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streetsweepa 04-17-04 10:51 PM

streetsweepa vrs. xXxMaztamindxXx
 
8 line min
no lin max
no crew votes
no d/r
good luck

Mixxed MC = xXxMaztamindxXx = Gh0st Mc. All DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress


streetsweepa = $$$tim$$$. Both DQ'ed and banned for cheating
-Cprogress

streetsweepa 04-17-04 11:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
8 line min
no lin max
no crew votes
no d/r
good luck


yo u gonna check in or what?

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-17-04 11:35 PM

a yo u if u fuk wit me ima spit shells like yoshi//
i master da shells like ninja turtles master roshi//(master/teacher of NT)
im 1 of da greatest nigga im sum1 u shood fear//
like watchin porno flix wit six chix im da hardest nigga in here//
i aint tryin commit a crime but da truth is u wack son//
u gonn b seein more black 9's den micheal jackson//(black 9 year old children)
nigga the truth is my words is unique//
hey fellas ima take streetsweepa n sweep him off his feet//
after this battle ima hav ma first defeat//
cuz like a burrito its a wrap nigga u beat//
nigga wen u flo ya shyt is irrelavent//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//
nigga u prolly got no life u old n got a daughter//
my flow is blazen fiya and ur shyts like frozen water//
o by the way ya kno street is a mexican//
if ya dont u could tell by the cardboard box he b flexin in//

~FiNiShA~
if u got beef ima hit u wit a taco shell//
cuz dis mexican couldn't rap a taco at taco bell//

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-17-04 11:40 PM

iight go ahead spit

streetsweepa 04-17-04 11:41 PM

iight im checkin in ho long it take you to prewrite thatb here ill beat you off the top of my head

streetsweepa 04-17-04 11:42 PM

nigga wen u flo ya shyt is irrelavent//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//
u lil bitch u took my shit from my last battle thats plagerism get your own shit

Mixxed MC 04-17-04 11:45 PM

Uh didi ut did utioh yo im not vote in on no 1 cuz i kno both of yallz so ill holla

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-17-04 11:52 PM

get da fuk outta here i dont take nobody shyt nigga pleez n ma shyt of da top of da dome

streetsweepa 04-17-04 11:56 PM

You dont gotta chance so rekonize this//
you couldnt “flow” even while you take a “piss”//
my ryhmes are to much for u to hold they break ya wrist//
quit rappin you gotta better chance of “rockin” wit “kiss”//
your punches are inaccurate all they do is miss//

my ryhmes have u broken like a calcium defficient jaw//
you lack-of-ryhmes- was your one fatal flaw//
ill clue you in; you got no chance at all//
you just wanted to “hop” but i made it a “free fall”//

the only vote u might get is outa hate//
your ryhmes are weak dot even try to retaliate//
you lost i already chose your fate//
your the definition of weak; go demonstrate//

my ryhmes are so sick there terminally ill//
its xXxMaztamindxXx that im gonna kill//
when this is over youll be left without hope or will//
rappin takes one thing u lack; its called skill//
your ryhmes are frozen but not solid so just chill//

quit actin like u hard u couldnt get hard by pullin and jerkin//
and your weak ass taco-bell shit aint workin//
after this battle u gonna be hurtin//
u cant escape me im in tha shadows lerkin//

you cant get your own words u lost like i killed u in scrabble//
why the fuck u gotta coppy shit from my other battle//
if i did that to u you would fucking taddle//

u cant sweep streetsweepa im tha king of the street //
u asked for it now im gonna fuckin bring the heat//
ur shit aint original thats why u just got beat//
u aint sweep shit ur down and im still on my feet//

gotta copy my shit outta my battle that irrelevant shit was mine

streetsweepa 04-17-04 11:59 PM

yo u little punck bitch u wanna use my shit ill feed of yours bitch u fuckin coppyed that from my flow inteeligent battle u fuckin hoe

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:01 AM

u cood tell he mexican cuz his nose like a elephant//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//

i did this just for ur faggot ass so u wont think im plagerizing ok lil bitch

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:02 AM

yea iight i aint ya momz

streetsweepa 04-18-04 12:03 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by xXxMaztamindxXx
u cood tell he mexican cuz his nose like a elephant//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//

i did this just for ur faggot ass so u wont think im plagerizing ok lil bitch

bitch shut your mouth those streetsweepa and mexican jokes are played as hell

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:04 AM

yea iight lets spit anotha round den wuts good

streetsweepa 04-18-04 12:06 AM

i give it to u that was a good ryhme but u cant just take my shit from my other battles and mexican jokes like that a played them damn taco bell jokes are played as hell

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:06 AM

sorry honey

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:08 AM

lol

but i swear to god i didnt take ya shyt yo i come up wit ma own shyt
word to ma moms

streetsweepa 04-18-04 12:09 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by xXxMaztamindxXx
lol

but i swear to god i didnt take ya shyt yo i come up wit ma own shyt
word to ma moms

its coo i was just a little pissed lol much respect though

xXxMaztamindxXx 04-18-04 12:10 AM

yea tru same herre



nuttin but luv lol

streetsweepa 04-18-04 12:10 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
its coo i was just a little pissed lol much respect though

thats what i said i that battle o i thouight u took it to use it against me

Mixxed MC 04-18-04 12:13 AM

Yo Maztamind

i told u he was madd cool
lol

im not votein srry lol 1

streetsweepa 04-18-04 12:17 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mixxed MC
Yo Maztamind

i told u he was madd cool
lol

im not votein srry lol 1



evrythangs gravy

$$$tim$$$ 04-18-04 11:34 AM

that was a pretty tight battle!!!

breakdown for maztamind: u had tight shit goin son:
ryhmes 8/10
flow7/10
punches 9/10
your best line:im 1 of da greatest nigga im sum1 u shood fear//
like watchin porno flix wit six chix im da hardest nigga in here//
that was tight

streetsweepa:
ryhmes 8/10
flow9/10
punches 8/10
i was really feelioj your flow u kept it goin allthe way through
bestline:my ryhmes are so sick there terminally ill//
its xXxMaztamindxXx that im gonna kill//
when this is over youll be left without hope or will//
rappin takes one thing u lack; its called skill//
your ryhmes are frozen but not solid so just chill//
all that was tight my votes
streetsweepa
close battle i think street almost lost it there close shit

Mixxed MC 04-18-04 12:53 PM

iight yo this was madd close butt gotta go wit Maztamind cuz he made sense Street ya shit was tight but a lil weak so i think maztamind took it

Mazta mind

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 9/10
Structure 10/10
punches 9/10

36/40

Street Flow 8/10
rhymes 8/10
structure 9/10
punches 10/10

35/40 Good WORK !! niggass Dem niggas iight 1

franchiZe 04-18-04 09:18 PM

this battle was gud with a sick performance by street and an average performance by masta. masta's flow was slightly off and his structure had room for improvement. he had some average punches thrown and they connected most of the time.
Best Line
i aint tryin commit a crime but da truth is u wack son//
u gonn b seein more black 9's den micheal jackson//
Worst Line
nigga u prolly got no life u old n got a daughter//
my flow is blazen fiya and ur shyts like frozen water//
ure wrost line was wack cuz the first line was just a made up personal so it dont work and the second line had nuthin 2 do with the setup.
Street put up a solid performance and as i said his flow and structure were top draw. he had sum gud originality in there and his punches were all hard and direct connecting well. u also used the multis in there extremely well and giving an overall excellent performance.
Vote - street

Wulf 04-19-04 08:47 PM

Man i dunno Maztamindx...isn't the master of the ninja turtles masta splinter..and master roshi the master for DBZ? sorry just my 2 cents thanks my my lil bro

i aint tryin commit a crime but da truth is u wack son//
u gonn b seein more black 9's den micheal jackson//
good line but fo real played out

street your verse wasn't anything great but it did top his in flow and punchs i dont have anything good to quote but you still get my vote cuz mazta didn't shine

VOTE STREET

Gh0St MC 04-19-04 10:34 PM

Yo i dunno i jus didnt feel streetsweepaz flo dat time imma hav 2 give it 2 Maztamindx even doe master roshi is from dragon ball Z much props to Street

Vote: XxXMaztamindXxX

Rising Sun 04-20-04 09:02 PM

sry streetsweepa gotta give this to mastermind his punch at the end was killer and he had other nicer ones
nigga wen u flo ya shyt is irrelavent//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//
tight personals. streetsweepa gotta work on his flow, vocab, and multies, but your on the right track. good spits to both of you emcees. peace. im out

streetsweepa 04-20-04 09:08 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike12Ikeda
sry streetsweepa gotta give this to mastermind his punch at the end was killer and he had other nicer ones
nigga wen u flo ya shyt is irrelavent//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//
tight personals. streetsweepa gotta work on his flow, vocab, and multies, but your on the right track. good spits to both of you emcees. peace. im out

HE STOLE THAT SHIT FROM ME

streetsweepa 04-20-04 09:15 PM

nigga wen u flo ya shyt is irrelavent//
u wack as hell im surprised u got 1 vote against flow intelligent//
thats fucked up stealin my shit ill beat hiss ass again uif he thinks he won

puertoricanelly 04-20-04 09:19 PM

ima give this to xxxMaztamindaxxx ,, he had dope punches and structure


streetsweepa yo shit was koo but poetic you didnt have that many killer punchlines
so work on Flow! and punches. overall nice spit ... long so it took some thought

OVERALL i give this battle to xxxMaztaMindaxxx

PoLiFicK 04-21-04 04:29 PM

damnn yo tight ass flow by both MCs man u got on here and tried 2 kill each other and dats wass uppp

street-u came out da gate wit some tight shit i always look at opens and u came good
some nice punches u had nice vocab and descent structure...and u had some good personals

XXX-u didnt come out stron like i expected but i give it 2 u u worked yo way back and came wit some slam hard type shit nice personals nice punches and nice structure i was feelin yo flow word up nice job pimpin..

street

bestline-ill clue you in; you got no chance at all//
you just wanted to “hop” but i made it a “free fall”//

^^ caught my eye u had a lot of shit dat couldve been da best line but dat caught my eye da most

worsteline-he didnt really have 1 i think u had some words that caught me off but yo flow was good enuff 2 keep u on track..

XXX

bestline- aint tryin commit a crime but da truth is u wack son//
u gonn b seein more black 9's den micheal jackson//(black 9 year old children)

^^ nice way 2 add da age of da kid wit michale jacksons name good creativity

worsteline-a yo u if u fuk wit me ima spit shells like yoshi//
i master da shells like ninja turtles master roshi//

^^ not feelin yo start next time do batter on yo opening

street

punches-9/10
structure-9/10
creativity-9/10
open-10/10
close-10/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9.5/10


XXX
punches-9/10
structure-9/10
creativity-10/10
open-8/10
close-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-10/10


^^^ yo start killed u man
vote-street

Killah Bwoy 04-25-04 08:48 AM

daymu this was a close battle but i liked maztaminds shit more it was pretty sick fo real dawg..i was amazed i was like.....shit lmfao yaeh mazta mind had better flow better punches and word play that michael jackson line was sick lmfao

vote:mazta


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