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franchiZe vs. creativitie
yo i'm gonna set that rules
30 mins max 4 tha spit 30 lines max. 15 lines min. no d/r no hate no crew u choose who spits first!! |
thats kinda long just keep that shit regular.....10-15......aight.....not my check in
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you spit first...........no prewritten.....if its prewritten im not even goint to drop
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yo i'll spit first then
here are tha new rules 10 mins max 4 tha spit 10-15 lines max no prewritten no d/r no hate no crew i'll start when u check in |
10 mins...thats it...i just got out of a battle....make it 20..aight....
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20 it is then
i'm gonna spit now |
aight i will spit rite afta you.............................
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check this shit 4 tha pure sick spit..................
I'm gonna start with some personals, so listen up creaTivitie// fool ure only 15 still prayin for some fuckin sexual activity// my name may not be jack but i did fuck jill on tha hill// and i got tha bitch pregnant even tho she's on tha pill// check ure name and where ure from, its clear u can't spell// this is a mans game, u need to go back to show 'n' tell// u think ure ready for me Mr. tuffa than african feet// ure the student, i'm the teacher and i'm givin u an incomplete// ure called creaTivitie so ure spit betta be creative// or i'll split ure cranium leavin u permanently vegetative.// I’m the real high roller, this bitch is da low achiever// I’ll rip out ya weak soul cuz I’m Raziel the soul reaver// (from tha game) With a diamond edge cut I’ll leave u headless with a meat cleaver// I cud spit multis non-stop makin even u a true believer// Just so u can hear me I’ll go live via satellite receiver// I’m gonna infect u like a tick fillin u wit tha texas fever.// yeh i did go one line over tha top but who cares just spit ure shit creaTivitie |
aight here i go.................check in...........
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hold up not a check in..........my bad....got a pm..........
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aight here we go agian...sorry kids need to stop pm me...every time im bout to battle......
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fuckin ak mixa wont stop pm me......damn..im just goin to spit...fuck him....
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this herb sghould have neva fucked wit class sic.....you jst permitted your lost...
dis kids new 2 da game,battled me gues he dont care if he take a fall// franchise your skippin steps, tryn to walk before you can crawl// tryn to correct my grammer, now watch the teacher get taught// grammer dont me shyte,your an herb so who cares wat you thought// look i a ill rymer who already elevated in this rymin franchise// its like im eminem and and your seein shit thru stans-eyes// kid if you battled any body in my crew you would get Massacre// look if your skills multiplied, then multiple loses would occure// i bag and smoke herbs like u daily,fuck franchize should call you reefer// look i just smoked this franchize herb, now im the HI achiever// |
Hmm.. very tight battle. Creative.. I expected more.. you've been slacking lateley I think. The first line was pretty nice, but the flow wasn't great (too long). the second bar was just kinda weak, the second line especially could have been better. the third bar was definetely nice, also a good rhyme. the massacre line was nice, but then the next line was worded kinda poorly. the closer is kinda played, but still pretty decent.
franchiZe: yo, much better than the verse you spit against me. your first four lines were still really weak, just filler, not really much of a personal man. your next couple bars were pretty nice, but the last bar of that first part was really nice, i think your best one. very nice rhyme. your next 3 bars all flowed nicely, and you had good vocab throughout, but i didnt really see any nice punches. so basically, get a couple more multis, but work on da punches. you got too much filler, and too much "i'ma kill you" stuff, which is good but you have to have some punches i think. v/ creative but tight battle. vote honest on the battles in my sig. good feedback or dont vote at all. |
yo guys hit me up with an honest vote on this....
i'll vote on this battle after someone votes on my....honest and detailed...thanks http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119608 |
^^^ stop freepostin........vote or dont vote
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get sum more votes on this battle
and vote on my ova battles 2 and i'll return da favour here are the links: franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505 daClassic 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119675 |
get uppin the votes on this fly battle and i'll return da favour on ures
franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505 franchiZe 0-1 creaTivitie http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662 daClassic 2-0 franchiZe http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119675 |
vote on this battle and i'll return da favour u feel me
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whoaaa Franchize vote him cuz creativite i kno ur bettah den dat wtf itz like u wuz high when u was battlein him i give franchize my vote srry but i think he did bettah u gettin sicker n sicker evry battle Franchize thats whats up iight nigga 1 up peace
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yo check it up the votes on this here tight battle
drop me sum links and i'll return da favour here is the link to my other battle 2 franchiZe 2-4 Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176 |
All day creative got my vote, so votein and creative takes it
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FRANCHISE- EXCELLENT FLOW. THE VOCABULARY WAS GOOD. I DONT THINK YOU WERE REALLY PUTTING EFFORT INTO IT UNTILL THE FOURTH LINE AND THERE AFTER. IF YOU START LIKE YOU FINISHED THERE IS HIGHER POTENTIAL FOR YOU! :shoot:
CREATIVITIE-NICE FLOW. YOU NEED MORE FIERCE PUNCHES. IT SOUNDED LIKE YOU WERE ON THE DEFENSE INSTEAD OF THE OFFENSE. STILL GOOD THOUGH. :thumbup: |
......................uppin.......................
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yo lets get sum votes on this crazy battle
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wtf wtf wtf creativitie that opener was soo damn weak ,......im sorry...but come on i can see you was not tryin but...that was......doo doo....lmfao and that fgave franchize the advantage in this one
franchize-nice word usage im feelin your punches the only thing i think shouldnt of went in the battle was that jack n jill line..that didnt have shit to do with a battle..lmfao but other than that it was sick creativitie:that opener man....that was bad lmfao i was shocked...but you had an alright battle..ok structure.....punches didnt hit as hard as franchize but u did good my vote goes to franchize |
yo that jack and jill line was all to do wit the line from creaTivities sig but yea, probly shudda just left that out, but oh well no changin that now!!
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aye yo franchize your weak... you no for a fact a can rip you......after this battle colses im goin to rip you....so betta hurry up and do some prewritten again...
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uppin again for vote number 3
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drop sum votes on this shit homeys and i'll return da favour
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very good battle to me at least i really liked creaTivitie's flow he had good punches
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I gotta give this one to franchize. He just came wit harder rhymes and Creativitie didn't come wit shit. I ain't hatin, just statin facts. Creativitie only had one good line............
look i a ill rymer who already elevated in this rymin franchise// its like im eminem and and your seein shit thru stans-eyes// Probably the tightest in the battle but Franchize came wit more punches........ Vote - Franchize |
get uppin sum votes on this very tight battle playas and i'll return da favour
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aiight im gonna give this one to franchize his verse was ill i was feelin it from start to end good personals/punches all together the verse was nice as for creative i was feelin his verse too just not as much a couple good punches and some wordplay..overall tho franchize came just a lil bit harder
vote: franchize |
check it i need to get sum votes on this tight ass battle so do me a favour and i'll return it
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uppin............................................. ...........
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ight here i go creat you had good punches flows word play and good struc good style plain out good battle
franc good punches good word play nice struc good flow keep up wit it but all and all ima have to give this one to creat V=Creat |
hahah nice battle
franchize based his battle on personals an it worked it flowed nice it was cool 6.9/10 hahaha creative came in an put him in his place even though he fed off chiZe verse it was needed an it was a proper come back nice verse good battle 7.3/10 vote -creative |
uppin for the last vote................................
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francize's verse was good. but i gotta give it to creative b/c i thought his punchez hit harder and were more personal.
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