spitfire vs DeNounced
 

u drop 1st
no d/r votes
crew hate votes no
an u spit 1st :shoot: :shoot:

aight...ill drop in probably like 20 maybe 30 mins...

You didnt specify lines..so i will..10 lines...

This cats always startin the 'beef' but then cant handle the 'grill'-
This cats lackin the skills,the only way he'd 'drop' 'hot' is if he overdosed on E pills-
I always rape,pillage,and plunder,this cat was born to be under-
Leave you fried like frogs in summer,you lack more intellect than dumb and dumber-
levels higher then spitfire,when im done with you,youll be 'spittin through the wire'-
Names a liar,comin up aginst 5 year old girls and you couldnt get-by-her-
Your crap,tryin to come at me with punches when your throwin wrist slaps,whats wit that?-
You lack in all areas of verbal attacks,stand up and try to mack bitch you get slapped-
This Controversy your rhymes cant-hurt-me,you spit fire?,chea...whos chain are you jerking-
This kids an easy merking,try and flip the scripts but your burning,why'd your mom do it...you werent worth-birthing-

wrote it a lil quicker than i though...its on you...

I had a ten minute key....where you at man??......

shyte imma lack life if it was up to u,im in full affect like ya-yo but chu just don't know whats what an whos is who\\
u straight up like jwanna-man don't know what sex u wanna be,1st u wanted to male now u wanna be like me\\
yo ass is wacker than dirt,so wack when i tell a joke to yah it seems to hurt\\
i wonder why i must be poping E pills,shyte u on da otha hand need"em so mental can"t stay styll//
ur drivin us as in da world all crazy,yo shyte is way outa proportion shyte u a bytch worser than 2 month yr old baby\\
you sesame street fucka gayer than bigg bird,i try to spell new things out to yah in tha dictionary but u didn't understand the words\\
ahha i should feed u sum gas,dis just da begining of what i should do to u but in the long run u wouldn't last\\
yo skillz are lyrically insane,dey inflickted they pop nerves in da brain\\
hey denounced u just be explained,u just experienced an day in a life of a whoopass how is da pain\\
u like premature ejeculation ,always says things at the wrong tyme an i burn it in replacement//
u a minor crackhead waitin 4sum rock,yo life is da wait yah mind it serves then u go outta stock//
you a run 4 da worlds money,be dat first dumass fool on network televison to fuck an bunny//
ya should be quick to notice i file ya life in a box,i leave it open 4 da world we neva keep it on da lox//
yah style is single handed profection,soon as u slipp u wish u won dis battle wit no regrettions//
im a can opener ready to unseel,u a sneek-an-peek freak an waiting 4 me to open the package to stare in my grill\\
ok condum boi u be the next rubba-band man,as u open it the booty get scared an just put in 1 hand//
hhaha im oscar the myer selling hot dogs,i leave your in da microwave smack u up so bad they just reported in blood cloggs\\
i quite dis is 2 easy,im getting tired of rhyming wit dummies expecially those that are gressy//
my flow is equal to tha massive extiction of yah verbs,this means many a number far not even herd/
we gonna find u in whole bleeding worser than it rains,we take u to burry u its gonna be a closed coffin ceremony cause they couldn't find yah remains//
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eyes shut records

itte uppin 4 dem votessssss ill return da honest favor thax

Thats fucking WAY longer than 10 lines...Duhh......

This was my challenge i said 10 lines..LMFAO..people like you make me laugh..the content couldnt do the job so you doubled and a half of what my verse was..LMFAO..i pitty you...

there wan't any line limits duhhhhhhhhhhhh look at tha top were does it say line limits

nah i was just in typin mood so stop bytching an don't pitty me

This was my challenge..LOOK AT MY POST UNDER IT....

whatever man your sad..lets see the vote my ten aginst your fucking 20 LMAO..i know you doubled it on purpose to win you aint gotta lie....

Lets see the votes....

I will hit this battle up once you guys hit my battle up, I would hit yours up first but no one returns the fav.. so hit up my battle wit AKA and I will return the fav.. thx guys... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510

shyte im not going to argu but i setup therfore ur shyte didn't really count damn!!! keep goin an going uppin dem votes

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dem votessss

Spitfire...i've never seen a battle verse that long..and its uncalled for

FLOW: DeNounced had this one easy, it was a lil more complex then yours and well he kept a struture through out...Spit your flow was also on point but it got played out because of the lack of complexity

Vocab: I'd give this one to Spit he looked in his dictionary a lil more nuff said

Punchs: great punchs on both parties but what really hurt spit was the fact that he didn't keep his punchs hard through out his whole verse he came strong but die fast

This Controversy your rhymes cant-hurt-me,you spit fire?,chea...whos chain are you jerking-
This kids an easy merking,try and flip the scripts but your burning,why'd your mom do it...you werent worth-birthing-

^heh

Overall: i'm giveing this one to DeNounced, next time spit if your going to spit so many bars make sure they carry the fire all the way through with out so many fuller lines...i think thats what hurtcha the most in this battle

VOTE DeNounced

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119690

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww uppin dem votes

right this battle was tight with both playas puttin out an aight spit
both had sum gud hard punches which i like to see in a battle but i was feelin spit more and i think he got better connection wit his punches. both used sum gud vocab in there but once again i give it to spit on that one ure flow and structure was on both of u but denounced probably was a little better. i agree wit Wulf and that the only thing that spit had wrong was the shit was too long, u shud keep tha shit short and sweet and if ure gonna drag it out make it count. Still tho i'm gonna have to give my vote to Spit cuz i think he put up a slightly better overall performance.
Vote - Spit

upppppppin dem votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Pfft..better performance?...you said my verse was better in the explanation then voted for him...aight..opinions opinions...its all good...

more votes....

uppin dem vottttttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeessssssss

First of all.

20 lines to his 10 aint gonna win it.

Denounced had better punches, simple as that.

Punches- Denounced.
Similies- Denounced.


Only 2 things that matter in a battle homie.

Vote- Denounced.

vocab-spitfire got this but if u spit an hour long flow it should have some vocab in it

punchs- both had good punchs but spit you did fall off on alot of punchs turned into fillers and denounced kept em comin at you so denounced gets this

wordplay-denounced had some good wordplay made his punchs hit harder

overall thank it was a wierd battle all that shit for 1 verse is unnecessary coulda made 2 out of that but i tank denounced came harder all around with consitent punchs but spit u are elvatin just keep practicin

vote denounced

Breakdown:
Punches: De
Metas: De
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: De
Disses: Tie

Overall-Tight Battle But Im Goin With Denounced On This One.The Best Parts Of His Verse Were The Opening & Ending.He Used A Few Good Metas & Had Some Good Punches Too.He Jus Needs To Work On His Complexity.Spitfire Did Have Some Good Punches But Not Enough To Win It.Also His Complexity Was Lacking A Bit.

Vote-Denounced

Spitfire your flow did not rhyme E.Xhhaha im oscar the myer selling hot dogs,i leave your in da microwave smack u up so bad they just reported in blood cloggs\\
i quite dis is 2 easy,im getting tired of rhyming wit dummies expecially those that are gressy//
And Denounced had better punchez
vote-Denounced

Hmm thats 5 votes but the poll only says 3 guys gotta use the poll...uppin

I give dat to DeNounced but big props 2 spitfire

one more vote people...please vote...just some words and a click...uppin...

and thanks for the votes guys...appreciated...

Ayo man, that niggih ate the fuck outta you kid with them bars, he gave bout 9 or 10 bars of slashes and scars. Ayo the punchlines speak fah they got damned self, and the meta's war real. I like that ish yo, thats REAL THOROUGH. :shoot:

Well Denouced takes this one, I didn't really expect to read a novel before I clicked to vote on this shit but oh well.

Spitfire I really was not a fan of every line startin with "you ......."
EX.

yo ass is wacker than dirt,so wack when i tell a joke to yah it seems to hurt\\
i wonder why i must be poping E pills,shyte u on da otha hand need"em so

ur drivin us as in da world all crazy,yo shyte is way outa proportion shyte u a bytch worser than 2 month yr old baby\\

you sesame street fucka gayer than bigg bird,i try to spell new things out to yah in tha dictionary but u didn't understand the words\\

u like premature ejeculation ,always says things at the wrong tyme an i burn it in replacement//
u a minor crackhead waitin 4sum rock,yo life is da wait yah mind it serves then u go outta stock//
you a run 4 da worlds money,be dat first dumass fool on network televison to fuck an bunny//

try to mix it up,

Denounced had better flow, and punches, I wasn't really feel'n spit's, it was to the point. Spit's was way to long, there are bar limits for a reason.

u straight up like jwanna-man don't know what sex u wanna be,1st u wanted