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streetsweepa 04-17-04 07:09 PM

streetsweepa vrs. wulf
 
10 line min
no line max
no d/r
no crew
wulf spits first


streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress

Wulf 04-17-04 08:19 PM

Woah i know, your verse will be tha shit
Thats why ima immerse it, and throw it inside a toilet
while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it
Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt
You know i'll prevail, like i just sent you to jail screamin through the wire mayne
Slip on some air max, it'll help you elevate to a higher plain
maybe you'll get your face str8, with the great
But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride
Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside
Cuz that verse will be limp like a penis
You should have been an aborted fetus before you were conceived
I bet your names Cletus, cuz your wrong like adam and steve
I'll rip you of protons so you wont be HIV positive
And attack you with atoms until you bleed, and bound you like photons
And stick you up like an IV clip, and slip your ball sack into a clit

Sorry quickest keystyle i could ever do before i left...good luck

streetsweepa 04-17-04 08:42 PM

tht was a straight verse not bad not bad good luck to u too

streetsweepa 04-17-04 09:09 PM

ur right my verse will be da shit//
dont even try no more u cant spit//
its ur mistake no ur gonna get ripped//
oh im not tryin to hurt ya feelings my bad it slipped//
kid u couldnt be sik if u had h.i.vs //
do us all a favor and quit rappin please//
ur my bitch so bow down on ya knees//
ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient //
your styles passive and my shit is militiant//
im gonna win evryones feelin' it//
my plan is to beat ur ass and imma start revealing it//
yo bitch u better quit with the attitude//
bitch u should show me gratitude//
u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude//
even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude//
your style is so old its jurrasic , so i it killed like turock (the dinousaur hunter)
so get back to ur job and suck my cock
look my punches got this bitch in shock//
we all new from the beggining i had this battle on lock//
i dont get why u even spit u must be eager to lose//
i hope u dont have anything to prove//
my punches connect faster than u can move//
u blow and i feel sorry for u, its got me in a bad mood//
i dont kno how much longer in this battle u will remain//
my skill is too hott for u to maintain//
after this loss you rcord will have an ugly stain//
youve just been massacred youve been slain//
now bow down in shame//
see ya plans have been changed//
ur not gonna win so its rearranged//
another loss for u is nothin strange//

streetsweepa 04-17-04 09:12 PM

uppin for votes holla uppin fo votes uppin for votes hola

Restricted 04-17-04 09:38 PM

Aight Check It..

StreetSweepa: 5/10
I Dunno, You Feed OfF His Verse A Little and Your Punches Weren't Hard All The Ways Through. I've Seen Better From You. You Gotta Add Dem Metaphors and Mulits In Dat Motherfucker!!
Elevate Pimpin.

Wulf: 6/10
You Came Wit Sum Originality, But Your Verse Wasn't Better Than Streets, Its Just The Fact That You Had Punches and Nice Flow. You Barely Won Dis...BUt Newayz. Just Elevate!

Vote - Wulf

~R~

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-17-04 10:37 PM

i think streetsweepa lost dat one i like dat brail shyt but u aint rhyme well enuff nah mean get ya shyt well packed n shyt n keep rightin cuz da punches was kinda sik but i give streetsweepa a 4/10

Wulf 04-18-04 12:05 AM

I know it wasn't my best but thanksfor the votes..

Wulf 04-18-04 04:10 AM

uppin for votes come on ya'll help us finish this

Wulf 04-18-04 11:04 AM

finish this up come on i'd vote if i had enough posts but i dont sorry

$$$tim$$$ 04-18-04 11:23 AM

breakdown for wulf:
punches 7/10
flow6/10
vocab8/10
your best line was:But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride
Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside
thats pretty tight overall21/30

street:
punches:7/10
flow 7/10
vocab 8/10
you best line:ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient //
your styles passive and my shit is militiant//
overall 22/30 both capable of better
my vote: streetsweepa

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 01:18 PM

iight hereswut i think
streetsweepa

flow 6/10
rhymes 7/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 8/10
overall 7.5/10
ur best line-yo bitch u better quit with the attitude//
bitch u should show me gratitude//
u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude//
even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude//

wulf

flow 4/10
rhymes 6/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 5/10
overall 5.5/10
ur best line-while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it
Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt
(but u gotta get ur shyt tighta homie ur shyt didnt even rhyme na mean keep workin on it)

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 01:20 PM

good battle tho na mean

Wulf 04-18-04 02:40 PM

ight ight 1-1 tied, up for more votes .....................

iamthatdude87 04-18-04 03:01 PM

this battle was really close... both had good vereses...but the only thing wrong is that streetsweepa is a flyweight he should of murderd wulf but i think wulf came out strong and i think knowing that street was a flyweight he should of elevated so my vote goes to wulf

iamthatdude87 04-18-04 03:03 PM

drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115753 thanks

streetsweepa 04-18-04 03:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by xXxMaztamindxXx
iight hereswut i think
streetsweepa

flow 6/10
rhymes 7/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 8/10
overall 7.5/10
ur best line-yo bitch u better quit with the attitude//
bitch u should show me gratitude//
u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude//
even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude//

wulf

flow 4/10
rhymes 6/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 5/10
overall 5.5/10
ur best line-while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it
Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt
(but u gotta get ur shyt tighta homie ur shyt didnt even rhyme na mean keep workin on it)

yo if u thought that why didnt you post a vote maztamind come on we uppin for votes

franchiZe 04-18-04 05:40 PM

yo i dont know what these ppl are smokin cuz sum of there votes are wack
in my opinion this was a one sided battle

Wulf ure flow was ok in places but sometimes it was off heres a perfect example:
"You know i'll prevail, like i just sent you to jail screamin through the wire mayne
Slip on some air max, it'll help you elevate to a higher plain"
u shud keep ure lines relatively the same length
ure structure was average and ure punches were gud but not spectacular

Street ure flow was on but ure spit really didnt need 2 be that long
i've seen u do betta but still u had sum originality in there and ure punches were merely average compared to wat u can do but they were far better than Wulf's and u had some better connection wiv ures
Overall i was feelin street a lot more through the entire battle

Vote -streetsweepa

Wulf 04-18-04 07:10 PM

well thats 2-2...close battle yo streets whoever wins i want a rematch

Wulf 04-18-04 08:13 PM

well thats 2-2...close battle yo streets whoever wins i want a rematch UPPIN

streetsweepa 04-18-04 08:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wulf
well thats 2-2...close battle yo streets whoever wins i want a rematch UPPIN


no doubt well get a rematch fosho

Wulf 04-18-04 09:49 PM

Of course i'll win this one and the other one but thats besides the point lol...Uppin for votes

Ps. Whats wit the flyweight? someone want to break down the rankings for me so i know whos ass to kick next? lol jp

Wulf 04-19-04 05:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wulf
Of course i'll win this one and the other one but thats besides the point lol...Uppin for votes

Ps. Whats wit the flyweight? someone want to break down the rankings for me so i know whos ass to kick next? lol jp


.........VOTE

Rising Sun 04-19-04 01:57 PM

Structure was wack, flow got better during the end, and yours was too long, like too many fillers. Vocab was weaker than Wulfs, and no many multies and personals. Although u had better punches.
Didn’t flow much, vocab is sick, punches are ok, and multies are good, there are no personals.
This is hard but immo give it to….
Streetsweepa
No hate, good job

Afterword 04-19-04 03:40 PM

yo im going to go with wulf b/c both of the flows had simple structure, vocb, and subject matter
but the thing that stuck out to me was that wolfs lines were a lil more developed and the punces were set up better.
theres not much more i can say b/c nothing here said much too me at all,
it was just a lot of lines with a rhyming word at the end
that lame.....both defended therselves but hardly swung any hard blows
if this was a boxing match it would have went the distance with no knockout
elevate(put on ya airmax)
peace

Triple_N 04-19-04 04:40 PM

This was a really even battle, neither was much better than the other, but someone's gotta win....Wulf you had good flow, weak vocab, decent creativity, decent punches, not really any wordplay, an your opener & closer wasn't very strong
Street....you had good creativity, fair vocab, good punches(not great), no wordplay, weak openr an closer like wulf, so my vote came down to one rhyme that ladder line one this battle for you, without it you would have lost
Vote: Street

Wulf 04-19-04 05:05 PM

AHH BULLSHIT! nah im just playin ight 4-3 lets get some more votes

DeNounced 04-19-04 05:30 PM

Wulf got that one...he came more direct in my opinion,and streetsweepas shit was just way to basic for me...

vote-wulf

Wulf 04-19-04 06:45 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeNounced
Wulf got that one...he came more direct in my opinion,and streetsweepas shit was just way to basic for me...

vote-wulf



UP VOTE

Wulf 04-19-04 07:18 PM

REAL REAL CLOSE SHIT LETS GET ONE HONEST VOTE EVERYTHING EXPLAINED uppp

Wulf 04-19-04 08:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wulf
REAL REAL CLOSE SHIT LETS GET ONE HONEST VOTE EVERYTHING EXPLAINED uppp


sdfsdfsdf UP

Diagnose 04-19-04 08:22 PM

this was sed by $$TIM$$

"breakdown for wulf:
punches 7/10
flow6/10
vocab8/10
your best line was:But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride
Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside
thats pretty tight overall21/30

street:
punches:7/10
flow 7/10
vocab 8/10
you best line:ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient //
your styles passive and my shit is militiant//
overall 22/30 both capable of better
my vote: streetsweepa"

I agree 100 percent


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