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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 02:06 PM

DisasterPeice420 Vs. FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 
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FlowIntelligent. 04-16-04 02:08 PM

aiight girl im'a start keying now..gonna try for 40 lines ~1~

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 02:09 PM

Alright Playa' ...! :) Good Luck'

FlowIntelligent. 04-16-04 03:09 PM

aiight check it

theres no lies to be told cuz im keepin it honest//
cuz this bytch sound stupider than bush speakin ebonics//
and this battle may not not be a good topic to touch//
but i guess i will cuz im so demonic and such//
i spit logic and stuff...and if u watch me enough//
u can see i push verses with the godliest thrust//
with the best of vast powers..ill put to rest this last coward//
and leave disaster bedridden like death in her last hour//
im the truest when spittin...you shoulda knew this when dissin//
cause im bound to astound someones attention like a newest invention//
you got the appetite for diaster?! well i got the recipe//
and like christopher reeves presently you cant step to me//
disaster pack guns ooooh im really really scared//
im not sensitive so why u act like i really really care?//
you talking about ya skills like you messin wit my dam stuff//
how u gonna diss me when u the president of my fan club//

~switch~

i inject malignant contaminatez in verses to slow ya kinetics//
poetry in motion? na disater ya flow is pathetic//
im rollin tha credits..game over..hold her for medics//
my omens embedded..gropin her flesh with spoken aesthetics//
distort dismantle hold your back rip out ya spine//
disaster a perfect 10? na bitch u "ass-a-nine"//(assanine)
this bitch is washed up..i already knocked u out of ya boots and seams//
heres proof im mean..i burn disaster to her core like fruits with steam//
your flows are pathetic and mild..i should stop neglecting this child//
its gettin hectic and wild..and for killin this gurl RB's gonna put me on trial//
this wise ass is about to get her insides bashed, lets let our minds clash//
you gettin dropped like a juggler performin blind acts..in other words old news dies fast//leave you in broken parts and pieces, after I stab u with a sharpened thesis//jus call me a arson genius..ill burn u like a darkened fetus//
Suspend disaster clean off pedestalz to test gravity//
ya flesh pattern bleedz lavishly thru chest cavitiez//
ya OVERconfidence is OVERzealous..ya OVERrated//
but i UNDERstand ya UNDERachievementz are UNDERstated//
throw in da towel..itz over cause im burnin ya scriptz//
how u in da driver'z seat but don't own a learner'z permit//
fuck what you wrote..the climax of this battle is seeing u bitch about votes//
ill let you speak ya mind after i shove ya head down ya throat//

~~~FINISHER~~~

you’ve been served, im ill like I left "AIDS CAUGHT JUST YOU” on the titz of ya BITCH//read the capped words backwards...now whose really sick//

~1~

match my lines 40

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 03:42 PM

DAMN! Playa' ... Good Drop!' ... Nice Verse' !!! ... Im Liking' It' But You Going To Have To Gimmie Some Time'!!!

FlowIntelligent. 04-16-04 03:49 PM

aiight im bout to log off for like 2 hours ill be back tho hope fully ya verse will be in so we can get some votes ~1~

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 05:09 PM

Alright Checckity Checck Checck' ...!! Don't Feel Like Droppin 40Lines' ..!! But Here Goes'...

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 05:26 PM

I Guess I Hit A 'Nerve' When I Took You 'Outta-The-Closet',/
I Exposed A 'Fag', Homo Wanna Be That 'Makes-Me-Vomit',/
The Only One Who's Getting Raped Is You!, 'Understand',/
You Were Type'n That Last Verse Checking Out 'Another-Man',/
Can't Even Get That A$$, Better Use Your 'Hand',/
You've Been Prove'n Im Better Every Time 'You-Come-Back',/
After Every One Of My Flows You Try 'To-Top-That',/ (lol)
I Don't Know Why I Bother, I Won Every Round In 'This-Battle',/
You've Been Branded By My Style, Just Part Of the Heard; 'Another Cattle',/
Your Obserd With Your Raps, This Was A Battle Of 'Wits',/
Why Did You Bother To Show, You 'Unprepared-Bitch',/
Homo A$$ Faggot, Points That 'Finger-At-Me',/
What Grade Are You In Again' ,.. 'Elementary',/
No Doubt Your A Sorry A$$ Excuse For a 'Black Man',/
You Lost Braincells And Heart, Lay Off The 'Crack-Damn',/
If Ur Going To Insult Me, Get It Right G, Oh Thats Right i 'See',/
Forgot You Cant Read, Or Ur Last Verse Would Make Sence To 'Me,/
Scandelous You See, For That 'Waisted-Verse',/
You Spit Like 'Thirty-Lines', Not Even 'One-Burn',/
Your Just A Toy Man, I Been Pulling 'Your-Strings',/
Fucking Around With Your 'Hockey-Stick-Dreams',/ (LoL)
I See You Have A Fan, What's It Spinnin On 'The-Wall',/
Every Time You Pick Up A Mic, Your 'Set-Up-To-Fall',/
You Keystyling Moron Couldn't Even 'Wrtie-A-Verse',/
Despite My Curse We All Bound To Be In a 'Hearse',/
For A Minute It Seemed Like You Might Make It With 'That-Rap',/
The Second You Hit Submit You'd Wish You Could 'Take-It-Back',/

FUCCK IT!! IM DONE' ... Don't Feel Like Typeing Any More Shit'!! ...

Your Probably Took This Battle .. Haha' ..!! Anyways... Nice Drop Playa' ...
And Good Looking Out!!!' .... But Im Through' With This Verse!!' Don't Feel Like Adding Any More Lines'! Go Ahead Take The 'Win' .. :) Haha

FlowIntelligent. 04-16-04 10:13 PM

nice drop disaster i was feelin it uppin for votes

E Looch 04-16-04 10:47 PM

long ass shit gimme an hour to read them real quick

Truth_ 04-16-04 11:01 PM

dam have to read this shit over good battle thou ill drop my vote in a couple

E Looch 04-16-04 11:05 PM

this was a nice battle long as hell but a good 1


i thank flow intelligent had a sick ass verse good vocab ok opener tight ass closer
first part was ok didnt feal it to much but the second was ill good ass punchlines wordplay personals and multis oh and did i mention that closer was tight

disaster piece had a good verse flowed pretty well opener i wasnt fealin to much though closer was pretty decent and a couple of good punchs threw the verse to just didnt feal it as much as i felt flow
vote flow intelligent

Truth_ 04-16-04 11:47 PM

good battle to both but mad long almost fallin as sleep

420 u had a nice mad verse goos shit

No Doubt Your A Sorry A$$ Excuse For a 'Black Man',/
You Lost Braincells And Heart, Lay Off The 'Crack-Damn',/

i like this line mad funny fo real
u also had some good punches
good shit your verse flow very well...

as for FlowInteligent good shit like that wordplay it up your verse alot
as for vocab to multis and punches good shit nice punches to as if i saw this
like this Flow Inteligent came harder with his verse he had all the advantage
on vocab multis an punches the wordplay to

Vote=GlowInteligent..


good battle thou keep elevatin..

FlowIntelligent. 04-17-04 12:50 AM

uppin for votes thanks for the feedback truth can u poll your vote

FlowIntelligent. 04-17-04 02:50 PM

uppin....

FlowIntelligent. 04-18-04 12:56 AM

uppin for votes come on people stop sleepin on this

FlowIntelligent. 04-18-04 02:14 PM

uppin.......

FlowIntelligent. 04-18-04 08:56 PM

uppin for votes people come on

FlowIntelligent. 04-19-04 12:15 PM

dammit people vote stop sleepin on this its a good battle uppin dam

DeNounced 04-19-04 12:19 PM

lmao...flow looks like youve been hard at work to get votes and people still sleepin..lmao...

hydroponic_buzz 04-19-04 01:13 PM

That was a tight battle, i liked how intelligent kept up the leve of punches and flow throughout his entire verse. The flow became more solid as the verse progressed

you got the appetite for diaster?! well i got the recipe//

loved that line, funny an even slightly thought provokin'.

Disaster showed some ill rhymin' also, the flow wasn't as smooth though, also had a good length verse.

You Were Type'n That Last Verse Checking Out 'Another-Man',/
Can't Even Get That A$$, Better Use Your 'Hand',/

that was a funny line.

In the end i'm gonnae have to vote for flow intelligent.
keep droppin that shit dawg!

FlowIntelligent. 04-19-04 03:11 PM

lol hell ya denounced im trying to get some votes lol shyt been up for a minute why dont you vote

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-19-04 03:49 PM

Uppppppppppin This Shit For My Boi' FlOw InTeLLiGeNt ... Yall Drop Some Honest Votes On This Shit' & Quit Sleepin On It For Real' !!!!

C'Mon People & Drop Some Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I Will Return The Favor' No Matter Who You Vote For!!!!!!!!! Aight!!!

Uppppppppin 4 Votes

FlowIntelligent. 04-19-04 09:50 PM

uppin for votes............

Rising Sun 04-20-04 07:17 PM

amazing battle. both had nice multies and punches but i gotta give this to flow intellgient cause he came hard second half wit big vocab and a tight ass flow. disaster piece lost confidence'''dont worry keep elevating you really good..... peace

FlowIntelligent. 04-21-04 08:53 AM

uppin this shyt come on people vote

:Krysis: 04-21-04 09:47 AM

ma 2 pennys.....

Flow intell.....

theres no lies to be told cuz im keepin it honest//
cuz this bytch sound stupider than bush speakin ebonics//
^^^
not a bad opener....

cause im bound to astound someones attention like a newest invention//
you got the appetite for diaster?! well i got the recipe//
and like christopher reeves presently you cant step to me//
^^^
3 hot lines....props

i inject malignant contaminatez in verses to slow ya kinetics//
poetry in motion? na disater ya flow is pathetic//
im rollin tha credits..game over..hold her for medics//
my omens embedded..gropin her flesh with spoken aesthetics//
distort dismantle hold your back rip out ya spine//
disaster a perfect 10? na bitch u "ass-a-nine"//(assanine)
^^^^
Sickest part of ure whole battle verse....

~~~FINISHER~~~

you’ve been served, im ill like I left "AIDS CAUGHT JUST YOU” on the titz of ya BITCH//read the capped words backwards...now whose really sick//
^^^
nice...

i could go on an on wit quotes but i aint gonna, ya verse was sick in parts but lacked personals n creativitie in others.....

Disaster....

I Guess I Hit A 'Nerve' When I Took You 'Outta-The-Closet',/
I Exposed A 'Fag', Homo Wanna Be That 'Makes-Me-Vomit',/
^^^
kind of a poor opener to say u got so many wins.....

If Ur Going To Insult Me, Get It Right G, Oh Thats Right i 'See',/
Forgot You Cant Read, Or Ur Last Verse Would Make Sence To 'Me,/
^^^
nice punch mami....

I See You Have A Fan, What's It Spinnin On 'The-Wall',/
Every Time You Pick Up A Mic, Your 'Set-Up-To-Fall',/
^^^
another nice 1.....

For A Minute It Seemed Like You Might Make It With 'That-Rap',/
The Second You Hit Submit You'd Wish You Could 'Take-It-Back',/
^^^
nice finisher...

ok.....befor i fall asleep my vote goes to flow intell...better verse overall, nicer punches, better stability of flow, more creative and just a better verse..
but....i aint sayin that disasters verse was wack cuz both verses were ok.....

both need to work on punchlines.....

holla....

*falls off chair asleep*

Enygma 04-21-04 11:02 AM

WOW! I didn't expect so much from Flow........ This was a pretty good battle and I would do a line by line analysis but I think it would take up two pages. Flow came hard wit sick ass multis. The punches fell off in a few places but then quickly came back. Disaster didn't come as hard as she usually does but it wasn't that bad of a verse. Punches didn't really stick though.........

Vote - Flow Intelligent


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