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JPoll 04-16-04 08:26 PM

JPoll VS east miles
 
rules' follow or dq....
10 lines...
no dr
no hate
no crew
one...

u spit first within 30 minutes

In-Vision 04-16-04 08:51 PM

yo vote on this I'll return the favor...this battle is hot..atleas drop feedback

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119513

East Miles 04-16-04 09:04 PM

Aight Jpoll

I'll break ya nose.

I run ya clothes. ya bullet wound open N ya mind is closed.

You a faggot u can't hide it with nut on your mustache.

Put a condom on the nine N fuck u in the ass.

Nigga I outta ma head.

through ya butt I'll blow ya guts outta ya ribs.

I'm sick like aids red beams case ya face like a muthafucken hostage raid. Look

You wanted a quick battle.

Two gats in ya dome a make a quick rattle. Dont get miles in a rage.

cuz East a put the gauge to rib cage clap face wit the gat straped to my shoulder blade.

JPoll 04-16-04 09:16 PM

wow youre an idiot............................................. ...................................english please...haha...that was terrible....haha...i'll drop in a second

East Miles 04-16-04 09:46 PM

dog look don't even bother if u cant reconize a person who can actually kill, smash yo weak ass in any verse you lay down. Then you don't deserve to be beaten by my hand, you weak fuck.

JPoll 04-16-04 09:49 PM

haha....and now for someone who has realized that the gangster rap days are OVER!!!
:spit:

i won't even have to try on this against this no talent bitter...haha east miles realize people on this site aren't as stupid as well probably your friends and they realize when you bite shit....haha...you generic punk

haha this i'll be easy...looks like it's another win baby

yo this is off the top...haha


First off east miles, you can't kill me cause we're both online,
If you're so hard why u in front of ur comp, you should be commitin a crime,

It's friday night n ur a g?, if u where u wouldn't be text fightin,
I'm wrecking you as hard as holyfield did tyson, but you keep bittin,

That gun condom line was said by Fat Joe,
So unless you him, you a cheatin ass ho,

You need to bring pro lines here, what u got writters block?
You act hard like pac, but you more like Ja, a crock,

0 and 0, you could never go toe to toe, or blow for blow with me,
u only pretend to like rap for ya friends, ya real favorite band is creed....

haha

your a nobody...ganster wannabe

JPoll 04-16-04 09:50 PM

haha you are terrible..........i can't recognizee.........kill me kill me then........well i'm still alive...you suck...stop rapping...you fake ass nobody

East Miles 04-16-04 09:52 PM

Damn u gay........................................ So don't every send another challenge white boy

JPoll 04-16-04 09:54 PM

wow.....gladly look at my record.....your terrible..................haha...............so how's the D-isease?
haha

So is your intention for people to laugh in your face?

East Miles 04-16-04 10:21 PM

Okay Look we all know your ignorant so lets be truthful, In a face to face battle My freestyle lyrics would have straight dismantled you. A your record dont impress nobody kidd get of this site before I actually try to beat you. I laugh at the fact your so horrible

FlowIntelligent. 04-16-04 10:29 PM

aiight east miles u had no structure no multis didnt flow...u had a couple punches tho...jpoll i have seen u come a lot harder..even if he did spit a wack verse i was about ready to vote for him cuz u came so weak...

"That gun condom line was said by Fat Joe,
So unless you him, you a cheatin ass ho,"

^^ granted u played off his bar to your advantage but that bar was ass..i know u nice jpoll and that u could wreck this kid..but i still gotta vote for you..just for the simple fact that east miles came even worse

vote: jpoll

~1~

Truth_ 04-16-04 10:40 PM

me to i agree with Flow Intelligent no disrespect but east moles your shit was a whole
wack disater no structure,multis nothing

"That gun condom line was said by Fat Joe,
So unless you him, you a cheatin ass ho,"

^^ granted u played off his bar to your advantage but that bar was ass.. but j poll i still gotta vote for you..just for the simple fact that east miles came even worse

vote: jpoll

East Miles 04-17-04 03:42 AM

What can someone verfiy this cuz i never heard Fatjoe say that punchline because I wrote it so what ya'll are some dr voters I should report

East Miles 04-17-04 04:02 AM

Man close this weak ass battle dude I spitted off the dome in 5 mins n I murked this herb please. Yeah I agree the multis N my structure plus I missed some words. That verse was garbo but don't evry call me a fucken biter because I always spitt my own shit so before ya'll saying I'm a fake thug if you ever in detroit tell me so i can actually break every bone in ya fucken fragile body dr haters I'm out biotch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JPoll 04-17-04 03:05 PM

whatever idiot...everyone knows they've heard that line from fat joe....uppin for votes

East Miles 04-17-04 03:16 PM

Okay you dick Only your dr freinds know this because only lames listen to Fat joe. Punk Bitch and who the fuck you calling an idiot with your 75 IQ.

JPoll 04-17-04 03:17 PM

my 75 iq...i'm in university taking engineering...haha and you're in the disease...haha...have fun with that....and i listen to all rap...but thanks, how can you know what you like if you don't try it all?

JPoll 04-17-04 03:18 PM

by the way i got a 1300 on my sat's ....haha did you even take your sat's? haha

East Miles 04-17-04 03:18 PM

If you really wanna see my raw form set another battle faggot. But I won't expect you to since you know I'll fucken rip you limb for limb if WE BATTLE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

franchiZe 04-17-04 03:19 PM

ok let me get into this

JPOLL
ure performance was average u can do better, tha spit u hit me wiv was far better.
ure flow and structure was on and u came wit a couple of nice punches. not much 4 originality but still u had gud vocabs.
OVERALL - 6/10

EAST MILES
first off i know u ripped that fat joe line
ure performance was not gud at all, ure flow was just about ok but ure structure was wack. ure punches were all weak and didn't really do any damage to JPoll. u really need to elevate ure game if u hope to win any battles cuz ure spit will get u nuthin but losses, ure a newb so its aight tho, just remember, use multis and hit wiv gud strong personals
OVERALL - 4/10
Vote = JPoll

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JPoll 04-17-04 03:19 PM

haha.....what you'll copy and paste from another pro rappers lyrics page...haha that's the only way you'd ever beat me

East Miles 04-17-04 03:21 PM

Man you really get under my fucken skin you sarcastic bastard.............

East Miles 04-17-04 03:22 PM

Just set it up and I'll knock'em down faggot!! LOL

JPoll 04-17-04 03:22 PM

oh sorry...you need a tissue....so it's look like i'm going to KO you..................and no after this battle is done being voted on i would like to rape your ass lyrically again...haha maybe i should try this time

East Miles 04-17-04 03:25 PM

Yeah keep talking go ahead N try to get another win from the Rook. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You make me laugh with joy.

JPoll 04-17-04 03:27 PM

okay when this battle is done...i'll set it up ....you think that your ready....seriously?

East Miles 04-17-04 03:27 PM

If you really want it come N get anouther win You wannabe rapper. I'll love nothing better to Get you again..............

JPoll 04-17-04 03:29 PM

to get me again? i wrote that as i was typing it ...and i still killed you...haha...you wannabe gangsta;///haha no skilled punk

East Miles 04-17-04 03:29 PM

I look forward to gettin at you N since I was beatin I spit first and allow you to evaluate my " Biting ass lyrics"

Shadows edge 04-17-04 03:30 PM

hey yo I got a 1600 on my SATs and nobody cares because it doesn't matter, so how about less trash talking by everyone.

its like this. East: Your battles are weak as fuck. Your flow is really poor, the split line deal doesn't work at all, your lines don't really rhyme and your punches are all played and not original at all. you have to work on your vocab, multis, flow and get creative. also, get some personal punches in there, instead of just talking about your guns and what not.

check this, by JPoll:

"First off east miles, you can't kill me cause we're both online,
If you're so hard why u in front of ur comp, you should be commitin a crime,

It's friday night n ur a g?, if u where u wouldn't be text fightin,
I'm wrecking you as hard as holyfield did tyson, but you keep bittin,"

see that shit, he got a personal in there and straight up punches, nice wordplay and everything. not a perfect verse, but he easily took this battle.

East Miles, evelate.

hit back my battles, honest votes and well explained votes only.

JPoll 04-17-04 03:30 PM

well i'll spit first next time then....god you're terrible.....I dont' even have to spit to wipe the floors with you...ya know why...cause nothing about your rhyming is good...

East Miles 04-17-04 03:31 PM

Damn your sarcastic but you'll get some act right in this next battle. Oh by the way a five min lay down. Oh! you really got me Big man. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enygma 04-17-04 03:31 PM

This match was horrible. I understand that this was East's first battle but c'mon man. JPoll killed him wit the personals. He had punches in almost every line. East, you need to relax and take your time to come up wit somethin halfway intelligent to spit, not just some wack shit that my 3 year old son could've wrote........

Vote - JPoll

return the favor wit some honest votes............... links are in the sig

East Miles 04-17-04 03:32 PM

True true.............................................. .....

JPoll 04-17-04 03:33 PM

hey dog....haha....that's four.............................................. ..............you ready i'm going to set up our next battle tonight...k?...are you sure you want to again...15 lines..? i go first?

JPoll 04-17-04 03:34 PM

16 lines............................................. .................................................. .......

East Miles 04-17-04 03:34 PM

Naw no limit I got alot to say !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JPoll 04-17-04 03:36 PM

14-20 lines then that's the limit............................................. .....i got shit to do... cause i do have a life


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