
This Bitch Can't rap.. Im like the mississippii river 'cause I alwayz flow/
Put my lines on my cock let her suck my dick so she can "spit a rhyme"/
Rhymes'll put this gurls verse to a hault like Im spittin out stop signs/
You wack you fucked Mask datz da only reason why you didnt get declined/
Packin' explosives..touch my rhymes n' you'll blow up like Land Minds/

HERE WE GO NIGGAZ!!!

Rippin' N' breakin' your rhymes..Spittin ammunition leave a hole in your spine/
Lyrics to hot for ya eyes leavin you blind battlin me is like battlin loaded nines/
Stick ya fuckin head in bitchslapped so next time you watch who you callout/
Fuck it im goin all out you aint walkin out dis ring you gon' have to crawl out/
Spittin Lyrikal..Gurl couldnt be good even if she found god n' spitted spirtual/
Duck for cover 'cause Like Beenie man "survivin this hit is a fuckin miracle"/
420 battles..420 bars...she got merked 420 times and this bitch still is wack/
Fuck ya twenty eight wins Bitch You aint noone ima fuckin legend like T-mac/
Fuck with me Ill have you on da run for da rest of your life..no time to relax/
Drop da mic hoe you cant rap im snatchin every board like a team wit 2 shaqs/
Rip "disaster" into "pieces".. aint no x-man but verse is a fuckin "beast"/
This gurls rhymes still aint holy and she just gave head to the priest/
Bitch stop lookin' at my battles bitin my rhymes..She havin' a fuckin fiest/
battlin me?...you'll end up with 1 leg 1 loss 1 arm n' thats the least/
So fuckin' hot that when i grab the mic i have to wear mittens/
Bitch how you gon' say you got skillz when you lost to a kitten/(latinkitten)
Im the nicest individual...spit a diss too you at your fuckin ritual/
Drawin' dicks dont make you lyrical..poison you..drop lines in your cereal/

ugh...where do I begin...

Disas...

#1...STOP TYPING IN CAPTIAL LETTERS! IT'S SHOUTING AND IT HURTS PEOPLE'S EYES!
You Preachin To The Converted Cause We All Believe Your Wack
All You Do I Fuckin Yack Like You Spent All Nite Smokin Crack

^^^..much of your spit is filled with lines like these = filler and uninspired..not even funny or hard hitting


#2..Your vocab was good. But, you threw in personals I had no idea the meaning of. If you do that, then, I don't fully get the punch.


Killa

#1..
better flow than disas...but-

m the "mail man" like Karl Malone 'cause im deliverin losses to this hoe/
This Bitch Can't rap.. Im like the mississippii river 'cause I alwayz flow/

^^^^...Don't talk about yourself so much in your opener. This is a diss. Where's the punch at him?



Rip "disaster" into "pieces".. aint no x-man but verse is a fuckin "beast"/
This gurls rhymes still aint holy and she just gave head to the priest/

^^^ pretty coo there...coulda been set-up better

um

FLow: Killa
RHymes: Tie
Structure: Killa
Punches: Killa


Vote: Killa

aiight str8 vote.........upn..........................

^^^^...Don't talk about yourself so much in your opener. This is a diss. Where's the punch at him? <== "Him"??? Whats That Shit All About!! - - - .... But Ok!! Im 'Female' .. !!! Anyways..


.... Its Cool


Uppppppppppin 4 Votes

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Vote's On This Shit' .. & Quit Sleepin Through It!!



C'Mon Now!! - - -

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Vote's On This Shit' .. & Quit Sleepin Through It!!



C'Mon Now!! - - -

Ya'll Drop Some Honest Vote's On This Shit' .. & Quit Sleepin Through It!!



C'Mon Now!! - - -

(I Will Make Sure To Return The Favor)

best 4 lines was... Killah Boy's

Stick ya fuckin head in bitchslapped so next time you watch who you callout/
Fuck it im goin all out you aint walkin out dis ring you gon' have to crawl out/
Spittin Lyrikal..Gurl couldnt be good even if she found god n' spitted spirtual/
Duck for cover 'cause Like Beenie man "survivin this hit is a fuckin miracle"/

Disaster urs was alright but ya punches coulda came harder ya got vocab but it don't mean shit if ya don't use 'em right... a lil' constructive critism fa ya...
Structure: Tie
Punches: Neither
Flow: Killa Boy
Multis: Killa Boy
Word Play: Neither

Overall: young Killa Boy takes it... nice battle u two

thanx boo..much luv too u ^^................................

ok nice drop both of u

disaster-u threw some crazy punches wit a good flow and squeezed a cannon wit personals

bestline-Its Like Severe Psychosis Win I Get In The Zome
I Get Carpel Tunnel Syndrome Firm Grippin The Microphone

nice

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 8/10

killa- u had some killa shit dass all i can say wit some pucnhes dat was flames

bestline-I'm the "mail man" like Karl Malone 'cause im deliverin losses to this hoe/
This Bitch Can't rap.. Im like the mississippii river 'cause I alwayz flow/

wheeww nice start

worsteline-nun

overall yo verse gets a 8.1/10

niow dis came down 2 da best open and killa had dat but dp u had a nice opener juss killa snagged u but nice drops

this was a hott battle......alot to read but hott...i was gonna do a breakdown of each verse but that would have took forever so heres the shortened version....DP420 dam gurl your wordplay and multies were off the chain...BUT...u had no real hard hittin punches...but other than that everything was perfect......flow structure wordplay multies metas...everything in your verse was pretty good

OK NOW FOR KILLAH

ok your first part of your verse i wasnt feelin at all...but the second half was sick...good punches and wordplay a couple multies...tons of ill punches for the first couple bars then it fell off alil but u picked it back up and killed it wit the punches sick shyt from you structure flow metas wordplay multies same as DP$@)

so this is a close one both verse were off the chain...

ILL FLIP A COIN :D na hmmmm

vote: killah

although DP420 had a killer verse i think killahs punches took this one by just a lil close close close battle but my vote goes to killah a rematch WITH LESS BARS!!!! would be interesting

~!1!~

ight heres how i saw it

DP-u came good with the punches like always...but some how i see u lacking some lines were filler...ur flow and structure was good...everything was good but ur punches could have been better...some were off or felt forced

Killah-punches was dominating...came hard from beginning to end...ur flow and everything was good...when battling funny punches win battles cause its entertainment...killa took this for better punches and were just a lil funnier

nice battle tho