DisasterPeice420 Vs. Killah Bwoy
 

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lmfaoo damn 8i made it first btu its all good ill go first

Lol' .. Well Im A Lil Slow Round Here!!! Playa :) ... !! And Thanks Appriciate A Playa That Can Go First !! !!!!!!!!! Good Luck !!!!!!!!!!!! Even Though You Wont Be needing It'

lmfao you bout to whip my ass so im puttin errything i got into this...lmfao lets go KILLAH BWOY VS D-PEICE WHOS IT GONNA BE :)

Its Gun Be Killah Bwoy No Doubt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' Wha Wha .... !!!

Play Hard - Or Go Home!!! Ah Ha

Anyways drop Your Shit Playa! :)

Hey vote on these 2 battles honestly, and I’ll return the favor…thanks


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119269

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119249

Fucking Hell !! It's Been Like An Hour' .. Does It Really Take That Long To Drop ...!! A Verse????????????/ WTF lol

LOL NIGGA WHAT IS KILLA BWOI LETS GO...uh uh uh uh ....lol lets go

I spit sars,bout to kill her with these bars,Gurl you look like a male,leave her homeboi like "MAN" DOWN/
Im on top of the game its impossible for me to LAND NOW,P.diddy's new makin da band is lookin for the wackest rapper,disaster won and now she like WHOS MAKIN THE BAND NOW/

Even If You washed your lines in "wash away-your-sins-soap" your lyrics still wouldn't be good/
You say you was raised in the ghetto,how bout i hang you off a tree in queens then you can really say you hang-in the hood/

Face it gurl im hotter than you even when i got writers block,she ran out of good rhymes thats why she all over her ghost-writers cock/
I spit bullets from my mouth,So Fuck a gun i keep my lyrics in my sock,This gurl bitin my lyrics like buggs bunny eatin carrots,thats whys she walks around hot rappers rhymes like "WHATS UP DOC"/

Your bars are so bad not even the devil got a spot for you,Like maduca one glimps of my rhymes and this hoe became a statue/
Might as well throw ya self in the trash can because ya ass is garbage,I spit magic so anythin you spit at me goes right back at you/


AND WHAT ITS LIKE THAT LETS GO DISASTERPEICE420 WAZ REALLY GOOD GURL

DAMN Took DAMN Took You An Hour And A Half To Write That Shit!!' .. Anyways

Checckin In.. And Droppin!!!!!!!!!!!' ...\



You Dont Debate The Fact That 'Your-Gay',/
Call The Homo-Police To Come And 'Take-You-Away',/
You Try To 'Enumerate' Shit Like You Making a 'Point',/
Picking At My Raps And I'm Still Blazing This 'Joint',/
You Still Working For Crumbs While I'm 'Hustleing-Game',/
Siting Looking Dumb Because Your Whole 'Life-is-Lame',/ (lol)
Wipe You Face, Sum Brown On ur Nose From Kissen a Writers A$$ To Get Him To Verse For You,/
Your Prolly Sniff Your A$$ To Check If Your 'Fresh-Too',/
Speaking Of Which You Brought My Being Into 'This',/
I'm Into Beastiality? Your A Retarted 'Bitch',/
Try Smoking Less Crack, And Comb'n Your Hair Some 'Day',/
You Should Try Your Best To Loose Your 'Fairy-Way',/
Take A Couple More Days To Practice Your 'Free',/
Then Flow Back My Way When You Can 'Compete',/
You Can't Fuck With Me Or Any Other Real 'MC',/
With Some Luck You Might Leave Still Holding Your Teeth,/
Ur First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time, Acting Like You Got Game Ur Guilty Dont Lie, Your Second Offence Was 'Failure-of-Style',/
Lacking Sufficient Substance, Except What You Smoke Out Of 'Your-Vial',/
It's Juvenile For You Continue This 'Battle',/
Pussy A$$ Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And 'Tattle',/
I Need No Help To Unravel All The Threads Of Your 'Rhymes',/
I Really Come Easy Cause Your Checkin Out My Dog all The 'Time',/
I Know He Looks Good, Remember You The Bitch,/
I Know You Gotta Leave, Your Boyfriend Packed Your Shit,/
One More For Your Dome And Your One Last Chromezone,/
Saying I Dont Do Shit, When I Just Got 'Home',/

Lol Didnt' Have Much Time To Do This Shit!! But Im Out Now' !! Nice Drop Playa' ...!!!!

i wrote 8 lines and u wrote 22 is that fair lmfao although miens was sort of stretched not all though

Whoa Dpiece i think this kid might have took ya on dis one..... Sorry Shawty

I mean Check It

Kilah Bwoy....Nice verse punches came strong and it just seemed to flow good for long lines like that nice mutltis too...9.5/10

DP...Hot shit shawty ya know verse was bad ass but for 22 lines i expected like harder punchs like killah bwoy kame hard wit his shit yours flowed like mad and multies stay roackin just need more punches....9.25/10

Killah bwoy victor in my opinion

punch= Disaster
multi= bwoy
thought into it= Disaster

aight..disaster..your punch was hella better then bwoy's so it's wit you...bwoy..ur spit was good..but didn't seem good enough to me..well basicly..ur rhymes were basic..so was disasters..but her's was just a bit stronger..

vote= disaster

aiight str8...good vote.....................lets go yall this is serious lmfao

well heres my vote ok breakdown for disastor:
rymes 8/10
flow 6/10
style 9/10
punches 9/10
total 32 outa 40
bestline:It's Juvenile For You Continue This 'Battle',/
Pussy A$$ Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And 'Tattle',/

breakdown for killaboy
rymes 7/10
style 9/10
flow 6/10
punches 6 / 10
overall 28/40
yo both did tight as hell but this time my vote swings to disastor good battle.

fa real tho umm Killah Bwoy kep it real see diasaster choulda had suntin hot but she started off wrong well my opinon wronge but ne ways Killah Bwoy my honest opinon he kept it real as kan be gotta go wit dat man right derre killah Bwoy

Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Disaster
Flow: Disaster
Disses: Disaster

Overall-This Battle Was Different.I Didnt See Any Credible Puns If Any At All.Killah's Verse Was Too Choppy With The Flow.His Bars Were Too Long.Having Stretched Lines Makes Your Scripts Look Unorganized.When The Reader Is Going Over Your Verse,Having Stretched Lines Makes It Take Forever To Get To The End.By The Time You Do Reach The End Of The Sentence,You've Forgotten Which Lines Go Together.Plus It Takes Longer To Get To The Point Or For A Punch To Get Delivered,etc...A Lot Of Killah's Lines Were Weak & He Didnt Use Any Complexity Either.Disaster's Verse Was Based On Disses.She Used Them Better But Lacked With Puns.

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yo this was a koo battle for both
a bit dry, but maybe thats due to the length
ive definately seen better from disaster, and i thoght this verse was average
the vocab was cliche', and so were the punches, although i like her raw agressive approach. but u just didint do nething to beat this other cat( shouldve won)

killah had a few punches that were unique, and although they didnt hit that hard i like the creative effort. also the structure needs some work but i give killa the win for inginuity, and better personals

just call it how i c it
peace

whoa good battle y'all, Killa you had some good metaphors in ya shit I like it but I don't think they were real solid punches dogg, but you had a solid verse good multies an vocab, but you did kinda mess up flow with strecthed lines
Dp yo you had a good verse pretty good punches, they weren't all that strong but thry were stronger than killa's, you had strong vocab(see u didn't get my beastiality punch, well I didn't get yours either, its hard to make a setup for that) good multies and personals, alittle wordplay too, good shit
Vote: Dp

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Fuck all these DR votes, My vote is for Crhyme Sindicate.......*cough* I mean.....um.... Killah cause his shit was doper (if that's even a word)........lol. Just kiddin. I ain't gonna vote cause I may be partial to my crew but I couldn't decide anyways.

Killah had some pretty creative punches and had me giggle a bit, but the stretched ass lines killed it dawg. overal it was a good verse. Keep It Up!

DP was fuckin SHITTY........ just kiddin girl. I think you took this layin down like a lazy ass prostitute..........lol. There seemed like almost no effort on your part and you coulda used some cause this kid might actually beat ya. Put forth some effort next time. I like to see some of the shit you come up wit...........

Vote - Ohh yeah........... I forgot I wasn't voting........... lol

D Peice - flow
killahPucnches
D-Multis
D- Vocab
Personals- D

She had more lines, but that's not neccesarily why she won. She had good punches, but killah was a lil' harder. But I thought she far outclassed him everywhere else. Killah, came hard, but your shit was madd hard for me to read, and it kinda fucked it up for me. Both y'all stay doin' yo thang though, fosho. Good battle