creativitie vs daclassic
 

rules are as follows
10-16 bars
no prewritten
blind spit
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hate votes
both spit in a half hour after check in....cool

check in

time starts when u check in for the both of us

aye yo ten bars is kinda long.................htis aint the check in...im when you check in then i check in.......

aight here we go...................................check..hold up i got a pm........

not 10 bars i said 10 to 16 lines

alrite check..................by the way...this kid wanted to no if i was good..i guess since im good he dont wanna battle...hes a bitch.............hahah

yo
 

o thats not wat it says but thats betta........alrite go.....

i checked in

were you at.....it says your off line...wat happend..if you dont drop in 5 mins then tis battle is over..............

i got my shit just waitin for this kid to log bak on.were he go..no one nos....

the classic verse
 

ladies and gents please stand up for round two of this shyt.....

the classic one verses.....dj emscee i mean creativitie

Okay u claiming u a Dj an emcee now u calling yourself creativitie oops i guess i spelled it wrong, well im bout to exterminate all your aliases..lets go

Creativity poof! Your nothing, your gone, out of commission.
Asking permission to battle daclassic is like submission.
You battle to back your hopes. I battle like its tradition.
I'm steady spittin this ishin, to diminish your recognition.
Stop and wait and just listen, now pay the price of admission.
D.J. emscee is you scratching or spitten, rapping or mixin'.
Make a decision, before i make u a victim of lyric incision.
That'll puncture ya braincells to slow down ya lyrical fiction.
I'm saving u kid, from embarrasing your grave when your dead.
You said i get dick ride votes, dick riders rep my name in they sig.
You aint tougher then african feet,or the master of ceremony.
Your crew is about to be mine when i establish a matrimony.
I'm after you homie, to scatter your crew and leave u lonely.
I'm bout to monopolize this game like the creaters of sony.
You phony with no creativity to picture women mowing your lawn.
Your like a light switch, even a little kid can turn u on.

Nothing personal just business.

i will never log off for chance to beat u again

aight let me drop my shit...........................its not that good..........but who gives a fuck

look im bout to make a fool of this kid.....................he finally gave me a rematch afta all this time........prolly got somepre writeen shit...but WHO GIVES A FUCK......
time for this kids demise
CLASS SIC



this kid thinks he battlin nas, cuz he dealin wit god SON//
beat me? will neva happen like taken da virginty from a nun//
see i most be battlin ray charles cuz this kid cant clearly see me//
i called him out for three weeks becuz last time he barely beat me//
just cuz i let him in my crew this kid thinks hes DA CLAS SIC//
my punchlines are mike tyson in his prime, im gettin DA LAST HIT//
look my standard way of spittin is normally wit my vocab i lacerate//
like dumb virgins he couldnt cum hard if spittin wile he masterbates//
in this rap game im like the D.O.C cuz no one can do it better//
if you was the greatest you still couldnt rian in the worst weather//
the new RB is gettin a bad rep, niggas like you are the cause//
look wit my lyrical tec. clapped this kid up like a round of applause//

LOL............. Daclassic, That shit's been in my sig since day one.............
.................................................\ /..............................................

aight peace i got to go...i will be on in alil.........by the way that shit was clean.........kinda prewritten,...had some d.j em sce shit inn there....but coo.

okay good....prewritten never that cuz when i wanted to battle u ...u said no to me

yeah but i didnt know
 

i said that to let dj know its nothing personal cuz we in the same crew you know jus business

yeah nuffin personal its all in love....................

This was a pretty good battle..........

Daclassic: You dropped some hot shit. Multis were off the charts. Punches were killin him. Even had some good personals. Overall probably the best verse I've seen from you..........

Best Line..........
D.J. emscee is you scratching or spitten, rapping or mixin'.
Make a decision, before i make u a victim of lyric incision.

Creativitie: You didn't seem to come all that hard this time. You had a few good punches but nothing that really stood out. a few personals but mostly weak. It seems like you don't put any effort into your verses anymore.

Best line............
the new RB is gettin a bad rep, niggas like you are the cause//
look wit my lyrical tec. clapped this kid up like a round of applause//

Vote - Daclassic

I know what you were sayin, I just never seen anyone else say that before. It just caught my eye................ Good battle.

honest votes,,no d/r or hate votes...cuz if i suspect them i will see that they get remove....jus trying to keep it fair uppin 1

the reason daClassic gets my vote is becuz he keeps the big words flowin i kant beleave he can keep it goin like that wel n e ways he gets my vote

i just want to point out that this is the reason this site sucks. herb votes. no offense mixxed.. but god damn please read the freaking verses and give a damn reason.

Alright, tight battle, I almost don't wanna vote cuz sometimes when I read it it goes one way, but sometimes goes the other way. Aight check it.

classic: best single line: "You said i get dick ride votes, dick riders rep my name in they sig." Very good personal I thought, very trixy. Problem is, it didn't really flow or rhyme with the verse... sig and dead? Also, I don't like the "." at the end of each line because it tripped me up the first time you spilled over into the next line and i had paused... so i guess lose the periods. also, your closer is kinda whack, not really a great punch and how many times have i heard that last line? the flow was pretty good though, good use of multis early on and good job keeping that rhyme going for so long.

create: aight man, you had no originality in the first 7 lines of your verse. that CLASS SIC / LAST HIT was the closest you came to a real nice punch there... the rest flowed well and good use of vocab, but no originality. the closer though, totaly made your verse better... good rhyme, good flow, slightly more original, but better than classics.

anyway.. overall i think both of you could use more punches, and i differentiate punches from stuff like "i'm gonna kill you / beat you / trash you." i mean like disses... i think a verse is pointless if it doesnt have 2 or 3.. and y'all really didn't bring it. you had the vocab, the flow, structure... but don't forget the punches people.

anway... like i said, very tight battle... v/ creative though i could seriously vote differently tomorrow... :shrug:

hit up my battles with an honest vote. peace.

look like this Createve \
flow 7/10
rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10

Da classic
Flow 8/10
rhymes8/10
structure 9/10

remember detailed votes about both emcees......uppin 2

uppin for votes.................

Breakdown:
Punches: DaClassic
Metas: Neither
Multies: DaClassic
Wordplay: Neither
Disses: Tie
Flow: DaClassic

Overall-Good Battle.Both Emcees Did Good In This One But Im Goin With DaClassic On This One.His Punches Were Harder & His Flow Was On Point Because Of The Multies He Used.The Disses Were Evenly Thrown Between The Two But Neither Really Used Metas Or Wordplay.Creativitie Could Have Taken This,Maybe If He Had Better Puns Or Used Some Complexity.

Vote-DaClassic

My $0.02-Seein How I Was Denied A Battle From Creativitie & Was Told That "He Has Bigger Things To Worry About...Like Me",I Expected Better From The Two.Creativitie I Still Want My Battle & The Same With You DaClassic.....Since I Challenged You Both At One Point.

^^^^i didnt say that......daclassic said that..to tell the truth kid you got talent...i will battle oyu i dont care.......and i wasnt even feelin like spittin last nite....and that shit he texted was all prewritten.......read that shit again and tell me it wasnt...im not d.j em sce any more. the thing under my name dont say masteer of ceremony no more...and the only part he came with heat was when he was gettin on d.j em sce....

how many times i got to tell u it wasnt..prewritten ...i thought of it last night when i battled u so dont put salt on my verse......besides i didnt know if u dont go by that name anyway like i said at the begginning its your alias or your aka....since i knew u before creativitie i have the right to rap about your old name two...i know what both of your sigs use to say....peace.................uppin 3

yeah im uppin again.....4

Im goin with Da Classic he was a bit more harder
He had betta flow/betta punches/betta everything
This was a close battle fellas but my vot gos to Classic

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detailed votes people what about creativity and what he needs to work on...............

check it i'm gonna give u tha breakdown

DaClassic
you had some tight shit goin on there with some killa multis that blew away ure opponent. ure punches were solid and direct and tha way u opened ure battle was sick. U had a few good personals in there aswell that made it an all round quality performance. OVERALL - 9/10

creativitie
you had some gud stuff in there to but ure punches were not as direct and powerful as classics. ure flow was on and u had some gud structure with a couple of average personals thrown into the mix. i've seen u do much betta and u dont need me 2 tell u 2 elevate ure shit. just put more thought into it and get back tha flow u used to have
OVERALL 6/10

Vote - daclassic

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