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SPuL v.s DisasterPeice420 (Must see)
Aiight, SPuL is comin' into this duel ridin' on a 6 game win streak. He is 6-0 in April and is tryin' to improve that mark wit a win here. DP, who jus last night, had her streak of 16 straight battles broken, is comin' into this match on a 2 game winnin' streak. Well, both TextCees are ready to battle and this should be a tight one. SPuL will be considered the underdog in this one. ;)
lol Aiight, now that I got the story out of the way lol, let's lay down the rules. 20 Line max, 10 line min No D/r votes, give a good explanation to your votes I'll spit first tommorow. DP, you jus check in here. lol I kno I will prolly lose, but it's worth a shot. :thumbup: |
Checckity Checck Checck' ...!!!!!!!!! 'Im In' .. Haha' ... :)
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Also, the lines in unlimited jus like you wanted. Here I go, yo:
You get guys to vote for you… by showin’ them yo pics You get yo paycheck, after they done showin’ you their dicks You can pull off all that shit… but I will still win You will have a 7th loss… before we even “fin” Battlin’ only newbies… girl… you’re a wussy You’re rhymes are as tight… as Paris Hilton’s pussy And that’s very loose… jus to let your fine ass kno Sleepin’ wit a different guy, each night, y’all are hoes Girl, I’m not one to be fucked wit. I be 8-2, yo The crowd be lovin’ me… while they be booin’ you, hoe At not following rules… you are definitely the master I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster Your rhymes are very thin... jus like a tooth pic If you were a teacher... you would make the "Class sic" You make the whole English language... look like a fuckin' joke If you look up DisasterPeice in the dictionary, you'll get, "See choke" You're a fuckin' yellow belly... like Spongebob and Pikachu You can't even spell "Piece" right. What the fuck is wrong wit you? If you fuck wit me... I'll get you the hell outta Atlanta I'll have you swimmin' wit the D-Rays... like they be doin' in Tampa (Tampa Bay Devil Rays; MLB team that sucks lol) Ok, DP your turn. Don't think it was that hot, but whateva. |
SpuL My Little Bitch He 'Played-Into-My-Hands',/
I Told Him What To Rap And He 'Followed-On-Command',/ UnderStand You Cant Lie Or Deny "While-Under-Oath',/ You Can't Rap Or Free But Still Your 'Trying-To-Do-Both',/ The Jury Is In, The Judgement Has 'Been-Passed',/ Only Back Up You Provide Is Jackin Some Gay 'Up-The-A$$',/ Legit Or Not Bombs You Drop Arent 'Fuckin-Hot',/ Your Faggot 'Vocab', Overloads The Braincess 'You-Aint-Got',/ Beat Me Is the Lottery, Something Ur Punch 'A$$-Can-Win',/ I Must Admit Your Canverous A$$ Is Getting 'Under-My-Skin',/ SPuL You Remind Me Of This Fucka I Seen On 'The-Tv',/ Lyle Lovett Was His Name And He Had No 'Talent-You-See',/ But He Still Tried, Numerous Times 'He-Was-Denied',/ Looked Like The Village Idiot So You And Him 'Coincide',/ You Dar To Fuckin Preach, With No 'Skill-or-Technique',/ Only MC Currently Speaks As I Watch Your 'Lips-Leak',/ You Dont Compare To Pac, Biggie Or Even Me, I Like This Line,/ Shows Your Faggot Tendencies And Denial You 'Hold-Inside',/ Keep Your Raps For 'Storage', Your Gats, Guns 'And-All',/ Whats Your A$$ Gunna Do? Vests That Deflect Dont Come in 'SMALL',/ I've Seen You Critisize, Who Make Ya Champ And Gave The 'Prize',/ That Competition Was Fake No Champ!!! 'Straight-up-Lies',/ You Pick On Mutha-Fuckas Inside Your Threads 'You-Attack',/ My Granny Could Knock You Out With A Lil PlayFul 'Bitch-Slap',/ You Talk Out Your A$$ Your 'Verbal-Disability-Spews',/ The Talent You Think You Got Im Sure You Breathe Through Ur 'A$$-Too',/ I Wont Play The Gay Card, Your Secret Is 'Always-Locked',/ So Tell Me One Think, When Was Your 'Sweet-A$$-Popped',/ I'll Chop You Down To Size, You Embody The 'Word-Nerd',/ I'm The Lyrcally Un-Balanced, Bitch I Got Respect 'Nigga-Word',/ Keep Dreamin Mutha-Fucka, You Smoke Blunts Through 'Crack-Pipes',/ Now You Calimin You A Soldier When You Havent Earned 'Your-Stripes',/ You Talking So Much Smack A A B B C And Fuckin 'D',/ It Aint Just The Structure Mutha-Fucka Its 'The-Potentcy',/ Fucking Hell You Whack Yea I Peeped On Your 'Profile',/ SPuL Mutha-Fucka Young A$$ Looking 'Pedophile',/ You Got 'Beef' .. With Peice420 or 'Class-Sic', Then Count Me 'In',/ I Aint Here To Bring You Down, Just To Tell Ur Sorry A$$ You 'Cant-Win',/ Forgive Me If It Aint My 'Best' Lmfao!! I Was A Bit Rushed From All The Comotion Around In My Direction But!! Upppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!! |
And I Already Said' .. No Maximum!! Limit!!' lol
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aiight, nice spit. Uppin' for votes.
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Haha' .. Sorry I Was A Bit Frustrated' ....
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It's aiight. Uppin' for votes.
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this is a mad hard battle to vote on...........SPuL you had some hard hits and some nice personals and a really nice flow........DisasterPeice you had nice structure and some nice rhymes...........this was a real hard vote but the vote will have to rest on originallity.................
vote: SPuL |
aiight thanks for votin'. uppin'
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Aight.. I'm not going line by line because that would take too fucking long. So let's see... basically you both had similiar structure, pretty even flow, and you came hard with the punches. So basically it comes down to who was I feeling more, who had nicer wordlplay, better punches, etc.
I go with DP420... Like check this out from spul: "Battlin’ only newbies… girl… you’re a wussy You’re rhymes are as tight… as Paris Hilton’s pussy And that’s very loose… jus to let your fine ass kno Sleepin’ wit a different guy, each night, y’all are hoes" Yo I got that second line in the first bar, the explenation is just superfluous, and then that punch in the second line is overused and just kinda weak. I also liked DP's rhymes more, I felt the vocab a bit more... tight battle though. |
Thanks For The Votes' Ya'll.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Looking Out' Shadows'
Still Upppppppppppin 4 Votes |
aiight i think spul could have done better nice punches and structure but that was about it...disaster didnt have that many good punches but when she did use one it hit hard and the whole verse flowed with consistency...disaster also had some nice wordplay and i think she came just a lil bit harder than spul did...nice battle
vote: disaster nice battle ~1~ |
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I Will Make Sure To Return The Favor.. No Matter Who You Vote For'!! So Lets Get Some Votes On This Shit!!!!! Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes |
DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This
Personals: Punches: Structure: Multies: Flow: Verse: WordPlay: Vocab: Explain Your DAMN VOTE!! Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....... Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!! Sure Appriciate it!! Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones) .... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!! - - - Thanks - - - ****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!! ((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now |
yea I'll return the favor too. Also, you got a vote from a dude in my crew. lol :laugh:
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im givin this to disasterpiece because she showed me her pic. lololol im just playin. but she seemed like she wanted up more than u spul. u had one line that made me laugh, that paris hilton shyt, but my girl came at u like she hated u dog
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
^ I guess I'll let that one go. But from now, when you vote breakdown the categories like DP showed at above. Cuz this really was supposed to be in Elevated Front lines, but that isn't active that much. But anyways, uppin' for some EXPLAINED votes.
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DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This
Personals: Punches: Structure: Multies: Flow: Verse: WordPlay: Vocab: Explain Your DAMN VOTE!! Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....... Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!! Sure Appriciate it!! Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones) .... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!! - - - Thanks - - - ****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!! ((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now And I Do Hate SPuL - Stupid Trick!! Comming At Me Like That!! Lol.. Nah Just Playing You Know I Got Madd Respect For You! :) |
lol what stupid trick are you talkin' about?
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This is a good battle but hard to judge cuz both cam hard, now Spul had some nice punches I liked the paris hilton line an the u make the class sic line, but you messed up on your set ups, you had good flow, fair vocab, good structure, good shit
Dp420...you just out rhymed that cat, it was long an I don't like to read but I bared wit it, you didn't have many punches but the ones you had landed hard, you had good wordplay which he didn't have, great vocab, an some nice multies sprinkles in ya shit, good flow, solid structure, wasn't feeling the closer though but that show ya fag tendencies line was sick, good shit Vote: Dp420 |
Opener: DP..SPuL ur opener was very elementary wit the hoe concept...everyonbe uses that against DP so try to come up with something fresh...
Closer: Tie..SPuL's was a nice lil punch...DP's was a nice lil punch...so tie Personals: SPuL...DP u didnt really have any personals... Punches: DP...yours was longer..which means more room for punches...but SPuL u ahd some hot ones...just DP had more punches that were hard hitting...close category though... Structure: SPuL...DP dont use "/"'s cuz they make u look like a newbie... Multies: Tie...both had a lot of multis and they were hot... Flow: SPuL...i jus felt SPuL's flow more... Verse: Tie...both had hot verses so tie in that category.. WordPlay: DP...this is where DP showed her skill as being a vet...SPuL elevate in this category... Vocab: DP...SPuL get out that dictionary haha... DP... Your pretty straight...jus keep elevatin cuz u r gettin betta...not really any advice i can give cuz u got the basics down...jus use some personals!! SPuL... Ok...keep elevatin on ur punches n personals...i suggest u go to tutorials and learn how to set urself up for a punch and how to land the punch...that shit helped me n im sure itll help you...nice multis in ur verse so keep usin those...keep elevatin kid cuz ur showin me alot of potenital each battle ur in... Vote - DP |
Thanks For The Vote Triple_N .. Appriciate It!!...... Good Looking Out Playa
I Was Talking About You SPuL.. I Was Only Fucking With You Though Haha!!! ... DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This Personals: Punches: Structure: Multies: Flow: Verse: WordPlay: Vocab: Explain Your DAMN VOTE!! Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....... Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!! Sure Appriciate it!! Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones) .... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!! - - - Thanks - - - ****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!! ((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now |
Thanks L.I. Appriciate The Vote Good Looking Out!! Playa' ... :) ...
" "'s ... <=====I Like To Use Them !! Lol' .. Haha Anyway' . I Will Try To Mellow Out On 'Em..!!! ..... DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This Personals: Punches: Structure: Multies: Flow: Verse: WordPlay: Vocab: Explain Your DAMN VOTE!! Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....... Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!! Sure Appriciate it!! Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones) .... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!! - - - Thanks - - - ****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!! ((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now |
somebody put me out of my misery. lol Atleast I got 1 vote.
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Yeah' ... From 'Accomplishment' ....!!! Member of 'Class Sic' .. lol
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What do you mean? He didn't vote for me? Atleast I think.
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Oh LMAO!' ... I Mis Read ... That Shit!! Haha' ... "Mcnotorious" Voted For You
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i don't kno who the hell to vote for
spul-good punches good personals good structure good rymes good flow DisasterPeice-good personal, lacking punches that landed hard-u had a few but spul had more that hit harder...i had to reread this one cuz at first i thought u had it but i re read it and saw that spul got this one vote-spul |
DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This
Personals: Punches: Structure: Multies: Flow: Verse: WordPlay: Vocab: Explain Your DAMN VOTE!! Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....... Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!! Sure Appriciate it!! Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones) .... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!! - - - Thanks - - - ****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!! ((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now Cool - YoungStar* |
aiight, uppin'. Jus when I thought I was out. lol
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here is the break down
Personals: Punches:Spul Structure:DP Multies:Spul Flow:Spul Verse:dp WordPlay:None Vocab:None There was basicly nothing that stood out in this battle, i voted beacuse i try to vote for must see's and Dp is one fine motha. Just joking, but dp hola at the kid and no hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Lmfao' !!! @ Phat Mic' ............... Thanks' !! Appriciate The Compliment
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Opps structure is DP and personals are Spul
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lol I thought I was out. But I still gotta chance. Uppin' for votes. 4-3 Disaster.
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errr...i shouldnt even vote on dis.this battle is onesided lol really tho. so heres the break down:
Structure: dP...for the fact her shit was easier to read Flow: dP...for the fact she kept da whole thang flowin while the utha guy lost me in a few points Vocab: dP....not buy that much,she just had a few more words that got her this category Punches: Tie...i really dont know if i seen any Opener: SpuL wins this category kuz da shit was funny Closer: SpuL gets this one for the "d-ray" line at the end..shyt was nice Creativity: Tie..both emcees was good and creative Overall Vote: dP...she just had a better flow...SpuL u lost me a couple times...u came back on track tho playa..but dP kept the flow goin all da way. **note drop an honest vote on C_R_E_A_M Vs Shady Genius 4-1 [im winin] |
check it nice battle by both peeps both got off 2 some nice start both came hard check it
spul-u had a nice flow wit some hott punches good ass personals but on 1 junk u used hoe like twice so u couldve got creative wit dat but on da other hand nice drop disaster-u had a descent drop yo shit was consistant all the way thru wit some punches nice vocab along the way some personals spul: bestline-At not following rules… you are definitely the master I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster ^^^^ wheeew hot way 2 kill her man u used her username against her in a hot way worsteline-irl, I’m not one to be fucked wit. I be 8-2, yo The crowd be lovin’ me… while they be booin’ you, hoe ^^^^^ 2 simple couldve got creative on dat disaster- bestline-You Talk Out Your A$$ Your 'Verbal-Disability-Spews',/ The Talent You Think You Got Im Sure You Breathe Through Ur 'A$$-Too',/ ^^^^^ dat was tight feelin dat lady worsteline-I'll Chop You Down To Size, You Embody The 'Word-Nerd',/ I'm The Lyrcally Un-Balanced, Bitch I Got Respect 'Nigga-Word',/ sounds more like of a freestyle more than a battle.... spul- punches-9/10 vocab-8.5/10 personals-9/10 structure-10/10 open-9/10 end-9.5/10 overall-9.2/10 disaster- punches-9/10 vocab-8.2/10 personals-9/10 structure-10/10 open-8.9/10 end-9.3/10 overall-9/10 winner spul |
breakdown for disator:
rymes 8/10 style 7/10 punches 8/10 your best line: UnderStand You Cant Lie Or Deny "While-Under-Oath',/ You Can't Rap Or Free But Still Your 'Trying-To-Do-Both',/ breakdown for spul: rymes 8/10 style8/10 punches9/10 i like good punches so i would say thats what won him tha battle you both did sweet, but spul wanted it so he tryed harder and put more into it my vote goes to spul by the way ur best line was: At not following rules… you are definitely the master I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster |
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