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streetsweepa vrs. wulf
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no line max no d/r no crew wulf spits first streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating -Cprogress |
Woah i know, your verse will be tha shit
Thats why ima immerse it, and throw it inside a toilet while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt You know i'll prevail, like i just sent you to jail screamin through the wire mayne Slip on some air max, it'll help you elevate to a higher plain maybe you'll get your face str8, with the great But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside Cuz that verse will be limp like a penis You should have been an aborted fetus before you were conceived I bet your names Cletus, cuz your wrong like adam and steve I'll rip you of protons so you wont be HIV positive And attack you with atoms until you bleed, and bound you like photons And stick you up like an IV clip, and slip your ball sack into a clit Sorry quickest keystyle i could ever do before i left...good luck |
tht was a straight verse not bad not bad good luck to u too
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ur right my verse will be da shit//
dont even try no more u cant spit// its ur mistake no ur gonna get ripped// oh im not tryin to hurt ya feelings my bad it slipped// kid u couldnt be sik if u had h.i.vs // do us all a favor and quit rappin please// ur my bitch so bow down on ya knees// ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient // your styles passive and my shit is militiant// im gonna win evryones feelin' it// my plan is to beat ur ass and imma start revealing it// yo bitch u better quit with the attitude// bitch u should show me gratitude// u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude// even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude// your style is so old its jurrasic , so i it killed like turock (the dinousaur hunter) so get back to ur job and suck my cock look my punches got this bitch in shock// we all new from the beggining i had this battle on lock// i dont get why u even spit u must be eager to lose// i hope u dont have anything to prove// my punches connect faster than u can move// u blow and i feel sorry for u, its got me in a bad mood// i dont kno how much longer in this battle u will remain// my skill is too hott for u to maintain// after this loss you rcord will have an ugly stain// youve just been massacred youve been slain// now bow down in shame// see ya plans have been changed// ur not gonna win so its rearranged// another loss for u is nothin strange// |
uppin for votes holla uppin fo votes uppin for votes hola
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Aight Check It..
StreetSweepa: 5/10 I Dunno, You Feed OfF His Verse A Little and Your Punches Weren't Hard All The Ways Through. I've Seen Better From You. You Gotta Add Dem Metaphors and Mulits In Dat Motherfucker!! Elevate Pimpin. Wulf: 6/10 You Came Wit Sum Originality, But Your Verse Wasn't Better Than Streets, Its Just The Fact That You Had Punches and Nice Flow. You Barely Won Dis...BUt Newayz. Just Elevate! Vote - Wulf ~R~ |
i think streetsweepa lost dat one i like dat brail shyt but u aint rhyme well enuff nah mean get ya shyt well packed n shyt n keep rightin cuz da punches was kinda sik but i give streetsweepa a 4/10
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I know it wasn't my best but thanksfor the votes..
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uppin for votes come on ya'll help us finish this
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finish this up come on i'd vote if i had enough posts but i dont sorry
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breakdown for wulf:
punches 7/10 flow6/10 vocab8/10 your best line was:But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside thats pretty tight overall21/30 street: punches:7/10 flow 7/10 vocab 8/10 you best line:ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient // your styles passive and my shit is militiant// overall 22/30 both capable of better my vote: streetsweepa |
iight hereswut i think
streetsweepa flow 6/10 rhymes 7/10 punches 7/10 structure/style 8/10 overall 7.5/10 ur best line-yo bitch u better quit with the attitude// bitch u should show me gratitude// u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude// even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude// wulf flow 4/10 rhymes 6/10 punches 7/10 structure/style 5/10 overall 5.5/10 ur best line-while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt (but u gotta get ur shyt tighta homie ur shyt didnt even rhyme na mean keep workin on it) |
good battle tho na mean
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ight ight 1-1 tied, up for more votes .....................
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this battle was really close... both had good vereses...but the only thing wrong is that streetsweepa is a flyweight he should of murderd wulf but i think wulf came out strong and i think knowing that street was a flyweight he should of elevated so my vote goes to wulf
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drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115753 thanks
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yo if u thought that why didnt you post a vote maztamind come on we uppin for votes |
yo i dont know what these ppl are smokin cuz sum of there votes are wack
in my opinion this was a one sided battle Wulf ure flow was ok in places but sometimes it was off heres a perfect example: "You know i'll prevail, like i just sent you to jail screamin through the wire mayne Slip on some air max, it'll help you elevate to a higher plain" u shud keep ure lines relatively the same length ure structure was average and ure punches were gud but not spectacular Street ure flow was on but ure spit really didnt need 2 be that long i've seen u do betta but still u had sum originality in there and ure punches were merely average compared to wat u can do but they were far better than Wulf's and u had some better connection wiv ures Overall i was feelin street a lot more through the entire battle Vote -streetsweepa |
well thats 2-2...close battle yo streets whoever wins i want a rematch
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well thats 2-2...close battle yo streets whoever wins i want a rematch UPPIN
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no doubt well get a rematch fosho |
Of course i'll win this one and the other one but thats besides the point lol...Uppin for votes
Ps. Whats wit the flyweight? someone want to break down the rankings for me so i know whos ass to kick next? lol jp |
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Structure was wack, flow got better during the end, and yours was too long, like too many fillers. Vocab was weaker than Wulfs, and no many multies and personals. Although u had better punches.
Didn’t flow much, vocab is sick, punches are ok, and multies are good, there are no personals. This is hard but immo give it to…. Streetsweepa No hate, good job |
yo im going to go with wulf b/c both of the flows had simple structure, vocb, and subject matter
but the thing that stuck out to me was that wolfs lines were a lil more developed and the punces were set up better. theres not much more i can say b/c nothing here said much too me at all, it was just a lot of lines with a rhyming word at the end that lame.....both defended therselves but hardly swung any hard blows if this was a boxing match it would have went the distance with no knockout elevate(put on ya airmax) peace |
This was a really even battle, neither was much better than the other, but someone's gotta win....Wulf you had good flow, weak vocab, decent creativity, decent punches, not really any wordplay, an your opener & closer wasn't very strong
Street....you had good creativity, fair vocab, good punches(not great), no wordplay, weak openr an closer like wulf, so my vote came down to one rhyme that ladder line one this battle for you, without it you would have lost Vote: Street |
AHH BULLSHIT! nah im just playin ight 4-3 lets get some more votes
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Wulf got that one...he came more direct in my opinion,and streetsweepas shit was just way to basic for me...
vote-wulf |
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this was sed by $$TIM$$
"breakdown for wulf: punches 7/10 flow6/10 vocab8/10 your best line was:But look dont post a verse i dont want to hurt your pride Matter a fact leave cuz we need all jokes aside thats pretty tight overall21/30 street: punches:7/10 flow 7/10 vocab 8/10 you best line:ur punches will never connect and ur styles far from efficient // your styles passive and my shit is militiant// overall 22/30 both capable of better my vote: streetsweepa" I agree 100 percent |
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